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Question Na jaane Kyun? - 2nd June 2002, 12:47 PM

aap sab ki is shayri ki duniya me jahan bohot se umdaa shayer mojod hain wahan ho sake to mujh jaisi naacheez shaeyra ko bhi ek moqa dijiye or meri guzarish hai ke aap sab mujhe apni rai se nawazein..... bohot bohot shukriya.


Woh chahta hai mujhe per mukamal ikraar karta bhi nahi
aata hai mujh se milne per mujh se baat karta bhi nahi
oron ke saamne meri taarif karta hai magar
mere saamne meri taarif karta bhi nahi
likhta hai khun se jaga jaga mera naam magar
apne khun ki bund se meri maang bharta bhi nahi
kehta hai ke uske har dard ke dawa hun main
per mujh se apne dard ka izhaar karta bhi nahi
kabhi kaha bhi nahi usne ke main uski amanat hun
per main kisi or se baat karun yeh gawara karta bhi nahi
mer jaaungi in adaon pe ke apna kehta hai
mujhe apnane ka izhaar karta bhi nahi


with love n well wishes;
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Thumbs up buhut khoob ... - 2nd June 2002, 08:36 PM

salam .......

aapki ghazal pari ...buhut achee lage ......

magar shaere ke aowzan ke baren men aap hamre muhtaram maikash sahib ki taraf rojoo karen ...zaroor aapko faida hoga ..


faqat ..

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