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ębaarat-e-aSHqiya - 23rd March 2004, 06:53 PM

'ębaarat-e-aSHqiya'

Doston aaj ki mehfil 'ębaarat-e-aSHqiya' mein aap sab ka isteqbaal karta hoon.
Ibteda ke liye ek saghiir si kehta hoon

kalaam ka wazn kalam se nahi
siyaahi se hota hai

figaar ka zakhm khoon se nahi
judaayi se hota hai

is aashiyaane mein aap jaise bahut nayaab aur bey naziir shayar maujood hai.
tag o dau daqiiq laher ko har shaqs se waaqif karaane ki hai. Is mehfil ka hadaf sirf aapke tasawwur ki pehchaan nahi albattah aapke aandar ke shayar ke gehraayi ko chuune ki koshish hai. Har Mehfil ki tarah yaha bhi kuch dastuur hai jinhe zehan mein rakh kar aapko likhna hoga. Shuruwaat mo^tadil(Moderator) ke diye gaye eHsaas/lafz se hogi, aapko us eHsaas/lafz ko lekar ek ghazal likhni hai. Aur Yaad rahe

1. Ghazal mein kam se kam 4 sher hone zaroori hai. Minimum 4 sher aur maximum ki hadd tehy karke aapki shayri ko baandhne ki himaakat humse na hogi

2. Ek ehsaas ko pichle shayar ke kahe aandaaz mein dubaara nahi dohraaya jayega.

3. Aap back to back post nahi kar sakte. Aapne post ke baad kisi aur ko unke khayalat numaayaań karne ka maauka diya jaaye.

4. Ek expresson/thought ko 10-12 alag ghazal/nazm par mukammal samjha jayega aur ek naya lafz/ehsaas ko dar yaaft kiya jayegaa.

5. Last but not least, all the writing here has to be yours. Aap kisi bhi shayar ya phir filmi geet nahi likh sakte, koshish aapke andar ke shayar se guftagu ki hai, yaad rahe.


Phirse ek baar aap sabka is mehfil mein istakbaal hai, aur ummiid hai ki hum sabko ko yaha kuch umda aur behtrayeen nazm/shero se bahut kuch sikhne ko milega

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