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2nd July 2014, 12:29 PM
Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaaab…!Dosto Aik Ghazal Ke Chand Ashaar Pesh Hain….Ummiid hai Pasand aayen ge….
ZEHAN ME RAKHNA
Hamaray Dil Ko Hai Jo Be-Qaraari , Zehan Me Rakhna
Saraa-sar Ye Inaayat Hai Tumhaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Tumhaaray Baad Jeenay Ka Tasawwur Hee Nahi Mumkin
Tumharay Saath Hain Saansen Hamaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Zamanay Ke Liye JanaaN Bhalay Tum Kuch Bhi Ho Lekin
Hamaaray Waastay Dunia Ho Saari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Bhala Kab Bhool Paao Gay Bhulanay Se Mujhay Hamdam
Lahoo Ban Ke RagoN Me Hun Main Jaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Kabhi Jo Dushman-e-JaaN Bhi Hamaara Zabt Gar Parkhay
Milay Gi Usko Hum Me Inkisaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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2nd July 2014, 01:02 PM
waah waah bahot khub.............................................. ..!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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2nd July 2014, 01:08 PM
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Originally Posted by AHMAD SHAKIL
Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaaab…!Dosto Aik Ghazal Ke Chand Ashaar Pesh Hain….Ummiid hai Pasand aayen ge….
ZEHAN ME RAKHNA
Hamaray Dil Ko Hai Jo Be-Qaraari , Zehan Me Rakhna
Saraa-sar Ye Inaayat Hai Tumhaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Tumhaaray Baad Jeenay Ka Tasawwur Hee Nahi Mumkin
Tumharay Saath Hain Saansen Hamaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Zamanay Ke Liye JanaaN Bhalay Tum Kuch Bhi Ho Lekin
Hamaaray Waastay Dunia Ho Saari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Bhala Kab Bhool Paao Gay Bhulanay Se Mujhay Hamdam
Lahoo Ban Ke RagoN Me Hun Main Jaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Kabhi Jo Dushman-e-JaaN Bhi Hamaara Zabt Gar Parkhay
Milay Gi Usko Hum Me Inkisaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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Tumhaaray Baad Jeenay Ka Tasawwur Hee Nahi Mumkin
Tumharay Saath Hain Saansen Hamaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Zamanay Ke Liye JanaaN Bhalay Tum Kuch Bhi Ho Lekin
Hamaaray Waastay Dunia Ho Saari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Waaah Shakil bho waaahh. Bahut khoobsoorat ghazal hai. Mashallah....Ye do ashaar to bahut hi khoob rahe. SDC ke galiyaare aapke sukhan ki raushni se charaGaaN hue jaate haiN. Allah kare zor e kalam aur ziyada. Khush rahiye aur likhte rahiye.
Ijazat chahunga
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2nd July 2014, 01:29 PM
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Originally Posted by AHMAD SHAKIL
Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaaab…!Dosto Aik Ghazal Ke Chand Ashaar Pesh Hain….Ummiid hai Pasand aayen ge….
ZEHAN ME RAKHNA
Hamaray Dil Ko Hai Jo Be-Qaraari , Zehan Me Rakhna
Saraa-sar Ye Inaayat Hai Tumhaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Tumhaaray Baad Jeenay Ka Tasawwur Hee Nahi Mumkin
Tumharay Saath Hain Saansen Hamaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Zamanay Ke Liye JanaaN Bhalay Tum Kuch Bhi Ho Lekin
Hamaaray Waastay Dunia Ho Saari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Bhala Kab Bhool Paao Gay Bhulanay Se Mujhay Hamdam
Lahoo Ban Ke RagoN Me Hun Main Jaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Kabhi Jo Dushman-e-JaaN Bhi Hamaara Zabt Gar Parkhay
Milay Gi Usko Hum Me Inkisaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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Masha Allah bohat khoob Ahmed sahab
sabhi ashaar laajawaab hain
Yuhi likhte rahiye
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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2nd July 2014, 01:31 PM
bahot khoob , bahot khoob sarkaar..... muhabbat se labrez kalaam pesh ki hai aapne...
