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25th March 2005, 01:00 PM
Doston,
Kucch likhne ki koshish ki hai fir ek baar.. technaically poori tarah thhek nahi hai.. jaanta hoon.... koshish kar raha hoon improve karne kii... ummeed hai aapko pasand aayega!! (Yeh mere dil ke kareeb hai... kyunki isme mere sath mere kucch apnon ki bhi mehnat hai  )=============================== Wo pehli nazar uski kuch kar to gayi thi, Dheeme se mere dil ko woh har to gayi thi Meethi ik muskaan apne honthon par sajakar Madhosh yuN fizaon ko bhi kar to gayi thi Thha laazmi yun mera yaadon me uski khona vaar-e-nigah se dil taar-taar kar to gayi thi Dekh ke woh uska Andaaz-E-Aashikana aahat bhar se saans meri thhahar to gayi thhi chhaya hua thha har dam aalam-e-tasavvur Kaafir is aashiq ko pal me kar to gayi thhi. -- Pulkit Gupta Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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25th March 2005, 01:17 PM
Pulkit,
achha likha hai. keet it up.. Garima |
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25th March 2005, 03:17 PM
Thanks Garima!!
Tumhe accha laga lekin kucch samjah nahi ayaa.. mujhe pata hai LOL....hota hai hota hai!! Tum yahan aayin accha laga Doo keep motvating me.. TCLagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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25th March 2005, 03:19 PM
bahut aacha likha ....... hamesha ki tarah .......and i liked it like always ........keep it up ...... god bless u
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25th March 2005, 03:37 PM
dhadkane do char dhadkna bhul gayi..
bahot kareeb se voh bekhabar jo gayi thi! pulkit.......the form u'v chosen of this gazal is very beautiful ..n wid the pure feelings u have added giltter 2 it...han bas as u know u can create better n gr8er magic..! ..(can say dis after having read ur poem on frenship!)tc komal |
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Re: Wo pehli nazar uski... -
25th March 2005, 03:46 PM
Wo pehli nazar uski kuch kar to gayi thi,
Dheeme se mere dil ko woh har to gayi thi wah... Meethi ik muskaan apne honthon par sajakar Madhosh yuN fizaon ko bhi kar to gayi thi this one is too good Thha laazmi yun mera yaadon me uski khona vaar-e-nigah se dil taar-taar kar to gayi thi wah wah wah ... Dekh ke woh uska Andaaz-E-Aashikana aahat bhar se saans meri thhahar to gayi thhi aisa ho hi jata hai janaab... chhaya hua thha har dam aalam-e-tasavvur Kaafir is aashiq ko pal me kar to gayi thhi. beautyfull expression!... pulkit bhai... bohat accha laga ye kalaam aapki kalam se ... sach ab to aap bohat umda shayar ho gaye ho .. maiN to bas padhta hi reh gaya aapke is ehsaas ko .. sach aaj ye bohat accha laga ... wahaN se jyada accha ... ek post ke roop maiN ... khair ab to autograph lene ke liye peeche peeche bhagna padega ... yuN hi likhte rehna mere bhai aapka bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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25th March 2005, 05:00 PM
Pyare Pulkit Bhai,
Woh dusra kalaam uska, kuch ghayal kar gaya aise Dil machal nikal chala, hum kalaam parhte reh gaye  Bohot hi pyaara likha hai mere bhai. Bas uhi amrita ka naam leke lage raho  Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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25th March 2005, 06:34 PM
Dear Mandy!!
Tum kabhi kabhi site par aati ho.. par meri post par pahunch hi jaati ho...Always feel good to recieve ur Daad... tum saath deti rehna dost.....main likhta rahoonga Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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28th March 2005, 11:45 AM
dhadkane do char dhadkna bhul gayi..
bahot kareeb se voh bekhabar jo gayi thi! Ur Two lines expressed the whole saar of my ghazal Dear Komal! Glad to know that u liked this one 2... Bass Dost likhne ki koshihs kar rahe hian.. get so much of motivation and love frm u friends ke ab kalam rukna hi nahi chaahti...I know... that one to me is the best till now Glad that u feel the same way 2 Saath to tumhara ab rahega hi naa Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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28th March 2005, 12:55 PM
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28th March 2005, 06:55 PM
Pyaare Kunaall!!
