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30th August 2003, 12:01 PM

Bhai?

LOL

Dard ji... isi liye Bedil aur Swapnn yun hans rahe hain.. kyonki hum laRki hain.. to bhai kaise ho sakte hain??

Samajh sakte hain ki aapse shayad ye samajhne me ghalati ho gayi.. ye dono to sirf mazaak kar rahe hain.. don't mind it!


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.. - 30th August 2003, 09:06 PM

ohh banno jee... to ye hei baat,

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इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

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30th August 2003, 10:30 PM

banno jee, afsaan jee.

I m sorry zara samajhne me galti ho gai. mei aapka naya sathi hun. isliye bhai bol diya.

Maaf nai karenge mujhe?



लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

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31st August 2003, 12:12 PM

Dard ji.. jaise humne kaha, hum samajh sakte hain ki aapse ghalati ho gayi.. aisa pehli bhi ho chuka hai humare saath... chalta hai, I'm used to it.. aap ko maafi maangne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai..


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hi - 31st August 2003, 01:10 PM

Dard-e-sush...pareshan na ho ye inke sath aksar hota hai..hum bhi aesa hii dhoka kha gaye thai...par hume kabhi pucha nahii..bass hum insen Mr aur miss dono samjh kar bate karte rahe...LOL aur bas ek dinn pata pad gaya ye dono mai se ek hai dono nahi....LOL
   
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1st September 2003, 10:47 PM

banno jee,

i promis ab mei dhokha nai khaunga

take care


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
   
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hi - 2nd September 2003, 05:02 AM

dear dard e sush j
aapki ghaazal se bahtu sehmat hu mein....
hum yaar aaj bhi dard se liptey hai..aur log hai ki humsey ( so called)) lipat kar bhul jaatey hai hehe ( IF U KNOW WHAT I MEAN)

greatly expressed

Malum hei? mei bhi insaan hun!
Tanha hun gam se pareshan hun!

i luved this one

keep writing

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2nd September 2003, 07:43 AM

dardji,
bahot daer se aayi hu... par aana to thha hi ...... naya andaaj jaroor hai par muje apna sa hi laga kyun ki mere ahessas bhi kuchh aise hi jyada tar kisi ko kahte huae hi bayaan hote rahte hai...
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2nd September 2003, 11:07 PM

luvpriya jee,
aap bahut nayab shayra hein. aapne yahan aake jo izzatafzahi ki meri bahur mashkoor hun aapka.


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
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9th September 2003, 12:06 AM

sush jee sach me,

is me kuch khas baat hei jo hame yahan khinch lati hei. bahut acha aapne likha. yaadgar ban gai hei ye aapki likhi hui feelings.


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...... - 11th September 2003, 07:10 AM

mohtarma,

Aap logon ne is nacheez ko aasman pe bitha diya hei. Lagta hei samhalna mushkil hei yahan. Mujhe niche hi rehne dijiye please.




लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
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23rd April 2007, 02:37 AM

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Kaun hei bhai? kaun hei wahan?
kyun jalata hei mera ashiyan?
rehne do bhai rehne do!
meri yadein hein yahan!

Arre!! tum lagte to insaan ho!
phir kese dard se anjaan ho?
Malum hei? mei bhi insaan hun!
Tanha hun gam se pareshan hun!

Jante ho mera sab kuch hei wahan?
wahi jagha mene pyar kiya tha jahan!
Wo bartan chua tha usne jisko
wo roomal bhool gai thin wo jisko

wo chair bhi hei wahan bethe the wo jahan
yahi wo ghar hei wo aate the jahan
rehne do bhai rehne do!
meri yadein hein wahan!
bahut khub

yaade agar wohi hi jal gai to bachega kya hamare pass haan???

apni yado ko khone ka dar uff kitna dard de jata hai

yuhi likhna dost

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Kaun hei bhai? kaun hei wahan?
kyun jalata hei mera ashiyan?
rehne do bhai rehne do!
meri yadein hein yahan!

Arre!! tum lagte to insaan ho!
phir kese dard se anjaan ho?
Malum hei? mei bhi insaan hun!
Tanha hun gam se pareshan hun!

Jante ho mera sab kuch hei wahan?
wahi jagha mene pyar kiya tha jahan!
Wo bartan chua tha usne jisko
wo roomal bhool gai thin wo jisko

wo chair bhi hei wahan bethe the wo jahan
yahi wo ghar hei wo aate the jahan
rehne do bhai rehne do!
meri yadein hein wahan!
dost aapki yeh purani nazam aaj padna naseeb hue....sach mein yaadey bahut pyari hoti hai...ensaan to saath chorr jatey hain...par yeh yaadey hamesha waffa karti hai...saath rahti hai.n

kush rahiye

aapki dost


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20th March 2022, 11:12 PM

Thanks Sakhi Ji, Sunita Ji
Replying to you after 15 years.
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Hope you are doing good.

God Bless you


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

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