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Arrow Mere saray khat jala do, mere sab nishaN mita do - 14th September 2008, 07:27 AM

M'ray saray khat jala do, mere sab nishaN mitaa do
Meri chaah to bhula di, m'ra naam bhi bhulaa do


t'ri aur manzilaiN haiN, m're aur raastay haiN
kabhi mil nahi sakengaiN, abhi haath hi hilaa do


tuje chahtay haiN lakhoN, tujhi pe fida hazaroN
tum apne dil ka gulshan kisi aur se sajaado


tuje maiN ne dil se chaaha to ye meri hi khata ti
yunhi thorr ker m'raa dil m'ray jurm ki sazaa do


shab-e-hijr gungunaalo, kisi meethi dhun maiN gaalo
jisay sunn ke ro parhay sab koi esaa geeT sunaa do


abhi zindagi parhi hai, abhi haal kiya banega
tuje dil se maiN bhula dooN, muje bas yehi duaa do


kisi din jo hokay tanhaa, tujay apna aap kosay
m'ri yaad phiR jab aaye, muje dil se ik sadaa do


abhi hal-e-dil na pocho, abhi zakhm sab haray haiN
kabhi mil ke sab kahengaiN "ihsan" usay bataa do



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14th September 2008, 07:49 PM

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ihsan Saahab!

adab-o-ihtiram

aaj aapki yeh khoobsurat Ghazal nazae nawaaz huii, waah! kyaa khuub Ghazal hai.. iske sabhi ash'aar behtareen hai.n. kis kis sher ki tarif ki jaaye? meri dili dad aur mubaarakbad qubool keejiyegaa..

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15th September 2008, 05:54 AM

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M'ray saray khat jala do, mere sab nishaN mitaa do
Meri chaah to bhula di, m'ra naam bhi bhulaa do


t'ri aur manzilaiN haiN, m're aur raastay haiN
kabhi mil nahi sakengaiN, abhi haath hi hilaa do


tuje chahtay haiN lakhoN, tujhi pe fida hazaroN
tum apne dil ka gulshan kisi aur se sajaado


tuje maiN ne dil se chaaha to ye meri hi khata ti
yunhi thorr ker m'raa dil m'ray jurm ki sazaa do


shab-e-hijr gungunaalo, kisi meethi dhun maiN gaalo
jisay sunn ke ro parhay sab koi esaa geeT sunaa do


abhi zindagi parhi hai, abhi haal kiya banega
tuje dil se maiN bhula dooN, muje bas yehi duaa do


kisi din jo hokay tanhaa, tujay apna aap kosay
m'ri yaad phiR jab aaye, muje dil se ik sadaa do


abhi hal-e-dil na pocho, abhi zakhm sab haray haiN
kabhi mil ke sab kahengaiN "ihsan" usay bataa do



Ihsan saheb,
shayri.com per khushamadeed....intahayi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hain apne....dil se daad khubool kijiye...wakay dard jhalak raha hain har sher me....har sher tareef ke khabil hai....superb....

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15th September 2008, 04:08 PM

ihsan sahib !

ek baar fir daad dene ko hazir huN !

behad purasar ghazal likhi hai .. abhi tay karnaa muhskil lag raha hai ki jo manzar
dekh ke aaya huN vo jiyada khoobsorat hai ya jo nazaroN ke saamne haiN vo ..?

khair maine pehle bhi kaha thaa aap bahut khoobsorat likhte haiN ..

ek khoobsorat ghazal pe mubaraQbaad aur

daad Qabool farmaayeiN

likhte rahiye

apna khyaal rakhiye !


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Bohot shukriya Mayank sahb - 16th September 2008, 06:30 AM

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mohtaram

ihsan Saahab!

adab-o-ihtiram

aaj aapki yeh khoobsurat Ghazal nazae nawaaz huii, waah! kyaa khuub Ghazal hai.. iske sabhi ash'aar behtareen hai.n. kis kis sher ki tarif ki jaaye? meri dili dad aur mubaarakbad qubool keejiyegaa..

khair andaish

Mayank

salam

main tah-e-dil se apka shukurguzaar hoon k ap ne itne khuloos ke sath is kawish ki tareef ki.
meri dua hai ke allah apko bohot bohot khush rakhay
bohot shukriya


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Ihsan saheb,
shayri.com per khushamadeed....intahayi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hain apne....dil se daad khubool kijiye...wakay dard jhalak raha hain har sher me....har sher tareef ke khabil hai....superb....

keep writing and keep sharing with us...

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salam
bohot shukriya zainy
allah apko hamesha khush rakhay


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ihsan sahib !

ek baar fir daad dene ko hazir huN !

behad purasar ghazal likhi hai .. abhi tay karnaa muhskil lag raha hai ki jo manzar
dekh ke aaya huN vo jiyada khoobsorat hai ya jo nazaroN ke saamne haiN vo ..?

khair maine pehle bhi kaha thaa aap bahut khoobsorat likhte haiN ..

ek khoobsorat ghazal pe mubaraQbaad aur

daad Qabool farmaayeiN

likhte rahiye

apna khyaal rakhiye !

salam
ek baar phir bohot shukriya adaa kerna chahta hoon
hamesha khush rahain


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22nd September 2008, 08:26 PM

tuje maiN ne dil se chaaha to ye meri hi khata ti
yunhi thorr ker m'raa dil m'ray jurm ki sazaa do


abhi zindagi parhi hai, abhi haal kiya banega
tuje dil se maiN bhula dooN, muje bas yehi duaa do



ye do sher bahut hi achche lage puri gajal khuubsurat hai,magar ye do kucch khas rahe,daad hajir hai,likhte rahe,share karte rahe,sukriya,........baagi


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tuje maiN ne dil se chaaha to ye meri hi khata ti
yunhi thorr ker m'raa dil m'ray jurm ki sazaa do

abhi zindagi parhi hai, abhi haal kiya banega
tuje dil se maiN bhula dooN, muje bas yehi duaa do


ye do sher bahut hi achche lage puri gajal khuubsurat hai,magar ye do kucch khas rahe,daad hajir hai,likhte rahe,share karte rahe,sukriya,........baagi
bohot shukriya pazeerayi ka baagi,,,,
Allah apko apnay saye main rakhay
bohot bohot khush rahain


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8th November 2008, 01:28 AM

Bohat khoob bohat acha likha hai aap ne .......likhte rahiye


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bohot shukriya apka
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