Bhala Kab Bhool Paao Gay Bhulanay Se Mujhay Hamdam
Lahoo Ban Ke RagoN Me Hun Main Jaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Kabhi Jo Dushman-e-JaaN Bhi Hamaara Zabt Gar Parkhay
Milay Gi Usko Hum Me Inkisaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
ye do sher bahot mufeed bahot aalaa.....
behad mubaarakbaad is muqammal pur waqaar ghazal ke liye... tashreef laaate rahiyega
Shaad.....
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2nd July 2014, 05:12 PM
Achchey ashaar huye hai.....daad qabool farmaaiye
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3rd July 2014, 01:20 PM
Masoom Piyar Sahab... aapki daad ka be-had shukria....
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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3rd July 2014, 01:21 PM
Sumit Anjan Sahab.....!
Aapki Daad Par Tah-e-Dil Se Mashkoor-o-Mamnoon Hun...
Is Zarrah-nawaazi ka Be-had shukria...
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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3rd July 2014, 01:22 PM
Zainy Ji...........!
Aapki Hausla-afzaayi Se Khushi Hui...
Shadaab Rahiye...
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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3rd July 2014, 01:24 PM
Janab Sameer Shaad Sahab....!
Aapki Is Zarrah-nawaazi Ka Be-had Shukria...
Aapki Hausla-Afzaayi Par Mashkoor-o-Mamnoon Hun...
khush rahiye
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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3rd July 2014, 01:25 PM
Janab Ufaq Sahab....!
Aapki Daaad Ka Bahot Bahot Shukria.....
Khush rahiye
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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3rd July 2014, 11:33 PM
Waaah !!! Behtareen ghazal se bazm ko nawaza hai Shakil sahab aapne !!! Aur ek dum taaze, alag aur mushkil radeef ko kis hunar se nibhaaya hai dekhte hi banta hai !! Khoobsurat aur asardaar ghazal par dheron daad !!!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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4th July 2014, 08:15 AM
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Originally Posted by AHMAD SHAKIL
Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaaab…!Dosto Aik Ghazal Ke Chand Ashaar Pesh Hain….Ummiid hai Pasand aayen ge….
ZEHAN ME RAKHNA
Hamaray Dil Ko Hai Jo Be-Qaraari , Zehan Me Rakhna
Saraa-sar Ye Inaayat Hai Tumhaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Tumhaaray Baad Jeenay Ka Tasawwur Hee Nahi Mumkin
Tumharay Saath Hain Saansen Hamaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Zamanay Ke Liye JanaaN Bhalay Tum Kuch Bhi Ho Lekin
Hamaaray Waastay Dunia Ho Saari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Bhala Kab Bhool Paao Gay Bhulanay Se Mujhay Hamdam
Lahoo Ban Ke RagoN Me Hun Main Jaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Kabhi Jo Dushman-e-JaaN Bhi Hamaara Zabt Gar Parkhay
Milay Gi Usko Hum Me Inkisaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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Waah AHMAD SHAKIL sahab waah....kya khoob he...kitnaa aasaan hai sochna or kitna mushquil hai kehna .......
husn-e-byan ki had se yuN hi Guzar jaana our alphaasoN ka ba-khoobi istemaal ...
Bahut khoob......merii jaanib se dhairoN daad janaab.....
Harash Mahajan
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4th July 2014, 11:48 AM
Janab Mohtaram Zarrah Sahab....!
Aap Ki Is Zarrah-nawaazi Par Tah-e-Dil se Mashkoor-o-Mamnoon Hun....
Khush Rahiye
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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4th July 2014, 11:49 AM
Harash Mahajan Ji.....!
Aap Ne Jis Khuloos Se Is Adnaa Kalaam Ko saraaha Hai, Uske Liye Mashkoor Hun Aapka...
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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4th July 2014, 12:06 PM
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Tumharay Saath Hain Saansen Hamaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Zamanay Ke Liye JanaaN Bhalay Tum Kuch Bhi Ho Lekin
Hamaaray Waastay Dunia Ho Saari, Zehan Me Rakhna
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waaaaaaahhhhhhh
bahut khubbbbbbbbbbbbb
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5th July 2014, 01:15 PM
Rajeev Sharma Sahab..! Hausla afzzayi ka bahot SHukria.......
