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bahot khoob sher kahe aap sab ne.....
meraa Aaj ka sher........
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"raat teri yaadoN ne dil ko es tarah cheda,
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-Bashir Badr
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7th May 2015, 04:46 PM
Bahut khoob sher sunita di...
shaad jii..
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Ab ye bhi nahi theek ki har dard mita den..
Kuch dard kaleje se lagane ke liye hain.
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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7th May 2015, 06:26 PM
Kaafi dinon se ek khwaahish si rahi hai mujh ko..
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Band karo ye rona..
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8th May 2015, 12:21 AM
Aaj ka taaza likha sher bazm mein rakh raha hooN
zakhm bhi aakar mujhe is dil-baree se mile
lahuluhaan ho gaya aah-e-dil nikle binaa....
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zakhm bhi aakar mujhe is dil-baree se mile
lahuluhaan ho gaya aah-e-dil nikle binaa....
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waahh mast bhai..... kisi khanjar ki tarah dil tak utartaa chalaa gayaa aapka ye sher .............. bahot khoob..
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waaahh kyaa baat kahi hai Sarikaa jee ke kyaa kahne..... bahot khoob
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Bahut khoob sher sunita di...
shaad jii..
Aaj ka mera sher...
Ab ye bhi nahi theek ki har dard mita den..
Kuch dard kaleje se lagane ke liye hain.
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hi madhu ji..... sher to bahot khoob ppesh kiyaa hai aapne.... magar mera ek sawaal thaa.... wo main aapse pm me pooch loonga......
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hi madhu ji..... sher to bahot khoob ppesh kiyaa hai aapne.... magar mera ek sawaal thaa.... wo main aapse pm me pooch loonga......
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Shukriya shaad jii..aapka ishara samajh gayi main..aur correction bhi kar diya hai...
thank u....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Shukriya shaad jii..aapka ishara samajh gayi main..aur correction bhi kar diya hai...
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dhanyawaad.....................
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bahot khoob sher kahe aap sab ne.....
meraa Aaj ka sher........
sitam ki had hai dekhiye unko,
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"raat teri yaadoN ne dil ko es tarah cheda,
jaise koi chutki le naram naram gaaloN meiN"
-Bashir Badr
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Bahut khoob sher sunita di...
shaad jii..
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Ab ye bhi nahi theek ki har dard mita den..
Kuch dard kaleje se lagane ke liye hain.
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Kaafi dinon se ek khwaahish si rahi hai mujh ko..
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Ki kisi udaas sham mein woh aa kar kahen.!
Band karo ye rona..
Lo hum laut aaye tumhaare liye …
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Aaj ka taaza likha sher bazm mein rakh raha hooN
zakhm bhi aakar mujhe is dil-baree se mile
lahuluhaan ho gaya aah-e-dil nikle binaa....
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aik se bhad kar aik sher dostoN.... salamat rahen
chaand badal meiN accha lagta hai!
aadhe rukh pe naqaab rehne do...
( Mohsin Naqvi )
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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aik se bhad kar aik sher dostoN.... salamat rahen
chaand badal meiN accha lagta hai!
aadhe rukh pe naqaab rehne do...
( Mohsin Naqvi )
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kyaa haseen sher kahaa bhai............ waaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh
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aik se bhad kar aik sher dostoN.... salamat rahen
chaand badal meiN accha lagta hai!
aadhe rukh pe naqaab rehne do...
( Mohsin Naqvi )
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waaaah....
Khusboo ki tarah aaya vo tez hawaon mein
manga tha jise hamne din raat duaon mein..
Dr . Bashir badr
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आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Meraa aaj kaa sher...
naqaab rukh se hataanaa muhaal hai uskaa,
hawaaen choom lene ko badee betaab hain.....!!
Shaad.....
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Meraa aaj kaa sher...
naqaab rukh se hataanaa muhaal hai uskaa,
hawaaen choom lene ko badee betaab hain.....!!
Shaad.....
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Bahut khoob mere bhai....is par to puri ghazal ban sakti hai....zara si koshish ki hai bataiyeGaa
naqaab rukh se hataanaa muhaal hai uskaa,
hawaaen choom lene ko badee betaab hain.....!!
meri aahat ka sannata shor-o-gul machaata hai,
nighaah-e-faqr hone ko taraste khwaab hain.....!!
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Bahut khoob mere bhai....is par to puri ghazal ban sakti hai....zara si koshish ki hai bataiyeGaa
naqaab rukh se hataanaa muhaal hai uskaa,
hawaaen choom lene ko badee betaab hain.....!!
meri aahat ka sannata shor-o-gul machaata hai,
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bahot khoob anu bhai........... silsilaa aage badhaanaa acchaa laga
khush rahen
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Meraa aaj ka sher..............
mujhko bandish nahi hai qaafiyaa radeefoN kii,
tumse baaten main jo kartaa hoon Gazal hotii hain...
Shaad.....
