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19th August 2014, 05:25 PM
aKsar maiN yahi sochtaa huN
kaise bhuluN tuje...
tujhse ab koi rishtaa nhi hai meraa
ab naa hi koi baat hai
lekin dil hai ki tujhe bhulnaa nhi chahtaa
bahut koshish ki tuje bhulne ki
lekin teraa saayaa saath saath rahtaa hai
yaadoN meiN tu hi rahti hai
khwaaboN me bhi tu hi rahti ahi
aaNkheN baNd nhi karnaa chahtaa
pataa hai sirf aur sirf
tum hi dikhaai deti ho
kabhi un aNjaan si galiyoN meiN
kabhi baaNheN phailaayeN
to kabhi pass bulaate huye
kaise samjhaauN maiN es dil ko
ki tum ab pass nhi ho mere
naa hi tum ab meri ho
par dil kahtaa hai
ki tum aaj bhi meri ho
baavjud eske ki tuMhe dekheN
huye barsoN beet gye haiN
lekin aaNkhoN meiN
aaj bhi teraa hi surur hai
teraa hi nashaa khyaaloN meiN
jaise ki tu aas pass hi hai mere
mere khwaab bhi
mujhe naa jaane kahaN le jaate hai ?
jahaN jahaN dur dur tak koi naa ho
hai to tu aur sirf tu
ab kaise khwaaboN se bahar aauN
kaise tujh ko bhuluN
maiN khwaaboN se bahaar aana chahtaa huN
sach maiN tujhe bhulnaa chahtaa huN
par dil hai ki kuch sunataa hi nahi.....................
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19th August 2014, 05:32 PM
kabhi un aNjaan si galiyoN meiN
kabhi baaNheN phailaayeN
to kabhi pass bulaate huye
waaaaaaaaaaaaH!!! Rajeev bhai,
ishQ ka ehsaas khoob jhalak raha hai aap ki nazm meiN....
quoted lines humeN majboor kar rahi haiN,
ke hum bhi ik haseeN khwaab dekheN,
aur apne 'un' se milan yaQeeni banayeN!
daad hi daad.. reps added!
Likhte rahiye,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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19th August 2014, 06:04 PM
rajeev jee.....i m speechless....truly amazing....bahut kuch milta hua mere jasbato se....
reps.added karta hu agar ho jaye to..
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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19th August 2014, 09:43 PM
Wah bahut khoob rajeev ji...
Bahut hi gahare ehsaas. .......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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19th August 2014, 10:46 PM
Dil aur dimaag ki kashmakash bahut hi barreki se bayan ki aapne ,,,
Ravangi bahut achi thi ..Sach mano Rajeev ji mera dil kehta hai aap ek din
Film Industry ke liye likhoge ..
Mujhe aap ki ye rachna mein Silsila film ki Main aur meri tanhai wali chaap dikhai di ..
Aur main imagine kar raha tha ki Amitabh bachchan ji ise recite kar rahe hote tau kaisa lagta ,,Badhai mere bhai ....
Ye poem bhabhi ko mat perva dena , verna khair nahin ...Dil se Daad
Sanjay sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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22nd August 2014, 01:04 AM
sundar ehsaas Rajeev ji
thanks for sharing
regards
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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22nd August 2014, 07:51 PM
Rajeeev bhai..... aapko padhnaa hamesha se meraa pasandeeda kaam raha hai...
aapki kaavish har bandishon se door hotii hain..... magar sacche ehsaas bayaan kartii hain..... mujhe hameshaa yahi ehsaas hota hai aapke kalaam ko padh kar ke kaash main bhi aisaa soch paata, aisaa likh paataa...... bas duaa hai ke aap hameshaa khush rahen aur yunhi likhte rahen...
Shaad.....
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23rd August 2014, 12:47 PM
bahut khoobsurat ahsaas.......................!!
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th August 2014, 10:50 AM
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Originally Posted by Hassan
kabhi un aNjaan si galiyoN meiN
kabhi baaNheN phailaayeN
to kabhi pass bulaate huye
waaaaaaaaaaaaH!!! Rajeev bhai,
ishQ ka ehsaas khoob jhalak raha hai aap ki nazm meiN....
quoted lines humeN majboor kar rahi haiN,
ke hum bhi ik haseeN khwaab dekheN,
aur apne 'un' se milan yaQeeni banayeN!
daad hi daad.. reps added!
Likhte rahiye,
DuaooN ke saath,
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hassan bhaai........aapkaa bahut bahut shukriyaa...
yuN hi aate raheN, apnaa pyaar barsaate raheN...
shukriyaa........
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26th August 2014, 11:07 AM
Bahut he behtreen Kalam Rajeev ji... Kuch alag Milta h Aap ki poetry me... Keep writing
YAHI MEAYAARE TIJARAT RAHA TO HAR TAJIR
BARF KE BAAT LIYE ,DHOOP ME BAITHA HOGA
POET UNKNOWN
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10th September 2014, 01:17 PM
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rajeev jee.....i m speechless....truly amazing....bahut kuch milta hua mere jasbato se....
reps.added karta hu agar ho jaye to..
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Shukriyaa Aru ji..........
yuN hi saath bane raheN........
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10th September 2014, 10:36 PM
Bilkul seedhi sachi baat.........bohut khubsurat.
Rajiv ji pehla pyar bhulaye nahi bhulta, haan ek aisa waqt hai jab insaan usey yaad nahi karna chahta. Isi par adharit apki rachna behad pasand aayi.
Likhte rahiye khush rahiye.
