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something from my heart - 3rd December 2003, 10:15 PM

Friends, yesterday I took a day off from my school and I was reading an English novel I really liked however that novel touched my heart and I wrote these lines

Har rooj jeeta hoon main ; HAr rooj marta hoon main,
Har cheej hai merer paas; fhir bhi kisi ki talash main rahtan hoon main ,

Kaash app hoten hamare paas ; too kuch aur hi hote hum;
Jab bath kar sochta hoon akele main to tanhan sa rah jatta hoon main
Har rooj jeeta hoon main ; HAr rooj marta hoon main,

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Bohot khubsurat. Touching. Likhte rahiyega. Thanks. Take care. God bless you.


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Cool thanks - 4th December 2003, 11:07 PM

hi simul thanks for your response thanks much again . I appreciate your opinion
if you keep on encouraging me then I will keep am writing like that

thanks much once again


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