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kaise kaise haadase sahate rahe ..! - 15th July 2003, 08:13 PM

kaise kaise haadase sahate rahe
ham yuun hii jeete rahe hansate rahe

us ke aa jaane kii ummiiden liye
raastaa mud mud ke ham takate rahe

vaqt to guzaraa magar kuchh is tarah
ham charaagon kii tarah jalate rahe

kitane chehare the hamaare aas-paas
tum hii tum dil mein magar basate rahe

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15th July 2003, 09:05 PM

Manoj ji ..

Bahut khoob ye bhi bahut achha likha hai .. khaas taur se ye ashaar dil ke behad kareeb se nikal gaye ..

us ke aa jaane kii ummiiden liye
raastaa mud mud ke ham takate rahe

vaqt to guzaraa magar kuchh is tarah
ham charaagon kii tarah jalate rahe

Likhte rahiye YooN hi ..

Tareef kabul ki jiye ..


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Hi - 15th July 2003, 09:43 PM

Waakai bahaut khoobsoorat likha hai aapne. Aap to bahaut acache shayer hain, really u have done a very nice job. Keep up the good work :-).

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15th July 2003, 10:34 PM

Manoj Saahab gustakhi muaff kijiyega par ye ghazal to Jagjeet Singh ki gayii hui suni hai hamne . Ab ye kisne likhi ye batane ki bhi takleef karenge aap . Waise dil ko chooti hai ye ghazal . likhne ka dhanyawaad.


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16th July 2003, 02:35 AM

HI MANOJ JI BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA HAI APNE
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