Tumhari Waah paakr lagta hia ke vakayi kucch achieve kiya hai Tumne itni tareef kar di ke main bhi dobara padhne laga ke vakayi itna achha hai kya LOL....Autograph LOL..Tum to apne ho, humesha dil ke paas... tumhe autograph ki kya zaroorat Saath dete rehna bhai... main likhta rahoonga Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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28th March 2005, 07:20 PM
hi!
tum to fullfledjed shayar hi ban gaye....bada accha accha likhne lage ho aajkal..waise pyar main aisa hi hota hain bada accha kalam hain pyara pyara..really liked it.....kuch main bhi likh du...tumhare jaisa accha nahin ban paaya par kuch likhne ka aaj man ho raha hain so likh deti hoon...Woh na aayega us shaam yeh pata tha lekin, ishq mein intezar ki aadat hi aisi ho gayi thi mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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28th March 2005, 10:21 PM
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Fantastic too good brilliant... Ab kya kahon... Bahut jald tum ek mukamal shayar ban jaoge... Shayri ki seediyan bahut joro se cahdh rahe ho... Wah kya baat hai too good Thanks Rohin |
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28th March 2005, 10:44 PM
Wah Pulkit ji Wah!
Aapki yeh rachna parhkar bahut accha laga.... aap bhi itna accha likhte hai jaankar khushi huyi... aaise hi likhte rehna aur yeh mehfil ko sajaye rakhna.... humhari daad kubul karna! Take care* |
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28th March 2005, 11:58 PM
pulkitji
bahut khoob daad kubul kijiye sonal |
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29th March 2005, 05:19 PM
Dearestt Salim!
Ab dekho.. tumne kaha ke bhaai aap Amrita ji ko bhool gaye.. aur hum aa gaye waapis ishq section me....Tumhari daad mil gayi likhan safal ho gaya!! aur is baar to sureeli daad Woh dusra kalaam uska, kuch ghayal kar gaya aise Dil machal nikal chala, hum kalaam parhte reh gaye Kya baat hai!! Sir.. aapka kalaam kahan hai... aapki khwaabon ki mallika ke oopar jo kalaam likha jaayega... usko hum kya bade bade padhte reh jaayenge!! Saath hi rehna Dost... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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29th March 2005, 05:27 PM
Didi!
Ishq ho to aisa LOL main to kehta hoon.. Ishq ho to aisa naa ho.. ke us ko imagine kar ke likhna pade Aapki daad bahut valuable hai... Apna khyal rakhiye.. do TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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29th March 2005, 05:40 PM
acha to hai, kya technicality ki baat karte ho.
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29th March 2005, 07:27 PM
Bahut khoob mere sarkaar....bhai maza aa gaya tumhaara ye andaaz parhkar....
Dua karta hooN ye roomani mahaul bana rahe yooNhi. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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29th March 2005, 07:32 PM
pulkit...bahut..bass bahut hi pyaari hai yee poem..really so cute..cho chweett:"> keep writing pulkit...
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30th March 2005, 11:38 AM
Hi pulkit,
How r u? Yaar itna chcha likha hai phir bhi improve ki baat kar rahe hoooo.. Well yaar..... Keep writing and sharing with us.... Ajmal Tumne Chaha hi nahin Chahne Walon ki Tarha... |
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30th March 2005, 06:27 PM
Dear Mausam
Full Fledged Shayar LOL... Sahi kaha tumne Pyaar me aisa hi hota hai... woh gana hai na.... MAin shayar to nahi magar ae Amrita....jab se chhaha maine tujkhko shayri aa gayi LOL.... Acchaa saa pyaarapyaaara..... So Swett.. tumhe accha laga aur kya chhaiye Woh na aayega us shaam yeh pata tha lekin, ishq mein intezar ki aadat hi aisi ho gayi thi Waaaaaaahhh... Such a beautiful 2 liner.... I loved it buddy.. Infact i love when somebody replies with a sher in return.. just gives me a feeling that he/she really likd my writing Apna khyal rakho Dost.. saath to hum bana ke rakhenge Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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30th March 2005, 06:32 PM
Dear Rohin!
Ab tumhe to pasand aana hi thha... Isis post se to height of coincidences shuru hue thhe.... Humare ehsaas kis level tak same ho gaye thhe... yeh hum hi jaante hain Seedhiyon ka to pata nahi.. haan... apnon ka saath barabar mil raha hai... tumhe to main pakad ke rakhoonga LOLLagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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30th March 2005, 06:43 PM
Dear Parul...
