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~*Ho Jaaaye.....*~ -
26th December 2012, 10:32 AM
Koii Raat Aisi Abb Aaye ke Sahar ho jaaye,
Yaa.N to har Sub'ha ko Khursheed, Qamar ho jaaye. [Sahar=sub'ha, morning] [Khursheed= Sun] [Qamar=Moon] ye jo Rakhtaa hooN maiN Aatish-Kadah ko Seene me, Koi hairat na ho gar Khaak Jigar ho jaaye. [Aatish-qadah= Fireplace, Furnace, Conflagration] [Jigar= heart, soul, courage] Narm Lahze se na Buzdil Mujhe Samjho yaaroN, Taish me AauN to Yalgaar-e-Samar ho jaaye. [Samar= fruits as in Urdu, War as in hindi, here it is used as a War] Kuch to ye Log bhi Toofaan Ut'haa deyte haiN, YooN bhi mumkin kahaaN chup-chaap basar ho jaae. Tere Kooche me jo Shiqve na Sune JaaeNge, To ye behtar hai Qalam "Shaad" ka Sar ho jaaye. [Koocha= passage, Lane] ~Shaad~ |
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26th December 2012, 10:44 AM
Dear Shoaib....bahut accha likha hai aapne, hame urdu lafzoN ki jayada jaankari nahi hai. par aapne saath meiN un lafzoN ke matalb likhe hai so behad shukriya....!
duaoN ke saath dii  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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26th December 2012, 10:47 AM
Shaad bhaa'ii:
namaste! aaj subhaa subhaa aapki taazaah Ghazal bazm meiN deKhi beHad KhuShii huii... aur janaab aapka andaaz-e-bayaan umdaah rahaa.. yuunhi bazm ki Shaan ko baDhaate rahiye aage bhee... dil se daad aur mubaaraqbaad...! KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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26th December 2012, 07:17 PM
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27th December 2012, 12:40 AM
aaddab miyaaN,
achchi Ghazal kahi hai aapne, mubarakbaad tasleem farmaaiye ek aNdeshaa sa hai mujhe jiski ittelaah maiN ek do roz meiN pm ke zariye aapko kar duuNgaa rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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27th December 2012, 02:21 AM
ye jo Rakhtaa hooN maiN Aatish-Kadah ko Seene me,
Koi hairat na ho gar Khaak Jigar ho jaaye. mind-blowing bhai.... just mind-blowing....... yeh verse to bas kamaal hai bhai.. bas kamal........ tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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27th December 2012, 07:57 AM
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WaaH ! Kyaa Kamaal Ke Ashaar Hue HaiN ... BehtareeN Ghazal ! Bakamaal !! Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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27th December 2012, 05:05 PM
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bahot bahot shukriyaa dhaval ji.. jo aap ne is kalaam ko is laayaq samjha... Mujeh bhi behad khushi haasil ho rahi hai, aapko yahaan maujood dekh kar... aate raheN.. aur apna khyaal rakkheN.... Shukriyaa Shaad.... |
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28th December 2012, 09:53 AM
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Tasleemaat janaab... Behad mashkoor o mamnoon hoon jo is adna se kalaam ko muqammal darja ataa farmaane aap bazm me tashreef laaye.... aapki daad aur duaaon ka fardan fardan shukriyaa... bahr'haal jis andeshe ki baaat aapne ki hai.... shaayad main use samajh bhi raha hoon... aur shaayd aap bhi samajh rahe hain... khair mujhe khushi hui ye jaan kar ke Ghazal apne maqsad me qamyab huiii... shukriyaa... aate rahen... Shaad.... |
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28th December 2012, 09:49 PM
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Behad mashkoor hoon Hassan Saab.... aapki aamad aur pazeerai pe... Behad masarrat bhi haasil hoti hai ke ab aap active ho gaye hain Masha Allah.. Aur guzaarish aur ummeed hai ke aage bhi aap ke deedaare mubaaraq hote Rahenge... khush rahiye bhai. Shaad... |
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28th December 2012, 10:40 PM
Narm Lahze se na Buzdil Mujhe Samjho yaaroN,
Taish me AauN to Yalgaar-e-Samar ho jaaye. bahut khub शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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29th December 2012, 09:04 PM
Armaan tha, tere saath zindagi bitane ka,
Shikwa hai, khud ke khamosh reh jaane ka, Diwangi is se badi, aur kya hogi, Aaj bhi intezaar hai, tere aane ka... |
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30th December 2012, 10:11 AM
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bahot bahot shukriyaaa....... aapki be-panaah muhabbat ke liye Mehra saab... bahot khushi hui aaj aapko yahaan dekh kar..... aate rahen... shukriyaa Shaad... |
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30th December 2012, 10:23 AM
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bahot bahot shukriyaaa pasandeedgi ke liye Sakhi jee.......... bahot khushi hui aapko yahan dekh kar... aati rahiyegaa.... apna khayal rakhiye... Shaad... |
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31st December 2012, 03:54 PM
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31st December 2012, 05:39 PM
Shaad Sahab Achi Ghazal Hai..........
