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koi sham gher bhe raha kero - 30th March 2005, 11:45 PM

Yunhi be-sabab na phira karo,koi shaam gher bhi raha karo

Wooh ghazal ki sachi kitab hai isse chupke chupke parha karo

Koi haath bhi na milae ga jo gale milo ge lapak ke

Yeh nae mizaj ka shaher hai zara faasle se mila karo

Abhi raah mein kae mor hain koi aae ga koi jae ga

Tumhain jis ne dil se bhula diya usse bhoolne ki dua karo

Mughe ishtiar se lagti hain yeh mohabbaton ki kahaniyan

Jo kaha nahi wooh suna karo,jo suna nahi wooh kaha karo

Kabhi husun parda nashin bhi ho zara ashiqana libas mein

Jo mein ban-sanwar ke kahin chaloon mere saath tum bhi chala karo

Nahi be-hijab wooh chand sa ke nazar ka koi asar na ho

Isse itni garmi shauq se bari dear tak na takka karo

Yeh khizan ki zad si misal mein jo udas pear ke pass hain

Yeh tumhare gher ki bahar hai isse ansoon se hara karo
********QATEEL SHIFAI***********


Two people in one,
one happy, one sad,
two sides of me,
one mad and one glad,
there's only one side,
I try to let show;
my feelings inside,
the others dont know,
I m two people in one,
as strange as that sounds,
the real me inside no one has found.
   
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Waaaahhhhhhh - 30th March 2005, 11:48 PM

Wah wahhhhhhh bohat khoob chuha ji
   
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Hi Zuha Ali - 31st March 2005, 09:22 AM

Hi Zuha,
Assalamoalaekum.....
Aapne jo likha woh wakai tareef k kaabil hai but tareef k liye words kam hain isliye sirf itna kahoonga ki yeh mere dil ko chooo gaya.....
Thanks for share with us....

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31st March 2005, 03:23 PM

Bohut shukriya app ko mere post pasand aye..waise iss mai srif srif inthikab mera tha...kalam to qateel shifai jee ka tha.... ..... kher app ke tareef ka behad shukriya ...


Two people in one,
one happy, one sad,
two sides of me,
one mad and one glad,
there's only one side,
I try to let show;
my feelings inside,
the others dont know,
I m two people in one,
as strange as that sounds,
the real me inside no one has found.
   
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31st March 2005, 03:26 PM

Hi Zuha Ji,

Ek bohot hi behtereen nazm. Shukriya isse yaha pesh karne ka.


Luvs,

Salim

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Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you.

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31st March 2005, 03:32 PM

Koi haath bhi na milae ga jo gale milo ge lapak ke

Yeh nae mizaj ka shaher hai zara faasle se mila karo


Waaaaah...............!

Zuha Ali ji....mazaa aa gaya....poori ki poori ghazal...bahut pasand aayi....eisi nasihatieN to koi bahut chaahne waala hi de sakta hai.....Qateek Shifai ji ko mera salaam.

or aapko bhi is behtreen rachna ke liye.

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Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.

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Re: koi sham gher bhe raha kero - 31st March 2005, 03:35 PM

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Yunhi be-sabab na phira karo,koi shaam gher bhi raha karo

Wooh ghazal ki sachi kitab hai isse chupke chupke parha karo

Koi haath bhi na milae ga jo gale milo ge lapak ke

Yeh nae mizaj ka shaher hai zara faasle se mila karo

Abhi raah mein kae mor hain koi aae ga koi jae ga

Tumhain jis ne dil se bhula diya usse bhoolne ki dua karo

Mughe ishtiar se lagti hain yeh mohabbaton ki kahaniyan

Jo kaha nahi wooh suna karo,jo suna nahi wooh kaha karo

Kabhi husun parda nashin bhi ho zara ashiqana libas mein

Jo mein ban-sanwar ke kahin chaloon mere saath tum bhi chala karo

Nahi be-hijab wooh chand sa ke nazar ka koi asar na ho

Isse itni garmi shauq se bari dear tak na takka karo

Yeh khizan ki zad si misal mein jo udas pear ke pass hain

Yeh tumhare gher ki bahar hai isse ansoon se hara karo
********QATEEL SHIFAI***********


zuha ali,

pahlay to yaha is pariwaar maie tumhara swagat hai........
ab qateel shifai ji ki yah gajal meri bhi pasand ki gajal hai... ise shere karne k liye shukria.....
aur khaas yah baat ki...... jo rachna aapki nahi woh aapne jaahir kiya is baat k liye aapka behad dhanywaad meri aur khas kar k pulkit ki aur se bhi......

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31st March 2005, 03:36 PM

Yeh khizan ki zad si misal mein jo udas pear ke pass hain
Yeh tumhare gher ki bahar hai isse ansoon se hara karo


Amazingg...Thanks dear for sharing a really beautiful nazm of one of my fav Qatell shifai jee... He is a master when it comes to such nazms

Daad aap le lijiye is khoobsurat nagine se milane ke liye... chun laati rahiyega


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
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1st April 2005, 07:53 AM

SALAM FRIENDZ,

APP SUB KA BOHUT BOHUT SHUKRIYA KAY APP NAY MERE POST KO PASAND KYA.... ....THANX


Two people in one,
one happy, one sad,
two sides of me,
one mad and one glad,
there's only one side,
I try to let show;
my feelings inside,
the others dont know,
I m two people in one,
as strange as that sounds,
the real me inside no one has found.
   
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Its Not Qateel Shifai's Ghazal
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Its Not Qateel Shifai's Ghazal - 28th May 2008, 12:11 PM

First of all ..mera salaam / namastey tamaam logon ko...

Second aap sab ko yeh ghazal buhut pasand hey to apni daad us shaair ko dien jis ney yeh ghazal likhi hey,...yeh ghazal Qateel shifaai ki nahin hey ..balkey Dr.Basheer Badar ki hey...

third aik shair mien kuch ghalti hey ..jo galey milo gey "lapak" ke !! hahaha
lapak key nahin is tarah to is ki music nodes bhi kharaab ho jaayien gi jisey wazan kehtey hien...yeh shair yoon hey...


Koi haath bhi na milae ga jo gale milo ge Tapaak se

Yeh nae mizaj ka shaher hai zara faasle se mila karo

Good day !

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