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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5th July 2014, 06:24 PM
Bhut umdaa achi radeef ke sath bhut insaaf kia hai aapne behtreen ghzal ke liyN daad paish e khidmat hai qubool farmaaiye
aslam
zindagi ke haseen lamhe ka
Khoobsurat sa intekhaab ho tum
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10th July 2014, 12:15 PM
Jana Mohtaram Aslam Noor Sahab....!
Aapki Zarrah-nawaazi PAr Tah-e-Dil Se Mashkoor-o-Mamnoon Hun....
Khush Rahiye
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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10th July 2014, 11:56 PM
Zamanay Ke Liye JanaaN Bhalay Tum Kuch Bhi Ho Lekin
Hamaaray Waastay Dunia Ho Saari, Zehan Me Rakhna
wahh wahh... boht khoob Ahmad bhai...
aise hi mehfil roshan kartay rahiye,,
DuaooN k saath ijaazat,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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5th September 2015, 02:28 PM
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Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaaab…!Dosto Aik Ghazal Ke Chand Ashaar Pesh Hain….Ummiid hai Pasand aayen ge….
ZEHAN ME RAKHNA
Hamaray Dil Ko Hai Jo Be-Qaraari , Zehan Me Rakhna
Saraa-sar Ye Inaayat Hai Tumhaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Tumhaaray Baad Jeenay Ka Tasawwur Hee Nahi Mumkin
Tumharay Saath Hain Saansen Hamaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Zamanay Ke Liye JanaaN Bhalay Tum Kuch Bhi Ho Lekin
Hamaaray Waastay Dunia Ho Saari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Bhala Kab Bhool Paao Gay Bhulanay Se Mujhay Hamdam
Lahoo Ban Ke RagoN Me Hun Main Jaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Kabhi Jo Dushman-e-JaaN Bhi Hamaara Zabt Gar Parkhay
Milay Gi Usko Hum Me Inkisaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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Ahmad Shakil ji...........behad khoobsurat gazal hai yeh aapki....aap es par nazar gye to socha kyu na esko highlight kiya jaaye.
Zamanay Ke Liye JanaaN Bhalay Tum Kuch Bhi Ho Lekin
Hamaaray Waastay Dunia Ho Saari, Zehan Me Rakhna
yeh wala sher dil ke khaas kareeb rha.
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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6th September 2015, 06:01 PM
Wah Ahmed ji....
Kya baat kya baat....
Sunita didi ki badoulat humko bhi apki ghazal padne ka anand mila.
Ek ek sher par anayaas hi muh se waah waah nikli.
Bohut khoob.....
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7th September 2015, 12:26 PM
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Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaaab…!Dosto Aik Ghazal Ke Chand Ashaar Pesh Hain….Ummiid hai Pasand aayen ge….
ZEHAN ME RAKHNA
Hamaray Dil Ko Hai Jo Be-Qaraari , Zehan Me Rakhna
Saraa-sar Ye Inaayat Hai Tumhaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Tumhaaray Baad Jeenay Ka Tasawwur Hee Nahi Mumkin
Tumharay Saath Hain Saansen Hamaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Zamanay Ke Liye JanaaN Bhalay Tum Kuch Bhi Ho Lekin
Hamaaray Waastay Dunia Ho Saari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Bhala Kab Bhool Paao Gay Bhulanay Se Mujhay Hamdam
Lahoo Ban Ke RagoN Me Hun Main Jaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
Kabhi Jo Dushman-e-JaaN Bhi Hamaara Zabt Gar Parkhay
Milay Gi Usko Hum Me Inkisaari, Zehan Me Rakhna
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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"Kabhi Jo Dushman-e-JaaN Bhi Hamaara Zabt Gar Parkhay
Milay Gi Usko Hum Me Inkisaari, Zehan Me Rakhna"
Ek Achi peshkash....daad !!!
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7th September 2015, 10:02 PM
khoobsoorat peshkash ahmed bhai...............................
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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8th September 2015, 03:09 PM
waah bohat khoob..................
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