Aik Baat Kahun GA... ye jo Rakhtaa hooN maiN Aatish-Kadah ko Seene me, Koi hairat na ho gar Khaak Jigar ho jaaye. "KHAAK Jigar Ho Jaaye" Ki Jagah Agar " RAAKH" Jigar Ho Jaaye Hota TO Kaisa Tha....? Aatish Kadah Jala Kar Raakh Karay Ga Na Ke KHaak.... Daad Qabool Farmaaiye Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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31st December 2012, 07:17 PM
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haan ye bhi acchaa hai... mera matlab hai behtar hai... Chaliye kar ke dekhte hain..... Shaad... |
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31st December 2012, 07:23 PM
Dusra aur teesra, dono sher bohat pasand aaye mujhe......waisay puri ghazal hi khoobsurat hai...yuhi likhtay rahiye...
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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31st December 2012, 11:44 PM
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AsSalamAlykum Shaad Bhaee! Buhat aala wa khoobsoorat kalaam le aayay aap! Buhat zabardast intekhaab e alfaaz, pur asar ashaar. Shakil bhaee say muttafiq hoon par hurriyat e takhayyul ka zyaada qaayal hoon isiliyay mayree infiraadee raaye mayn koee kamee nahe laykin ulama kay nazdeek shaayad ho. Bahr haal buhat mutaasir huay aapkay is kalaam say! Yoon he mahfil raushan kartay rahayn! Duagoh Ahmad |
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2nd January 2013, 06:28 PM
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2nd January 2013, 06:29 PM
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5th January 2013, 01:56 PM
Narm Lahze se na Buzdil Mujhe Samjho yaaroN,
Taish me AauN to Yalgaar-e-Samar ho jaaye. wah bahot khoob ................................................. 
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7th January 2013, 01:23 PM
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Bahot accha lagaa aapko yahaan dekh kar.. aati rahen... khush raheN.. Shaad... |
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8th January 2013, 10:08 AM
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 ..... bahot acchaa lagaa aaj aapkko yahaan dekh kar.. aati rahiye... khush rahiye...Shaad... |
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19th March 2015, 11:56 AM
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aapkI is ghazal ko padhna kisi treat se kam nahi raha..... Har ek sher seedha dil me utar gaya...kya kahoob ehsaas hain...aur hamesha ki tarah wahi bemisaal andaz e bayaan.waaaaah...Bahut lutf aaya padhkar... dher sari daad aur duayein kubool karein meri taraf se... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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19th March 2015, 07:44 PM
Waah Shoaib bhai kya kehne ..AAj kal Madhu ji discovery pe haiN aur sdc meiN bhooli bisree ghazaleiN talash kar pesh ker rahi haiN ..
Madhu ji aap ki is mehnat ke liye aapko meri shubkamnayeiN. Sanjay Sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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19th March 2015, 08:14 PM
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aab kya karoon der se aayi is parivaar me..to ab apne pasandeeda shayron ki shayri dhoondh ke hee padhni padegi na..ya yoon kahiye ki kuch seekhne hee milega isi bahane.... shubhkaamnao ke liye dhanywaad....अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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20th March 2015, 07:02 PM
Mai pahle to Madhu ji ko shukriya kahna chahunga ki unki is discovery ki wajah se Shoaib bhai ki itni khoobsurat gazal padhne ka mauka.mila...
Shaad bhai waaaaaah kya gazal kahi hai aapne...behad umdah... nacheez ki daad kubul farmaiyega Aapka apna Bhushan Bhushan Joshi |
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26th March 2015, 10:29 AM
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 mere liye bhi ise padhnaa behad khushi ka sabab huaa itne arse ke baad... inaayat huii hai aapki mujh par, jo aapka khuloos is darjaa mujhe miltaa raha hai, aur merii nazmon aur ghazlon ko aap doston ka pyaar aur qurb naseeb hotaa rahaa hai... aage bhii yunhii saath dete rahiyegaa..... khush rahiye..... and thanks once again... mukhlis |
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26th March 2015, 10:31 AM
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waaqai madhu ji kaafii acchaaa kaam kar rahii hai... sabse aham baat bahot waqqt de rahi hain SDC ko.... main unka shukrguzaaar hoon.. aur ummeed krta hoon baakki members bhii apna keemtee waqt apnee beshkeemtii site ko den... shukriyaa..... |
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26th March 2015, 10:33 AM
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tahe dil se mashkoor o mamnoon hoon aapka Bhushan saaahab..... aap doston ka saath hi hai jo likhne ko majboor karta rahta hai, warna is duniyaa me rakkhaa kyaaa hai... aate rahiyega bhaai.... khush rahiye..... Shaaad... |
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27th March 2015, 04:09 AM
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koi alfaaz kafi nahin hogi tareif karne ke liye.. bas padhne se jo khushi mili usko izhaar kar raha hoon.. aapke likhe mainon se aapki nazm/bazm ko padne aur samajhne mein aur zyada mazaa aata hai.. Shukriya Shaad bhai.. Beshumaar likhte rahein.. Zinda hai ye Jism mera,
Ki koi phir apni Mohabbat se, Jeene ki nayi wajah de dein... The Demon Prince...  |
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27th March 2015, 10:37 AM
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behad shukrguzaar hoon aapka bhai jo aapki muhabbbaten hame naseeb hotii hain.... aapko apni bazm me dekh kar is darjaa khushi mili hai ke main bayaan nahi kar saktaa..... aur rahi baat meaning likhne ki to aainda se main is baat ka khyaaal raakhunga ke tough words ki meaning likhaa karoon.... ek baar fir se bahot bahot shukriyaa aate rahiyegaa..... Shaad...... |
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