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Jarurat Ab nahi Baki Riwayat Kyu nibhate ho - 20th March 2015, 01:26 PM

Jarurat Ab nahi Baki Riwayat Kyu nibhate ho
Sakhi hone ki nautanki Hamesha Kyu Dikhate ho

Dhunwa uthta hai Khwabo Me lagi fir aag to hogi
Dikhane ko bhala kyuonkar sharare tum bujhate ho

Mai aatish hu Katra katra Jala dunga sar e mehfil
Shmaa Mehfil ki bante ho to ye kyun Bhuul Jaate ho

Sambhal jao waqt rahte zehar mai hu Halahal sa
Tum apne jaam me kyunkar meri Talkhi Milate ho

Mashgala ban gaya tera hamesha din chadhe jo he
meri aankho se aksar ab lahuu tum he bahate ho

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20th March 2015, 06:24 PM

Ehsaas behad khoobsurat hain.....badi umdah gazal kahi aapne....daad kubul farmaiyega...
Halahal ka matlab bohot se bhai nahi jante honge...use small bracket me next line me dal dijiye...behtar hoga....
Bohot khoobsurat gazal ko dheroo daad

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re - 21st March 2015, 01:39 PM

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Originally Posted by bhushan View Post
Ehsaas behad khoobsurat hain.....badi umdah gazal kahi aapne....daad kubul farmaiyega...
Halahal ka matlab bohot se bhai nahi jante honge...use small bracket me next line me dal dijiye...behtar hoga....
Bohot khoobsurat gazal ko dheroo daad

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Bhushan
pasand karne or rahnumai ka bahut bahut shukriya Sir ... Edit ka option nahi hai udhar Halahal se mera meaning Poisen Vish se tha ....


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