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Naaz Ek Ankahi Dastan..
 
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~~Khudko Pana Chahti Hu ~~ -
1st March 2006, 11:18 AM
Barso Bita kar dekh liye Koi na mila jo sirf mera ho Jiska dil sirf mere liye dhadke Jo meri har unkahi baat samzhe Jiske aane par sari kaliya khil jaye Dilme ak ajib si halchal mach jaye Vo hath badhaye aur mano jaise Ak pal mai sari duniya mil jaye Jisme koi fareb ya koi chal na ho Mai aankhe kholu to vo nazar aaye Aur jab bandh ho aankhe To sirf uske baho ke saye Janti hu nahi milega vo sab Jo kuch bhi mai chahti hu Shayad ishi liye ab aur kuch nahi Bas Khudko Pana Chahti hu..  Jindgi Tujse Har Ek Sans Pe Samjhota Karu,
Shokh He Muze Jine Ka Magar Itna Bhi Nahi |
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Re: ~~Khudko Pana Chahti Hu ~~ -
1st March 2006, 11:30 AM
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1st March 2006, 11:35 AM
Naaz ji..
Kabhi kabhi huM bas ye sochte hi reh jate haiN .. ki hum hi aise reh gaye ... jo chahte the mil hi nahi paaya .. par kya waakai maiN aisa hota hai .. kayi baar koi humare bohat hi kareeb hota hai .. bas wo lafz jo is rah ko aasaan kar dete hai mil hi nahi paate .. aur sadiyan beet jati haiN .. phir kabhi jab ehsaas hota hai to shayad humari dair ho jati hai .. ki hum pehchan hi na sake.. maiN to yahi kahuNga .. humen pehchanna seekh lena chaiye .. aage chahe jo ho .. waqt tanhai se na beetega .. aur na humen khud se koi ranz hoga ... baaki tumhare khayal acche lage .. bohat dil ke kone se jazbaat nikale hai tumne ... yun hi likhti raho ... aapka apna Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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1st March 2006, 12:12 PM
brilliant...............................
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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1st March 2006, 01:09 PM
Mehul ji..
ab kya kahu.. aur koi alfaz nahi hai jis se aap ka shukriya ada kar saku.. Aate rahiye.. Jindgi Tujse Har Ek Sans Pe Samjhota Karu,
Shokh He Muze Jine Ka Magar Itna Bhi Nahi |
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1st March 2006, 01:12 PM
Naaz ji..
Kabhi kabhi huM bas ye sochte hi reh jate haiN .. ki hum hi aise reh gaye ... jo chahte the mil hi nahi paaya .. par kya waakai maiN aisa hota hai .. kayi baar koi humare bohat hi kareeb hota hai .. bas wo lafz jo is rah ko aasaan kar dete hai mil hi nahi paate .. aur sadiyan beet jati haiN .. phir kabhi jab ehsaas hota hai to shayad humari dair ho jati hai .. ki hum pehchan hi na sake.. maiN to yahi kahuNga .. humen pehchanna seekh lena chaiye .. aage chahe jo ho .. waqt tanhai se na beetega .. aur na humen khud se koi ranz hoga ... baaki tumhare khayal acche lage .. bohat dil ke kone se jazbaat nikale hai tumne ... yun hi likhti raho ... aapka apna Kunal Dear Kunal ya sach hai ki hamari soch hi hamai sab se jyada taklif pahochati hai, bas koshish karti hu ki kaash use ak bar mil pau aur pahechan saku, aage uparwala jane.. wait & watch.. Jindgi Tujse Har Ek Sans Pe Samjhota Karu,
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1st March 2006, 01:36 PM
naaz ab to tumhe padhkar kho jane ki aadat ho gayi hai
bus tum uhi hi ghara likho aur main padhti rahun shrdh 
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1st March 2006, 01:38 PM
Naaz koi patthar ki lakeer thodi na kinchi hui ki wo nahi milegaAcha likha hai tumne..Likhti raho..Aur kush raho
Diggaj ji.. shukriya.. itni gaherai se meri kalpna so samaz ne ke liye.. aate rahiye.. Jindgi Tujse Har Ek Sans Pe Samjhota Karu,
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1st March 2006, 01:56 PM
naaz ab to tumhe padhkar kho jane ki aadat ho gayi hai
bus tum uhi hi ghara likho aur main padhti rahun shrdh Shard.. Ab kya kahu,, sirf shukriya ada karna chahti hu.. is nacheez ko itna khas bananeke liye.. Khush rahiye.. Keep Coming.. Jindgi Tujse Har Ek Sans Pe Samjhota Karu,
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1st March 2006, 02:27 PM
naaz...tumhare kalaam jaise jaise padhne lagi hoon tumse ek anjaana sa apnapan hone laga hai..
tumhara kalaam mere dil ke bahaut kareeb hai..shayad meri ek haqeeqat hai......par jaanti ho mein toh khud ko kab se talaash rahi hoon aur abtak haath me bas kaante hi aaye..apna wajood bhi kaheen dhundhla sa hoke kho gaya hai...... par meri dil se dua hai ki tum khud ko paalo..khush raho naaz.khuda tumpe rehem banaye rakkhe. Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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Hi Naaz -
1st March 2006, 04:04 PM
Hi Naaz aap ki saari rachnaaye hamne padhi hai...
