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aaj main kabita likhta jata hun - 19th February 2016, 01:33 PM

Kismat ki kalam se
Sudkh, dukh ki syahi leke
Zindegi ke panno pe likhta jata hun
Haan main aaj apne aap ko gunguna jata hun
Waqt ki maar se sehma nahin main
Fir bhi kyun rota jata hun
Lo Aaj main kabita likhta jata hun
Aaj main kabita likhta jata hun.


उन बीते लम्हों के याद ना दिलाया करो
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Kismat ki kalam se
Sudkh, dukh ki syahi leke
Zindegi ke panno pe likhta jata hun
Haan main aaj apne aap ko gunguna jata hun
Waqt ki maar se sehma nahin main
Fir bhi kyun rota jata hun
Lo Aaj main kabita likhta jata hun
Aaj main kabita likhta jata hun.
Ehsason ko kavita me khoobi se prastut kiya gai aapne...


Likhte rahiyega. .....

Takecare
Madhu



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Kismat ki kalam se
Sudkh, dukh ki syahi leke
Zindegi ke panno pe likhta jata hun
Haan main aaj apne aap ko gunguna jata hun
Waqt ki maar se sehma nahin main
Fir bhi kyun rota jata hun
Lo Aaj main kabita likhta jata hun
Aaj main kabita likhta jata hun.

bahut khoob, bahut accha likha aapne...... likhte rahiye


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Kismat ki kalam se
Sudkh, dukh ki syahi leke
Zindegi ke panno pe likhta jata hun
Haan main aaj apne aap ko gunguna jata hun
Waqt ki maar se sehma nahin main
Fir bhi kyun rota jata hun
Lo Aaj main kabita likhta jata hun
Aaj main kabita likhta jata hun.
bahut khoob likha hai ji aapne..................


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Ehsason ko kavita me khoobi se prastut kiya gai aapne...


Likhte rahiyega. .....

Takecare
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bahut khoob likha hai ji aapne..................

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