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Love Bahut khoobsurat ho tum - 10th April 2009, 08:04 PM

AAp sab mera Salam

maine phir aapke samne ek ghazal pash karna chahta hoon
ummed karta hoon ki aapko ye choti se koshish pasand aaygi
to pash hai




Bahut khoobsurat ho tum
kabhi main kahu k mohabbat hai tumse
to mujhko khudara galat na samajhna
k meri jaruirat ho tum
bahut khoobsurat ho tum


hai phoolo ke jaisi ye baahe tumhari
hai khamosh jaadu nigahe tumhari
jo kaante ho sab apne daman me bhar loon
saaja do main kaliyo se raahe tumhari
najar se jamane ki khud ko bachana
kisi or se dekho dil na lagana
k meri jaroort ho tum
bahut khoobsurt ho tum




hai chahra tumhara k din hain sunhara
unpe ye kali ghatao ka pahra
gulabo sa najuk mahakta badan hain
hai lab ye tumhare k khilta chaman hai
bikhare jo julfe to sarmaye badal
jo fariste bhi dekhe to ho jaye pagal
wo pakija murat ho tum
bahut khoobsurat ho tum



jo bankar kali muskurati hai aksar
tanhaito me jo rulati hai aksar
jo lamho hi lamho me duniya badal de
jo shayar ko de jaye pahlu gazal ke
chipana bhi chau to chipaye na jaye
bhulana jo chahoon to bhulaye na jaye
wo pahli mohabbat ho tum
bahut khoobsurat ho tum
bahut khoobsurat ho tum



kaise kahu ke kitna pyar hai tumse
kaise kahu k dil ka karar hai tumse
tumhari yaad se hi hooti hai mri har subha or sham
k main jinda hoon ye bhi ahasas hai tumse
   
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10th April 2009, 08:14 PM
bahot khubsoorat Nazam kaha hai aapne Broken Heart jee
(mere khayal se yeh nazam hai ghazal nahin hai)

ehesaas achha hai
khus rahiye
Diya


Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai

Goodbye SDC

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10th April 2009, 08:21 PM
thanks sir
main to khush rahne ki koshish me hi hoon
   
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10th April 2009, 10:09 PM
Wah wah, broken heart ji...
Aapka andaaz wakai alag hai...
Hame pasand aaya,
aate rahiyega,
khush rahiyega...
   
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18th April 2009, 01:58 PM
hello

mujhe tumhare ye khubsurat Ghazal
bahut hi khubsurat lagi.

aise hi likhte rehna
bhasaha mai aur shabdo aur acha paryiaas karna

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20th April 2009, 06:50 PM
hum aapki salah ka dhayan rakhege or aage bhi aapke samax tashreef le ke aaunga.
   
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25th April 2009, 02:13 AM
awesome nazm....................... broken-heart ji, dil se daad kubool kijiye


Nalin

Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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30th April 2009, 12:45 PM
thanks nalin
I m very thanful to u to read my nazam
i will reach ur blog as soon as possible


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5th May 2009, 12:04 AM
wah wah wah lajawab hum to aap ke diwane ho gaye hai kash me bhi aap ke jaisa likha sakata......bahot hai arche .......
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Frst of all wud like to know ur name........tumhari poem bht achchi hai, padhne k baad ye ehsaas hota hai ki ye tumhari true feelings hai sirf thought nahiN hai, agar feelings sachche ho to likhawat me apne aap jaan ajati hai......gud work........KEEP IT UP.
   
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6th October 2009, 12:37 PM
broken heart saheb....kya yeh nazm aapne likhi hai.............???



Zainy


PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...

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11th October 2009, 09:30 PM
Broken hearts ji Tahir Faraz sahab ki umda nazam yanha pesh karne ke liye aapka shaukriya

"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"


Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko,
wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
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Love 17th December 2009, 02:10 PM
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Broken hearts ji Tahir Faraz sahab ki umda nazam yanha pesh karne ke liye aapka shaukriya

Aapka bhi shukriya kashif sahab
maine ye nazam mere ek friend ki diary me padhi thi
usse bhi ye bahut pasand aaye thi par writer ka pata nahi tha
aapne bata diya uske liye ek baar phir dhanyawad.


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18th November 2010, 10:57 AM
Janab Broken Heart:

Kisi aur ki Nazm apne naam lena achi baat nahi hoti..."Bahut Khoobsurat ho tum" Tahir Faraz Sahab ki nazm hai. Please check: [URL="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3jwwwGYwRVs"]

Thanks for sharing a beautiful nazm.

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Sivate Hussain
   
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