Masa-allah sab ki sab dil ko chhoo jaati hai. Thanx 4 posting ur valuable ,precious and noble creations here. Take care Aise hi likhte rahiye hameshaaaaaaa....... Well i m also from ahmedabad Just enjoy this Kabhi maut ki tamanna ,Kabhi zindagi ki hasrat, Kabhi jushn-e-ranjish gam ka to kabhi khushi ki hasrat Jise dekha tak na tune, voh gulistan khak mujhko, Jise tune chhu liya ho mujhe us kali ki hasrat. Jinhe khuld ki talab ho,unhe khuld de de ya rab, Mujhe thi, hai aur rahegi uski gali ki hasrat. Mai tauba kar chuka hu , may se mukar chuka hu, Kyun uth rahi hai dil mai phir maikashi ki hasrat? Taari kiya hi gaalib unvaan-e-zindagi hai, Phir bhul kar bhi kije kyun roshni ki hasrat. Agar naamunkin hai use paana aur dekh k bhul jaana, Dil kar raha hai kyon phir bhi us chandni ki hasrat. |
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Re: ~~Khudko Pana Chahti Hu ~~ -
1st March 2006, 06:33 PM
Mai aankhe kholu to vo nazar aaye
Aur jab bandh ho aankhe To sirf uske baho ke saye Janti hu nahi milega vo sab Jo kuch bhi mai chahti hu Shayad ishi liye ab aur kuch nahi Bas Khudko Pana Chahti hu.. Hi Naaz, Khud ko bhoolkar kisi ko chahne se kabhi kabhi khud ko pane ki chah bad jati hai Beautiful words! Do keep writing ... jab se kisi ne karli hai suraj ki chori aao chal ke suraj dhoondhein aur na mile toh kiran kiran phir jama karein hum aur ik suraj naya banyein -NM |
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2nd March 2006, 09:21 AM
naaz...tumhare kalaam jaise jaise padhne lagi hoon tumse ek anjaana sa apnapan hone laga hai..
tumhara kalaam mere dil ke bahaut kareeb hai..shayad meri ek haqeeqat hai......par jaanti ho mein toh khud ko kab se talaash rahi hoon aur abtak haath me bas kaante hi aaye..apna wajood bhi kaheen dhundhla sa hoke kho gaya hai...... par meri dil se dua hai ki tum khud ko paalo..khush raho naaz.khuda tumpe rehem banaye rakkhe. Dear Farhana Shukriya is apne pan ki vajah tanhai hai, jo idhar bhi hai aur udhr bhi.. sahi hai, apne aap ko pana bahot badi baat hai, aur kathin bhi hai, kyo ki shayad ham to vo hai jo sirf khona jante hai, koshish karungi ke is bar kamyaab ho jaye.. Khush rahiye.. aate rahiye.. Jindgi Tujse Har Ek Sans Pe Samjhota Karu,
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2nd March 2006, 09:23 AM
Hi Naaz,
Khud ko bhoolkar kisi ko chahne se kabhi kabhi khud ko pane ki chah bad jati hai Beautiful words! Do keep writing HI Muzhe aapka naam nahi pata.. [Anjani Awaaz].. Shukriya aap ko meri post par dekh kar bahot khushi hui.. aate rahiye.. khush rahiye.. Jindgi Tujse Har Ek Sans Pe Samjhota Karu,
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2nd March 2006, 09:25 AM
Hi Naaz aap ki saari rachnaaye hamne padhi hai...
Masa-allah sab ki sab dil ko chhoo jaati hai. Thanx 4 posting ur valuable ,precious and noble creations here. Take care Aise hi likhte rahiye hameshaaaaaaa....... Well i m also from ahmedabad Just enjoy this Hi Acharya ji.. Tarif ke liye bahot bahot shukriya... aur shukriya itne achhe reply ke liye bhi.. Aate rahiye. khush rahiye.. Jindgi Tujse Har Ek Sans Pe Samjhota Karu,
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