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Chalan nahin..... - 23rd July 2010, 03:47 PM
Ghazal

Subha ki kiran nahin
Jaagta sehen nahin

Chaand bhi wo kho giya
Taaroan ka gagan nahin

Kaantae,sirf kaantae hain
Phooloan ka chaman nahin

Bhaayee hai khafa,khafa
Khush koi behen nahin

Jis Main piyaar tha kabhi
Baqi wo zehen nahin

Kal kii baat aur thi
Aaj wo chalan nahin

Laaj sae jhuki hoi
Koi ab dulhan nahin

"RAZ"shayri main bhi
Meetti wo chubhan nahin

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very nice creation Razia ji
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Koi ab dulhan nahin

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Yeh 2 sher bade hi sachche aur achche rahe........daad kabool kare apne is dost ki.

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Laaj sae jhuki hoi
Koi ab dulhan nahin

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24th July 2010, 02:48 PM
hai razia kafi achi rahi

ye sher to bhot khub hai


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24th July 2010, 03:29 PM
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Ghazal

Subha ki kiran nahin
Jaagta sehen nahin

Chaand bhi wo kho giya
Taaroan ka gagan nahin

Kaantae,sirf kaantae hain
Phooloan ka chaman nahin

Bhaayee hai khafa,khafa
Khush koi behen nahin

Jis Main piyaar tha kabhi
Baqi wo zehen nahin

Kal kii baat aur thi
Aaj wo chalan nahin

Laaj sae jhuki hoi
Koi ab dulhan nahin

"RAZ"shayri main bhi
Meetti wo chubhan nahin

Razia Yasmeen RAZ
raziaji

bahut hi saral sabdo itani gahrai se likhane ka hunar rakhty hai aap

apki har kavia mujhe bahut achi lagty hai

sada likhate rahe

mahfl ko rosan karte rahe

ye lines bahut hi achi lagy Kal kii baat aur thi
Aaj wo chalan nahin

 Laaj sae jhuki hoi
Koi ab dulhan nahin

"RAZ"shayri main bhi
Meetti wo chubhan nahin


daad kabul kijiye


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