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Kuchh Sher - 5th June 2005, 10:10 AM

Aadab,

Waise main koi shayar kism ka insaan nahi. Lekin kabhi kabhi kuch baate, kabhi kabhi shayri ke andaaz mein dil se nikal jaati hain. Aise hi kuchh sher, pehli baar yahan post kar raha hoon. Waise ye kis hudd tak 'sher' hain muze pata nahi, phir bhi, aap ki raay padhna pasand karoonga.

Arz Hai,

Woh jab maujood the to ye badnaseebi thi
ke ye lab, dil ki baatein keh na sake
Unse judaai ka dard dil mein is tarah baith gaya
ke ashk bhi in aankhon se beh na sake


Kabhi kabhi zindagi kya gazab khel khilati hain
ek hi pal mein kitna bada paath dilati hain
band aankhon mein sara sansaar dikhati hain
Zindagi hi humein jeena sikhati hain


Agar ghum hi na hote to khushi ka maza kise aata
Khushi hi na hoti to ghum ko ghum kaun kehta


Tanhai mein jee kar itna badal gaya yeh chehra
Muskurakar dekhne ki ise aadat na rahgi
Angaar ugalte nain itne badal chuke hain ab
Ke pyaar se koi dekhe, yeh chaahat na rahi.


Kabhi kisi ki yaad se dil pagal sa hota hain
Man hi man tanhai mein chupke se ye rota hain
Doctor se main milta hoon problem meri sunaata hoon
Na jaane kya sochta hain, par doctor mujh me hastaa hain


Kabhi kabhi ye jeevan veeraana lagta hain
Kabaad mein pada ek item puraana lagta hain
Har ek pal phir kitna long lagta hain
Slow tune pe gaaya sad song lagta hain
Kabhi lagta bhi hain ke koi is jeevan mein aa jaaye
Dil ke aasman par baadal sa chha jaaye
Pyar ke side effects ko jaan kar yeh khwaishe ruk jaati hain
Bas yun hi sochta rehta hoon aur palke jhuk jaati hain.


Bas itna hi.

Khushaamdeen !

Shukriya.
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koi to reply do yar, acchha bura kaisa bhi chalega.
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hudd ho gayi - 16th June 2005, 09:31 AM

Aap sab mere sher padh ke itne khaamosh kyon hai? 141 views hain aur ek bhi reply nahi??? Kya itne bure hain ye sher? Mere aur 2 posts ko bhi koi jawaab nahi aaya hain. I am really really disappointed.

Khair,
Aisa samaz leta hoon ke ye sher itne acchhe nahi hai.

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Aadab_Keya Houa Agar Kisi Ne Jawab Nahin Diya Hain Tou :) - 21st June 2005, 11:35 PM

Hope You are well Jitne Bhi Sher Aur Qaata Likhhe Hain~Bohot Achchhe Hain_Koii Shaq Nahin Hain...Ek Baat Kahoun? Itne Sare Sher Ek Saath Likhhe Hain Aapne Ki Kis Ko Chod Kar Kis Ki Tareef Kare Ham Baas Yahin Soch Kar Reh Jaate Hain...**Dil Ko Chhun Gaye Hain...Dil Ki Gehraaion Se Shukriya Aur Dher Sare Phoul Kuboul Kijiyega **Likhhte Rahiyega~Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care**...**God bless You.

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shukriya. shimul ji. bahut bahut shukriya.
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22nd June 2005, 03:43 PM

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