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2nd August 2010, 12:20 PM
tujhe dekha to sab kam bhul gaye,
nikalata din dhalti shaam bhul gaye,
sochta hu tujhe bhula to kya yaad aaya,
jab tu yaad aaya to kisse tamam bhul gaye,
kal jab hme kisi ne pukara badi der tak,
tab laga kahi rakh ke hum apna nam bhul gaye,
tere dil-e-rah se guzre to fir kahi se ja na ske,
ghar tak aane ke har rah-e-aam bhul gaye,
aaj usne bhi choda jo har gam main sath tha,
muje mainkhane bhi bhule mere jaam bhul gaye,
aaj jo jeeta "pawan" to sab hairat main hai,
bhala kese hm hona nakaam bhul gaye
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6th August 2010, 08:02 PM
dosto kya baat hai agar peshkesh achi nahi lagi to km se km buri hi bta dijiye kam se kam or acha likhne ki kosish to ki jayegi
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6th August 2010, 08:13 PM
achi gahzal hai,
aur ye dono misroN mai bahut gahri shayeri hai
nikalata din dhalti shaam bhul gaye,
tab laga kahi rakh ke hum apna nam bhul gaye,
keep it
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6th August 2010, 08:24 PM
sunita ji bhot bhot shukriya reply karne ke liye
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6th August 2010, 08:42 PM
tujhe dekha to sab kam bhul gaye,
nikalata din dhalti shaam bhul gaye,
kal jab hme kisi ne pukara badi der tak,
tab laga kahi rakh ke hum apna nam bhul gaye,
Very Impressive ..........Pawan Ji ! Nice creation... !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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6th August 2010, 08:44 PM
thanks naresh ji shukriyaaa
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6th August 2010, 09:39 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by shayari
tujhe dekha to sab kam bhul gaye,
nikalata din dhalti shaam bhul gaye,
sochta hu tujhe bhula to kya yaad aaya,
jab tu yaad aaya to kisse tamam bhul gaye,
kal jab hme kisi ne pukara badi der tak,
tab laga kahi rakh ke hum apna nam bhul gaye,
tere dil-e-rah se guzre to fir kahi se ja na ske,
ghar tak aane ke har rah-e-aam bhul gaye,
aaj usne bhi choda jo har gam main sath tha,
muje mainkhane bhi bhule mere jaam bhul gaye,
aaj jo jeeta "pawan" to sab hairat main hai,
bhala kese hm hona nakaam bhul gaye
pawan(shayari)
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dekh ke gazal wah wah kar gaye
achanak padna to jaise bhul gaye
ab kya bataye
andhera tha aur diya jalana to bhul gaye
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7th August 2010, 03:19 PM
kal jab hme kisi ne pukara badi der tak,
tab laga kahi rakh ke hum apna nam bhul gaye,
tere dil-e-rah se guzre to fir kahi se ja na ske,
ghar tak aane ke har rah-e-aam bhul gaye,
Wow!!...Tooo good Pawan sahab....
Bohat accha likhte haiN aap..yeh do ashaar behad pasand aaye mujhe,
Aapki ghazal me nayapan aur saadgi hai
Yuhi likhte rahiye.....
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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7th August 2010, 03:28 PM
tere dil-e-rah se guzre to fir kahi se ja na ske,
ghar tak aane ke har rah-e-aam bhul gaye,
pawan bhai! kamaal ka likha hai aapne . mujhe bahut pasand aya. nice shayri. keep it up dear.
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Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
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8th August 2010, 07:29 PM
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dekh ke gazal wah wah kar gaye
achanak padna to jaise bhul gaye
ab kya bataye
andhera tha aur diya jalana to bhul gaye
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v/veena ji aap kya kehna cahte the muje samajh nahi aaya par yaha kuch kehne ke liye shukriyaan
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8th August 2010, 07:30 PM
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Originally Posted by zainy
kal jab hme kisi ne pukara badi der tak,
tab laga kahi rakh ke hum apna nam bhul gaye,
tere dil-e-rah se guzre to fir kahi se ja na ske,
ghar tak aane ke har rah-e-aam bhul gaye,
Wow!!...Tooo good Pawan sahab....
Bohat accha likhte haiN aap..yeh do ashaar behad pasand aaye mujhe,
Aapki ghazal me nayapan aur saadgi hai
Yuhi likhte rahiye.....
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Zainy ji bhot bhot shukriya hosla afzai karne ke liyee
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8th August 2010, 07:32 PM
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Originally Posted by parveen komal
tere dil-e-rah se guzre to fir kahi se ja na ske,
ghar tak aane ke har rah-e-aam bhul gaye,
pawan bhai! kamaal ka likha hai aapne . mujhe bahut pasand aya. nice shayri. keep it up dear.
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shukriya parveen komal ji
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9th August 2010, 12:43 AM
Pawan Jee AadaaB!
Janab aapke khayaal aur kalam to bahut khoob chalti hai....... bahut achchi peshkash hai aapki yeh.......
Aur yeh sher kya kahuN bahut Umdaa dheroN daad is sher per......
kal jab hme kisi ne pukara badi der tak,
tab laga kahi rakh ke hum apna nam bhul gaye,
Aise hi likhate rahiye.......
Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez.......
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9th August 2010, 08:55 PM
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Originally Posted by shayari
tujhe dekha to sab kam bhul gaye,
nikalata din dhalti shaam bhul gaye,
sochta hu tujhe bhula to kya yaad aaya,
jab tu yaad aaya to kisse tamam bhul gaye,
kal jab hme kisi ne pukara badi der tak,
tab laga kahi rakh ke hum apna nam bhul gaye,
tere dil-e-rah se guzre to fir kahi se ja na ske,
ghar tak aane ke har rah-e-aam bhul gaye,
aaj usne bhi choda jo har gam main sath tha,
muje mainkhane bhi bhule mere jaam bhul gaye,
aaj jo jeeta "pawan" to sab hairat main hai,
bhala kese hm hona nakaam bhul gaye
pawan(shayari)
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wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Pawan.... bahut khoob.... dil se daad hazir hai dear.... yuhi is mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye.... khush rahiye...
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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11th August 2010, 01:02 PM
khawish ji bhot bhot shukriya
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11th August 2010, 01:03 PM
lamha ji bhot bhot thanx aapka bhi
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11th August 2010, 01:15 PM
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tujhe dekha to sab kam bhul gaye,
nikalata din dhalti shaam bhul gaye,
sochta hu tujhe bhula to kya yaad aaya,
jab tu yaad aaya to kisse tamam bhul gaye,
kal jab hme kisi ne pukara badi der tak,
tab laga kahi rakh ke hum apna nam bhul gaye,
tere dil-e-rah se guzre to fir kahi se ja na ske,
ghar tak aane ke har rah-e-aam bhul gaye,
aaj usne bhi choda jo har gam main sath tha,
muje mainkhane bhi bhule mere jaam bhul gaye,
aaj jo jeeta "pawan" to sab hairat main hai,
bhala kese hm hona nakaam bhul gaye
pawan(shayari)
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ji very nice creation........................
Radhika
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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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