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10th September 2014, 11:53 PM
Rajeev ji
Aapki kavita parh ek geet kehna chahungi ....na jane kabse umeedein kuch baki hain mughey tere yaad kyun aati ..yeh jo yaadein hain sabhi kaante hain bhuula do unhein...bhuula do unhein.....Keep smiling
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16th September 2014, 11:08 AM
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Wah bahut khoob rajeev ji...
Bahut hi gahare ehsaas. .......
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Madhu ji bahut bahut shukriyaa.............................
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16th September 2014, 10:12 PM
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Originally Posted by Rajeev Sharma
aKsar maiN yahi sochtaa huN
kaise bhuluN tuje...
tujhse ab koi rishtaa nhi hai meraa
ab naa hi koi baat hai
lekin dil hai ki tujhe bhulnaa nhi chahtaa
bahut koshish ki tuje bhulne ki
lekin teraa saayaa saath saath rahtaa hai
yaadoN meiN tu hi rahti hai
khwaaboN me bhi tu hi rahti ahi
aaNkheN baNd nhi karnaa chahtaa
pataa hai sirf aur sirf
tum hi dikhaai deti ho
kabhi un aNjaan si galiyoN meiN
kabhi baaNheN phailaayeN
to kabhi pass bulaate huye
kaise samjhaauN maiN es dil ko
ki tum ab pass nhi ho mere
naa hi tum ab meri ho
par dil kahtaa hai
ki tum aaj bhi meri ho
baavjud eske ki tuMhe dekheN
huye barsoN beet gye haiN
lekin aaNkhoN meiN
aaj bhi teraa hi surur hai
teraa hi nashaa khyaaloN meiN
jaise ki tu aas pass hi hai mere
mere khwaab bhi
mujhe naa jaane kahaN le jaate hai ?
jahaN jahaN dur dur tak koi naa ho
hai to tu aur sirf tu
ab kaise khwaaboN se bahar aauN
kaise tujh ko bhuluN
maiN khwaaboN se bahaar aana chahtaa huN
sach maiN tujhe bhulnaa chahtaa huN
par dil hai ki kuch sunataa hi nahi.....................
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Rajeev ji......bahut khoobsurat ahsaas...!
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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17th September 2014, 08:57 AM
Rajeevji,
bahot hi khubsurat kavitaa hai.....
hamaari aur se aapko dheroN daad..... REPS++++
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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19th September 2014, 01:08 PM
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Dil aur dimaag ki kashmakash bahut hi barreki se bayan ki aapne ,,,
Ravangi bahut achi thi ..Sach mano Rajeev ji mera dil kehta hai aap ek din
Film Industry ke liye likhoge ..
Mujhe aap ki ye rachna mein Silsila film ki Main aur meri tanhai wali chaap dikhai di ..
Aur main imagine kar raha tha ki Amitabh bachchan ji ise recite kar rahe hote tau kaisa lagta ,,Badhai mere bhai ....
Ye poem bhabhi ko mat perva dena , verna khair nahin ...Dil se Daad
Sanjay sehgal
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Sanjay sir ji namskaar...............
aapke muh me ghee-shakar...........
bhagwaan aapke lafzoN ko haqiqat me bahut zald badle........
bahut bahut shukriyaa..............
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6th October 2014, 04:40 PM
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sundar ehsaas Rajeev ji
thanks for sharing
regards
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Praneeta ji aapka bahut bahut shukriyaa ...........
yuN hi aate raheN...dhaNywaad
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6th October 2014, 04:44 PM
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Rajeeev bhai..... aapko padhnaa hamesha se meraa pasandeeda kaam raha hai...
aapki kaavish har bandishon se door hotii hain..... magar sacche ehsaas bayaan kartii hain..... mujhe hameshaa yahi ehsaas hota hai aapke kalaam ko padh kar ke kaash main bhi aisaa soch paata, aisaa likh paataa...... bas duaa hai ke aap hameshaa khush rahen aur yunhi likhte rahen...
Shaad.....
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shaad bhaai.............
aapkaa shukrguzaar huN
aapki hoNsalaa afzaai hameshaa meraa aur bhi acchha likhne ka saahas badhaati hai......
apnaa pyaar hameshaa yuN hi dete rahe ..
eswar aapko hameshaa khush rakheN.
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6th October 2014, 04:48 PM
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Bahot khoobsurat rachna hai rajeevji...........ehsaas bahot hi pasand aye
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Naaz ji rachnaa ko pasNd karne kaa bahut bahut shukriyaa........
yuN hi jude raheN
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6th October 2014, 04:49 PM
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bahut khoobsurat ahsaas.......................!!
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shukriyaa Sunitaa ji...........
apnaa pyaar aur aashirwaad banaaye rakheN....................
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24th November 2014, 10:21 AM
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bahut khoobsurat ahsaas.......................!!
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Sunita ji..........................
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24th November 2014, 10:24 AM
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Bahut he behtreen Kalam Rajeev ji... Kuch alag Milta h Aap ki poetry me... Keep writing
YAHI MEAYAARE TIJARAT RAHA TO HAR TAJIR
BARF KE BAAT LIYE ,DHOOP ME BAITHA HOGA
POET UNKNOWN
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Shukriyaa Ashwani Bhaai................
apnaa pyaar hm pr yuN hi banaaye rakheN
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24th November 2014, 02:32 PM
Rajeev ji,
Bohot hi khoobsurat ahsaas hai judai ka.....
Dil ko choo gai apki peshkash
Khush raheen
Bhushan joshi
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