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Chaandni bhari raat, chaand hai aaj saath........... -
3rd January 2006, 04:03 AM
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this writing is inspired when rohin threw out a challenge to write....on the pivture he gave us....i was seeing the pivture again and reading these lines, so thought to post them aagain...aapke nazraane.... Chaandi bhari raat, chaand mere saath hai aaj Kaise kahu, kaise sunayun, is raat me baat hai kuch khaas aaj! Haathon me churiya, maathey par bindiya Tera saath hai pyar bhara, in aankhon me ab kahan nindiya! aankhain kuch kuch kehne lagi, Honthon par baatain aake ruki, Tumne jo dekha pyar se meri taraf, sharam se ye nuzre jhuki ! Tere kaandey par ser mera, Mere haathon me tera haath, Guzarey kabhi na ye pyar ka sama, Sadiyon tak rahe hamara saath ! Tham jaaye ye khhobsurat sama, Tej Bahut hai dil ki dharkan aaj, Kaise kahu, kaise sunayon. Is raat me baat hai kuch khaas aaj! Lots of love Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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3rd January 2006, 06:37 AM
priya ji
bhaut hi achhe se aapne pyar ko bataya hai nice kalam keep writing shrdh 
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3rd January 2006, 02:14 PM
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hmmm very nice and romantic  jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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3rd January 2006, 02:29 PM
Chaandi bhari raat, chaand mere saath hai aaj
Kaise kahu, kaise sunayun, is raat me baat hai kuch khaas aaj! Haathon me churiya, maathey par bindiya Tera saath hai pyar bhara, in aankhon me ab kahan nindiya! Waaaahhh....kya baat hai...! aankhain kuch kuch kehne lagi, Honthon par baatain aake ruki, Tumne jo dekha pyar se meri taraf, sharam se ye nuzre jhuki ! Tere kaandey par ser mera, Mere haathon me tera haath, Guzarey kabhi na ye pyar ka sama, Sadiyon tak rahe hamara saath ! Beautifullll.....! Tham jaaye ye khhobsurat sama, Tej Bahut hai dil ki dharkan aaj, Kaise kahu, kaise sunayon. Is raat me baat hai kuch khaas aaj! haaaye...! Didi, Huemsha ki tarah bahut hi pyaara likha hai tumne...Just loved each n every word of it....Beautiful feelings expessed beautifully... Loved it... Do keep writing and TC...! hey...A very Happy New Year Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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4th January 2006, 02:15 AM
wah wah wah wah wah!!!! really romantic...so sweet!
i really liked this one priya! keep writing! take care bye warda »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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4th January 2006, 02:23 AM
Chaandi bhari raat, chaand mere saath hai aaj
Kaise kahu, kaise sunayun, is raat me baat hai kuch khaas aaj! Haathon me churiya, maathey par bindiya Tera saath hai pyar bhara, in aankhon me ab kahan nindiya! aankhain kuch kuch kehne lagi, Honthon par baatain aake ruki, Tumne jo dekha pyar se meri taraf, sharam se ye nuzre jhuki ! Tere kaandey par ser mera, Mere haathon me tera haath, Guzarey kabhi na ye pyar ka sama, Sadiyon tak rahe hamara saath ! Tham jaaye ye khhobsurat sama, Tej Bahut hai dil ki dharkan aaj, Kaise kahu, kaise sunayon. Is raat me baat hai kuch khaas aaj! U know what i felt like when i read this... |
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4th January 2006, 04:59 AM
dear shraadhha thanks my dear for liking this one, aisi hi supprt dete rehna
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- dear khulikha, thanks for always being with me and apprecaiting little poetries, its a pleausre to get ur reply ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- dear bro how ru , a bery happy new year to you as well! god bless you, loved to see you here  ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ - dear warda thanks my sweetu for liking this one -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- dear Rohin, What did u feel yaar, hame bhi to batao ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- love to you all a lot that is Priya  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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4th January 2006, 09:06 AM
very well expressed and could imagine that chandni bhari raat
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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4th January 2006, 09:49 AM
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wow priya. awesomly expressed. just cud feel the flow of love in each n every word of urs. gr8. loved reading it. take care n may god bless u both with his finnest glitters. with love urs jas |
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4th January 2006, 10:26 AM
Kamal hai na priya..kabhi yeh aankhen aansun se neend gawaa deti hai kabhi khushiyon ki chamak inhe sone nahi deti..aab mein kya feel kar raha hoon yeh chodo par exictement yeh hai ki rohin batao wat was he feeling..
 Behad khoob dear... Bahut aacha laga aise hi likhti raho -tumhara apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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4th January 2006, 10:59 AM
a tukbandi is not a good shayri.
shayri without indepth imotions and urdu seems ????? try some better you can. learn urdu then post again. |
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4th January 2006, 08:12 PM
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glad u liked it buddy luv ya Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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4th January 2006, 08:14 PM
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tuhanu pasand aa gaya bas hor ki chahhiya hai yaar...i am so happy that u r here and u liked it thanks for being with me luv ya a lot Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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4th January 2006, 08:15 PM
so sweet.. bahoot achha likha hai aapne
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4th January 2006, 08:15 PM
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hey my dearest and special buddy how r u yaar and where r u ? mangni ke baad gayab hi ho gaye yaar tum to!! lol what is rohin feeling hehehe idont know yaar..lols i am gad to know that u liked this one!! luv ya Priya ps. what r u feeling tum bhi bata do? cuz the way usaid what u said sounds fishy now?? r u okay? luv ya yaar ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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4th January 2006, 08:19 PM
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aapki shikwa par gaur kiya, i will try writing something better next time, but this wasnt jus a trial writing, but my depth feelings that came to heart and mind while looking at the romantic pic please be my guest and do guide me so that i cna write better and improve! thanks for being here with me best regards Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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4th January 2006, 08:54 PM
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Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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Hi My Darling sweetu thanks so much for liking. you all liked it aur kya chahiye, kyu ki aapke pasand karne se jopyar beyaan hota hai uski keemat nahi Luv ya Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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4th January 2006, 11:23 PM
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Lots of love to you! always Urs Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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