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Meraa aaj ka sher..............
mujhko bandish nahi hai qaafiyaa radeefoN kii,
tumse baaten main jo kartaa hoon Gazal hotii hain...
Shaad.....
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Ahaaaaa.... kya khoob sher kaha hai shaad jii......dil se daad..is khoobsoorat sher par....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Ahaaaaa.... kya khoob sher kaha hai shaad jii......dil se daad..is khoobsoorat sher par....
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Kuch is ada se aaj vo pahlu nashiin rahe
jab tak hamare paas rahe ham nahiin rahe..
Jigar moradabadi..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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12th May 2015, 11:32 AM
"uski yaadoN se mehkne lagta hai sara badan,
uski khuhboo ko seene meiN chupa sakte nahi"
-Bashir Badr
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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Kuch is ada se aaj vo pahlu nashiin rahe
jab tak hamare paas rahe ham nahiin rahe..
Jigar moradabadi..
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one of my favorite.......... thanks for sharing Madhu jeee.....
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one of my favorite.......... thanks for sharing Madhu jeee.....
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Are waah...aaj do sharing dono aapki fvrt..aap ka din hai aaj to...
god bless u...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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हो रहे जो हादसे ये बात कुछ तो ज़रूर है,
आदमी जो आम है वो हर तरह बे-कसूर है |
"ho rhe ho haadse yeh baat kuch to jaroor hai,
Aadmi jo Aam hai wo har tarah be-kasoor hai"
-Harash Mahajan ji
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Today's verse.......
sab jurm meri zaat se mansoob haiN 'Mohsin'!
kia mere siwa, is shehr meiN masoom haiN saare?
- Mohsin Naqvi
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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Today's verse.......
sab jurm meri zaat se mansoob haiN 'Mohsin'!
kia mere siwa, is shehr meiN masoom haiN saare?
- Mohsin Naqvi
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Waaaah...umda sharing...hassan jii...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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Today's verse.......
sab jurm meri zaat se mansoob haiN 'Mohsin'!
kia mere siwa, is shehr meiN masoom haiN saare?
- Mohsin Naqvi
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bahot khoob Hassan saahab.................
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"dard-e-dil meiN hai shiddat baDii, shaikh ji
raastaa maikadey ka, bataaiye zaraa....."
-Maikash ji
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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"dard-e-dil meiN hai shiddat baDii, shaikh ji
raastaa maikadey ka, bataaiye zaraa....."
-Maikash ji
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kamaal hai yahii sher mujhee bhi khaasa pasand aay athaa maikash bhai kaa....
thanks for highlighting and sharing again Sunite dee............... khush rahiye....
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Aaj kaa sher.............
mujhko shaayar banaa diyaa jisne,
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इन्सान की फितरत क्या कहिये, मुर्दों में खज़ाना ढूँढ लिया,
कहाँ बेचें जिस्म के अंगों को, उसका भी ठिकाना ढूँढ लिया |
ensaan ki fitrat kya kahiye, murdoN meiN khajana doond liya,
kahan beche ensaan ke angoN ko, uska bhi thikana doond liya"
-Harash Mahajan
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इन्सान की फितरत क्या कहिये, मुर्दों में खज़ाना ढूँढ लिया,
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ensaan ki fitrat kya kahiye, murdoN meiN khajana doond liya,
kahan beche ensaan ke angoN ko, uska bhi thikana doond liya"
-Harash Mahajan
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Bahut khoob sher share kiya di.....shukriya..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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17th May 2015, 08:18 AM
aaj ke khayaalat
Ek gunaah ki sazaa ab kitni dafaa paayenge
tum faasle badhaao hum qurbatein nibhaayenge
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aaj ke khayaalat
Ek gunaah ki sazaa ab kitni dafaa paayenge
tum faasle badhaao hum qurbatein nibhaayenge
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Waaaah...waaah!...bahut khoob khayaal.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Waaaah...waaah!...bahut khoob khayaal.....
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hame bahot hai hamaarii khaatir hamaaraa pyaaraa sa yaar aayaa
Shaad...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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"jab tera tasavur chupke se mujhe chu jaye,
mujhe apni har saans se teri hi kushboo aaye"
-nm
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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21st May 2015, 10:42 AM
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Originally Posted by sunita virender
"jab tera tasavur chupke se mujhe chu jaye,
mujhe apni har saans se teri hi kushboo aaye"
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Wah didi kamaal ka sher hua hai. Share karne ka shukriyaa
Qasid
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नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
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Some Mirrors Lie...
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21st May 2015, 02:47 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sunita virender
"jab tera tasavur chupke se mujhe chu jaye,
mujhe apni har saans se teri hi kushboo aaye"
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mehakta hua sher baaji...
khushbu kyuN na aaye gi meri baatoN se 'hSn'!
aaj kal mera uthna beth'na phool se dostoN ky saath hy!
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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21st May 2015, 08:24 PM
Bahut khoob doston..
Seene me ek khatak see hai aur bas..
ham nahii jante ki kya hai dil.
Nm
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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