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jaane kahan kho gaye hum - 6th July 2005, 10:40 AM

juda hona tha humko ar aap juda ho gaye,
Pyar ke is khel mein hum yahan tanha ho gaye,
Bahkana chaha meine yaad mein apne dil ko,
Par teri yaad sine mein rakhkar hum bhi jaane kahan kho gaye.


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6th July 2005, 12:41 PM

Saajan Ji,

Bahoot khub..

kya baat hai...

But i feel yeh shayri DARD mai zyada fit hoti shayaad..

likte rehna

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jaane kahan kho gaye hum - 7th July 2005, 02:08 AM

VERY NICE.........KEEP IT UP
   
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7th July 2005, 07:22 AM

beautiful shayri...

hum bhi kuch aaise khayaalon main khoye hue hain...

pyar ke saath dard kyon hota hai? mystery hai!


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