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"Darr hai mujhko vo khafa ho jaaye Na" - 24th July 2009, 04:14 PM
mahfil ko Diya ka salaam,
ek chhoti si nagma aapke naam ........



Darr hai mujhko vo khafaa ho jaaye Na
bekhudi meN kuchh khataa ho jaaye Na

hey muthhi meiN jiski taQdeer meri
vo meharbaaN ho to kyaa ho jaaye Na

bhool kar bhi gar bhulade vo mujhe
zindagi meri sazaa ho jaaye Na

ashQ aankho'N se bahe soche k' vo
bholi surat pe fidaa ho jaaye Na

raah-e-ulfat meN aahistaa chal"Diya"
umr bhar yeh bad-duaa ho jaaye Na





Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai

Goodbye SDC

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24th July 2009, 06:28 PM
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Bahut khoob kaha hai Diya ji aapne..........

bhool kar bhi gar bhulade vo mujhe
zindagi meri sazaa ho jaaye Na

Vaise sabhi sher ache lage mujhe.........aise hi likhte rahiye.....bazm ki ronak badhate rahiye.........



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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24th July 2009, 11:36 PM
Bhei Diya,

Aapki qalam to din ba din nikharti jaa rahi hai,

Bahot hi Khoob likhaa hai aapne, Dil se daad kubul kijiye

With best wishes

Rashid

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mahfil ko Diya ka salaam,
ek chhoti si nagma aapke naam ........



Darr hai mujhko vo khafaa ho jaaye Na
bekhudi meN kuchh khataa ho jaaye Na

hey muthhi meiN jiski taQdeer meri
vo meharbaaN ho to kyaa ho jaaye Na

bhool kar bhi gar bhulade vo mujhe
zindagi meri sazaa ho jaaye Na

ashQ aankho'N se bahe soche k' vo
bholi surat pe fidaa ho jaaye Na

raah-e-ulfat meN aahistaa chal"Diya"
umr bhar yeh bad-duaa ho jaaye Na





Tu AndheroN -ujaaloN me mila kar mujhko
Zindagi ab to sawaloN me mila kar mujhko
   
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25th July 2009, 01:06 AM
Bas theek hai .....!

aur kuch nahi kahuNga ,, isme diya ka junoon nahi dikh raha mujhe...

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25th July 2009, 07:24 AM
Priyee Diyaa

ghazal behtareen lagii ... har sher bahut pasand aaya ...

bas yeh kuch lines toh dil ke pass hain

bhool kar bhi gar bhulade vo mujhe
zindagi meri sazaa ho jaaye Na

ashQ aankho'N se bahe soche k' vo
bholi surat pe fidaa ho jaaye Na

raah-e-ulfat meN aahistaa chal"Diya"
umr bhar yeh bad-duaa ho jaaye Na

dua karti hu aapki zindgai mein khushiyoon ke diye's ho har kadam per ...aur khushi aapke kadam chume
Aameen

take care

aur likhte rahye

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25th July 2009, 07:36 AM
raah-e-ulfat meN aahistaa chal"Diya"
umr bhar yeh bad-duaa ho jaaye Na


Diya ji...

Shayad aaj pehli baar apke likha pada.... kuch samjah se bahar raha.... apke kalaam ki ravaangi kuch tooti si lagi... ek jagah aapne ye likha hai

hey muthhi meiN jiski taQdeer meri
vo meharbaaN ho to kyaa ho jaaye Na

maayine ki gar uski meharbaani ho jaaye to bahut accha hoga...jannat naseeb hogi...aur phir dard se juda sher.... to maqta kis sher ke saath aap kehna chahte hain...vo samajh nahi aaya...

Mauf kijiyega...jo mann mein aaya aapko likh diya...ek dafa main bhi aisi hi galtiyaan karta tha...to Kunal, aur baaki dost mujhe yunhi samjhate the...

rabb raakha.......


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*·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·*
**(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)**

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inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......
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mahfil ko Diya ka salaam,
ek chhoti si nagma aapke naam ........



Darr hai mujhko vo khafaa ho jaaye Na
bekhudi meN kuchh khataa ho jaaye Na

hey muthhi meiN jiski taQdeer meri
vo meharbaaN ho to kyaa ho jaaye Na

bhool kar bhi gar bhulade vo mujhe
zindagi meri sazaa ho jaaye Na

ashQ aankho'N se bahe soche k' vo
bholi surat pe fidaa ho jaaye Na

raah-e-ulfat meN aahistaa chal"Diya"
umr bhar yeh bad-duaa ho jaaye Na



nice creation diya ji...

ehsaas ache hain or sare mere dil ke kareeb rahe...

so keep going...

ek safal koshish ki aapne..

aise hi aage bhi likhti rahiye..

khush rahiye...

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27th October 2009, 11:40 PM
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Bahut khoob kaha hai Diya ji aapne..........
bhool kar bhi gar bhulade vo mujhe
zindagi meri sazaa ho jaaye Na
Vaise sabhi sher ache lage mujhe.........aise hi likhte rahiye.....bazm ki ronak badhate rahiye.........

Naresh jee,
aapko humari ghazal achhi lagi hume khusi hui
waise yeh creation itna khas nahi hai
fir bhi aapne bharpur tareef ki hai
aapki yehi ada aapko humesha sabse alag (spl) bana deta hai

younhi saath dete rahiye
khus rahiye

Diya


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Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai

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Bhei Diya,

Aapki qalam to din ba din nikharti jaa rahi hai,

Bahot hi Khoob likhaa hai aapne, Dil se daad kubul kijiye

With best wishes

Rashid
Rashid jee,
kaise ho aap..?
janab yeh to dua hai aap jaise dostoN ke....
jinhone meri hosla banaye rakhe hain
varna shayari kahan aur main kahan
bas yun hi kuchh tuti futi labz jod deti hun

thanx a lot
be happy

Diya


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Bas theek hai .....!

aur kuch nahi kahuNga ,, isme diya ka junoon nahi dikh raha mujhe...

Kunaal
maloom hai mujhe
magar next time aapko nirash nahi karoongi
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28th October 2009, 12:01 AM
bhool kar bhi gar bhulade vo mujhe
zindagi meri sazaa ho jaaye Na

Diya Jii,,

Aik achi koshish k liye dil say daad qabool kijiye...

Oper quote kiye shair nay dil mooh liya....

Likhtay rahiye,,

Take care,,

Regardz,
HSN

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mahfil ko Diya ka salaam,
ek chhoti si nagma aapke naam ........



Darr hai mujhko vo khafaa ho jaaye Na
bekhudi meN kuchh khataa ho jaaye Na

hey muthhi meiN jiski taQdeer meri
vo meharbaaN ho to kyaa ho jaaye Na

bhool kar bhi gar bhulade vo mujhe
zindagi meri sazaa ho jaaye Na

ashQ aankho'N se bahe soche k' vo
bholi surat pe fidaa ho jaaye Na

raah-e-ulfat meN aahistaa chal"Diya"
umr bhar yeh bad-duaa ho jaaye Na






Wah ji kya baat hai
Dil khus kardiya aapne

God bless you

:-ek bujhaa hua dhumil

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