Once again u r here to motivate me... Its my pleasure buddy that u've been following my post and find improvement in me Tumhari daad sar aankhon par...Saath rehna Dost... hum koshihs karte rahenge Plz Do TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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30th March 2005, 06:48 PM
Dear Sony!
Glad to know that u liked my effort... Aapka saath rahega to hum kohsihs zaari rakhenge...Aaise hi saath banaye rakhiyega TCLagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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30th March 2005, 07:24 PM
Waah pulkit!
kamaal karte jaa rahe ho...din ba din nikhaar aa raha hai...bada mast likha hai...my kind of verse...lol... mujhe jo line sabse zyada lubha gayi woh thee.. aahat bhar se saans meri thhahar to gayi thhi bahut khuub...shabaash...younhi badte jaana is fan mein... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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31st March 2005, 04:59 PM
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Thanks for the apprecitaion buddy.. Well I've just started on writing.. so just trying to gather as many tips as i cna from the expert shayars around.. tumhe accha laga jankar khushi hui! Saath dete rehna Dost! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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Chaand Bhaaii!! Aap bhi naa.. Sarkaar kya hota hai LOL.... Yeh jaankar bhi accha laga ke jiske andaaz ke hum kaayal hain use bhi humara likha pasand aa raha hai!! Aapki dua saath hai aur Amrita ki mohabbat hai to hum likhte rahenge isi roomani andaaz me LOL Bhaiia.. saath dete rhena Do TCLagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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31st March 2005, 05:04 PM
Ms.. HawaHawai.. I mean Pallavi!
Aapko pasand aa gayi aur kyaa chhaiye... Good to see ur reply.. I'll try to keep up to your expectations...Aapka saath ahi to kalam chalti rahegi.... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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31st March 2005, 06:35 PM
Wo pehli nazar uski kuch kar to gayi thi,
Dheeme se mere dil ko woh har to gayi thi hi pulkit tumahri ye post kitni fanstic hai...ye to ab baatne ki jaruraat nahi rahi....ab to isski copies milne lagi hai hain yahan.....name aur fame ab dono aapke pass hain......but not to worry....tumhara peecha naa chodoongi soniye(as u say ki i follow u)....wait wait....vo din door nahi jub humare bhi fame hoga...LOL!!!! Shalini |
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Dear Ajmal!
Aapko accha laga jaan khuhsi hui...Ssekhne ka to aisa hai ke its an ongoing process.. and i am just a new comer... just started writing a month back... So technicalities ka dhyan rakhna padhta hai U keep supporting, I will definitely keep writing and sharing.. do tC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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Pranaam! Aapko itnai pasand aayi apne shishy ki rachna.. humen khushi hui.... LOLaapka aashirwaad aur Amrita ka pyaar satthh hai to hum badeh jaaynge Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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2nd April 2005, 02:16 PM
Dear Shalu!
Ab kya khoon tumse.. tumhara bhai mashhoor ho gaya hai.. mashhor hote hi humne pana group bhi 'Mashhoor Shayr' Kar liya Tum shauk se peechha karo... u know Fan following is big boost for evry artist.. Aur jab tak Software ka pirated version market me naa ho.. software popular nahi hota.... Soo uu keep it Up Tumhara fann abhi kaun sa kam hai... ask nebody to name the most populare keyboard todu... :-p.. whan bhi naam mera hi pehle aayega LOL Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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2nd April 2005, 07:06 PM
Pulkit bhai
Aaj tumhari Rachna dekhey........it is so sweet.....U have started writing so beautifully.......Ab koi nahi keh sakta ki pulkit ne haal hi mein likhna shuru kiya hay........I can see the beauty with perfection in ur poetry........Muskurahat par kitna khoobsurat likha hay.......Abhi bhi woh muskurahat bahut khoobsurat lag rahi hay tumharey rachna se. Wo pehli nazar uski kuch kar to gayi thi, Dheeme se mere dil ko woh har to gayi thi Meethi ik muskaan apne honthon par sajakar Madhosh yuN fizaon ko bhi kar to gayi thi Thha laazmi yun mera yaadon me uski khona vaar-e-nigah se dil taar-taar kar to gayi thi Dekh ke woh uska Andaaz-E-Aashikana aahat bhar se saans meri thhahar to gayi thhi chhaya hua thha har dam aalam-e-tasavvur Kaafir is aashiq ko pal me kar to gayi thhi. Beauty with perfection That's all I can say......Di ki daad kabul karna. |
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