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Baithe baithe kuch khayaal aaiye... unhe shabdoh main samaietne ki koshish........ |
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8th February 2007, 12:22 AM
Baithe baithe kuch khayaal aaiye... unhe shabdoh main samaietne ki koshish........
****************************************** 1> ek din to sub ko hi uth jana hai… Is duniyan main kahan humara thikana hai pyar se pyar ki ibaadat kar lo bas kuch roz ka milna he aur phir… ……..is jahan se jana hai! ****************************************** 2> rastey jahan ley jayen vahan ho lo… chahe hans lo chahe ro lo… har ek raaste ki dagar ek jaisi… har safar ki manzil bas ek hi hai yeh jaan lo! ****************************************** 3> Rah chalkar manzil pataien hain…. Manzil phir rah ban jatien hai….. Raaste hi to sacche humsafar hain… Aur kya tu-ek musafir….mai-ek musafir.... ****************************************** 4> Kai haroon mai jeet chupi hai….. Kai jeeton main haar…. Khail to yeh duniyan sari…. Jeet aur haar ek saar! ****************************************** inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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8th February 2007, 12:30 AM
namksaar aarya ji,
aaj bahot dino baad aapne kuch likha aapke khayallaaT wakehi me bahot acheh hai aapne bahot hi khoobi ke sath bayaaN kiye haiN unhe aur mujhe khas karke 1st aur 2nd bahot hi pasaNd aayeN ****************************************** 1> ek din to sub ko hi uth jana hai… Is duniyan main kahan humara thikana hai pyar se pyar ki ibaadat kar lo bas kuch roz ka milna he aur phir… ……..is jahan se jana hai! ****************************************** 2> rastey jahan ley jayen vahan ho lo… chahe hans lo chahe ro lo… har ek raaste ki dagar ek jaisi… har safar ki manzil bas ek hi hai yeh jaan lo! ****************************************** aarya ji aise hi hamesa likhte rahiye bahot achha laga aapko paRh ke apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN duaoN ke sath ijaazaT aapka dost dhaval |
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Aadab -
8th February 2007, 05:52 PM
Aapne bahut accha lika maine aapki saari shayripadi magar aapko pehli baar jawaab bhel rahi hu ummeed hai aapko pasand aayega:
Arz Kiya Hai: Log Behre Hain Inhe Dil Ki Sunaya Na KaroBand Darwajo Pe Awaj Lagay Na KaroPatharo se Milti Nahi Murade Dil KiTum Majaro Pe Chirago Ko Jalaya Na karoRait Ki Andhiya Uda kar Na Le Jaye KahiTum Tasveer Rait Pe Banaya Na karoUmar Bhar Kaun Kisi ke Sath Raha E-ASKTum Yaad Me Asko Ko bahaya Na karoLog Behre Hain Inhe Dil Ki Sunaya Na Karo  Zindagi ek phool hai aur mohabbat us ka shehed,Pyar Ek Dariya Hai, Aur mehmoob uski sarhad...
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9th February 2007, 12:33 AM
Hi "mbrk_qrsh" jee,
aapne bahut hi pate ki baat ki hai. Yeh sach hai ki logon ko parwah nahin hoti kisi dusre ke dard ki. Yahan hum isliye nahin likhte ki humse koi humdardi jataye. Hum to sirf kuch vichar share karne ke liye likhte hain taki hume apne likhi hui rachnao mai galtiyan samajh aayain ...doosro ke replies se. Humari likhavat main shayad aapko kuch roti si surat dikhti hogi, lekin hum asal jindagi main bahut khush hain.  Aapke shayarane andaz main samjhane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.Pehli baar laga ki kisine humari rachnao se hatkar, humari bhavnao ko samjh kar hume acchi salah dene ki koshish ki. Ek bar phir dhanyavad. Regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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dhanyavad -
9th February 2007, 12:36 AM
hi dhaval jee,
aapko humare likki panktiyaan, pasand aayin, isse hume bhi accha laga aapka bahut bahut dhanyavad. Regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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