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27th January 2010, 07:44 PM

Kunaal Ji....Aadaab ! Zainy ji ke vichar padhkar dil ho aaya .....aapki yeh rachna bhi padhta chalu....unki khoj ka natiza hai......ise hum padh paa rahe hai.....bahut khubsurat ehsaas se labrez aapki yeh ghazal mujhe bahut achhi lagi....yun toh humesha dil se kehte aur likhte ho......tabhi toh intne sundar ashaar se har baar ru-ba-ru hote hai.....ek kaabile taarif ghazal.....jitna taarif me keh saka ......woh kam lag raha hai mujhe.....yuhi likhte rahen.....aur achi achi ghazal padhte rahen hume....
Yeh sher dil ke khaas kareeb raha....
sath rahuN ya door yaad mujhe karogi…
tohfa laboN ko aisa de jauNga main aaj…
dil se daad hazir hai....

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....




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28th January 2010, 07:52 PM

Kunal jii,

bahut Umda lagii yeh ghazal ......... aapki har ghazal ek se badkar ek hain .... shayad lafz kum padh jaayege .... kuch kehne ke liyeeeeeee...


likhtey rahye ...

take care of urself

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