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Ek koshish..lovers ko samajhne ki
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Smile Ek koshish..lovers ko samajhne ki - 17th June 2004, 05:08 PM

Likh na paaya hai
Na kabhi payega "koi"
PYAAR ki gehraayi ko
Na samajh payega "koi"

us KOI mein shaamil
Nahi hain hum tum;
kyunki un gehraayion mein
Doob jo chuke hain hum tum....


Kshitij kisi ne paya hai
Na kabhi payega "koi"
Chahaton ki udhaano ko
Na samajh payega "koi"

us KOI mein shaamil
Nahi hain hum tum
kyunki un unchaayion mein
Ud jo chuke hain hum tum.....


Jaan na paya hai
Na kabhi payega "koi"
mohabbat kya hoti hai
Na samajh payega "koi"

us KOI mein shaamil
Nahi hain hum tum
kyunki door hoker bhi
Paas ho chuke hain hum tum......


koshish ko hamari please nakarna mat.........gar pasand aaye to likhna zaroor ek khat....
   
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3rd July 2004, 11:51 PM

Likh na paaya hai
Na kabhi payega "koi"
PYAAR ki gehraayi ko
Na samajh payega "koi"

us KOI mein shaamil
Nahi hain hum tum;
kyunki un gehraayion mein
Doob jo chuke hain hum tum....

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Smile hello... - 4th July 2004, 01:35 PM

hi!!!!
firstly to i would like 2 welcome u 2 this place...i think u r new here...i hope i am right...secondly thank u so so so much for appreciating my effort..i had posted this quite ago and i had not expected anyone 2 reply 2 this...thank u so much....bye 4 now!....take care!


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superb shivan!
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Love superb shivan! - 4th July 2004, 03:52 PM

h! shivan!



well wat shud i tell u abt the words u have mention...?


i dnt know abt others bt those words reveals all tht wat

i had been wondering here n there....!!!!


shivani thks 4 sharing those beautifull words as tht mean a

lot to me....!!!


be!maan mohabbat.....!!!

Sal!m.....!!!
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Smile hi - 19th July 2004, 02:08 PM

hello salimji...thank u so so so much for liking my composition and it gave me a lot of pleasure to know that u lked it so much...and i am xtremely SORRY for replying so late...bye 4 now!...take care!


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