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sabit kar de ke tu hi bhagwan hai - 29th July 2013, 03:37 PM

Mujh se kaha khuda ne mat kar intzaar uska mushkil hai milna is janam mein,
Maine kaha khuda se lene de maja intzaar ka agle janam mein to mumkin hai..

Kaha khuda ne mat kar nadaani dekh bhoot pachhtayega,
Maine kaha mai bhi dekhta hu tu kab tak meri rooh ko tadpayega..

Fir kaha khuda ne bhool ja use chal tuje jannat ki hoor se milwata hu,
Maine kaha jara dekh mere mehboob ka chehra tujhe jannat ki hoor bhoolwata hu..

Tilmilaakar bola khuda mat bhool apni auokaat ke tu sirf ek insaan hai,
Kaha maine to mila de mujhe mere pyaar se or saabit kar de ke tu hi BHAGWAAN hai..
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har kisi k naseeb mein kaha likhi hoti h CHAHATE yaha,

Kuch log duniya mein aate h fakat TANHAAIYO ke liye

   
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29th July 2013, 04:57 PM

bahot khoob janaab , bahot khoob......

Fir kaha khuda ne bhool ja use chal tuje jannat ki hoor se milwata hu,
Maine kaha jara dekh mere mehboob ka chehra tujhe jannat ki hoor bhoolwata hu..


ye lines bahot acchi lagiiN, aur ehsaas bahot naye lage...... keep writing.

Shaad....


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29th July 2013, 07:15 PM

ye lines bahot acchi lagiiN, aur ehsaas bahot naye lage...... keep writing.

Shaad....[/QUOTE]
Sameer jee ye lines puneet jee ne nahin likhi hain...unhone not mine likha hai...aapko keep writing kee jagah keep sharing likhna chahiye tha.....according to me...thanx.



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29th July 2013, 10:08 PM

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ye lines bahot acchi lagiiN, aur ehsaas bahot naye lage...... keep writing.

Shaad....
Sameer jee ye lines puneet jee ne nahin likhi hain...unhone not mine likha hai...aapko keep writing kee jagah keep sharing likhna chahiye tha.....according to me...thanx.
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Ohh... bhai behad shukriyaa jo aaapke khabar kar di, naacheez ki nazar se shayad chook ho gayee jis ki wajah se ye galtii hui.. koshish rahegi ke aaindah se yooN galtiyaan na hon... aap bhi apna khyaaala rakhiye...

Shaad.....


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