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Kabhi aansoo kabhi khushi bechii...... -
24th October 2005, 03:15 PM
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ye ghazal qaayde se to mujhe ghazal sectioN me post karni chaahiye thi....magar pata nahi kyuN aisa laga ki ise yahaaN post kar dooN.....iske aashaar kaafi gehre haiN.....yuN to apne suni hogi.....magar mera mann kiya so i posted it......iske shabdoN ko mehsoos kijiyega..... Kabhi aansoo kabhi khushi bechii, hum gareeboN ne bekasi bechii..... chand saanseiN kharidNe ke liye, roz thodi si ziNdagii bechii..... jab rulaane lage mujhko saaye, maine uktaake roshni bechii..... Ek hum the jo bik gaye khud hi, varna duniya ne dosti bechii...... Kabhi aansooo kabhi khushi bechii, hum gareeboN ne bekasi bechii..... thanx, KasaK........ Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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24th October 2005, 03:33 PM
Kasak,
This one is one a very rare gems...Always love to read it...thanks for sharing it... keep up thw good work.. TC  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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24th October 2005, 03:42 PM
hi bhaiya.....kaise ho aap?
hope ki aap khush haiN.....well...mujhe bas itna pataa hai ki ye ghazal jagjit singh ji ji gaayi hui hai.....dnt knw who wrote this..... but anywaz......thanx 4 coming..... luv ya, KasaK....... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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24th October 2005, 10:08 PM
ahchi lagi mujhe ye rachna lagta hai jaise jisne bhi likha hai ise bas mujhe dekh kar hi likh dala hai.likhte rahiye yunhi.
LUCKY  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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25th October 2005, 01:50 AM
Huumm...
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25th October 2005, 09:11 AM
dear kasak,
must say as pulkit u to have gem of collection with u. i swear i have never ever read any big writers but wenever pulkit posts sumthing i love reading his collection but must say tht today u to shared one of the awesome gazal amaong us. thx so much. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters with love urs di jas  mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha, ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha! na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya, jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha! ***************************** Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki….. Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki…. Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar….. Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav…. Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar… Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai… Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai…. Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman…. Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar…. 
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25th October 2005, 02:19 PM
kasak ji..
shukriya.. ek dil aziz ghazal ko ham sab se share karne ke liye.. Aap ki yah ghazal Padh kar jagjit singh ka gaay ahuaa ek gazal yaad aa gaya... Zindagi tune lahoo leke dhiya kuch bhi nahi There dhaaman mein mere vaasthe kya kuch bhi nahi Mere in haathoN ki chaaho to thalaashi lelo Mere hathoN mein lakiroN ke siva kuch bhi nahi Hum ne dhekha hai kayee aise khudhaoN ko yahaaN Saamne jinke woh sach much ka khudha kuch bhi nahi Yaa khudha abke ye kis rang me aayee hai bahaar Zardh hi zardh hai pedoN pe hara kuch bhi nahi Dil bhi ik zidh pe adda hai kisi bache ki tharah Ya tho sab kuch hi ise chaahiye ya kuch bhi nahi Khush rahiye.. |
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25th October 2005, 02:30 PM
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KasaK..... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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25th October 2005, 02:32 PM
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are re sharad sahab...... ye humne nahi likhi janaab.......ye ek bahut achchi ghazal hai jo ki humne jagjit singh jee ki awaaz me suni thi....... apko pasand aayi...thanx, kasak...... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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25th October 2005, 02:35 PM
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hiiiiiiii diiiii......... kaise ho aap yaar??yahaan ka to aap rasta hi bhool gaye.....chalo achcha hua bahut dinoN k baad hi sahi....aap aaye toh....!! well.....i liked the second sher of this ghazal.... chand saanseiN kharidNe ke liye, roz thodi si ziNdagii bechii..... bahut gehra meaning hai is sher ka...... apko pasand aaya.....mujhe behad khushi hai...... abhi maiN khud ka koi kalaam post nahi kar paa rahi..actually me is busy wid exams......kuch dinoN me i'll post sumthin new..... u take very gud care of urself........ bye...khush rahiyega..... KasaK......... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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25th October 2005, 02:37 PM
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apki teh-e-dil se shukrguzaar hoon ki apne mujhe itni badhiya ghazal nazar karwayi...... Hum ne dhekha hai kayee aise khudhaoN ko yahaaN Saamne jinke woh sach much ka khudha kuch bhi nahi kya aashaar haiN ......waaaah!! thanx ki apne is ko padha..... yunhi aaate rahiyega..... apki, KasaK........ Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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25th October 2005, 06:40 PM
thanx for sharing this beautiful gazal my sweetu
luv u take care ****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
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25th October 2005, 11:13 PM
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i liked it tooo..... thanx a lott 4 coming.... luv, SweetU...... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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26th October 2005, 08:56 AM
wonderful...
thanks for sharin kasak take care ur bro Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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26th October 2005, 02:01 PM
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hi bhaai...... hw r u??? achchaa laga na??? i knew it..... thanx 4 coming..... urs, KasaK....... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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26th October 2005, 04:18 PM
Kasak Saabhiba aadaab,
Kya baat hai mohtarma, meri sabse pasandeeda gazaloN mein se ek hai yeh ghazal. Yeh mujhe bohot pasand hai iss ki pehli wajah iss ke Ashaar hai jo ke beshaq bohot ghehre aur hum sab ki zindagi se aur haqeeqat se ru-bar-ru karwaate hain.. aur doosre wajah yeh ke iss ghazal ko likhne waale shaayar mere hum-naam hai. Jee haan yeh ghazal likhi hai janaab "Abu Talib" sahab ne. Humein Ummeed hai aage bhi aap yunn hi khoobsurat gauhar bazm ki nazar karti rahengi..Apna khayaal rakhiyega. Talib. |
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27th October 2005, 09:08 PM
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talib jee...... mera aadaab kabool kijiyega.....sach kahooN to mujhe bhi iske aashaar pasand haiN isiliye maiNe ise yahaaN post kiya.... aur thank u so much apne mujhe iske shayar ka naam bataaya....kabhi unke aur bhi kalaamoN se ru-ba-ru hone ki koshish karungi.....karni hi padegi......iske aashaar shayad har ek shakhs ki zindagi se jude huye haiN...... aap yahaaN aaye.....uske liye teh-e-dil se shukriyaa...... duaaoN ke saath ijaazat, KasaK........ Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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Re: Kabhi aansoo kabhi khushi bechii...... |
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Re: Kabhi aansoo kabhi khushi bechii...... -
29th October 2005, 01:38 AM
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Tumhare likhne ke andaaz pe na jane kyuN dil maan nahi pata ki tum jaisi shakhiyat itni humdardi rakhti hai dil maiN .. khair tumne likha jabardast hai... likhti raho yun hi tumhara apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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29th October 2005, 01:48 AM
Achchi rachna hai
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29th October 2005, 06:11 AM
Kasak,
very nicely written... Take Care Rohin |
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29th October 2005, 04:39 PM
are re re re........!!!
aap logoN ne to mujhe ek pakkaa shayar banaa diya my sweet bros....... ye meri likhi hui nahi hai yaar....... ye ek famous ghazal hai bhaiyoN...... phir bhi....ab aap log itni taareef kar hi rahe ho to maiN maan hi leti hooN......hehehehe......juz kiddin..... thanx 4 coming....... bye, KasaK...... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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Re: Re: Kabhi aansoo kabhi khushi bechii...... -
29th October 2005, 04:57 PM
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hehehe......jaanti hooN bhaiya....apne aisa kyuN kaha......waise sach kahooN to mere dil me bahut hamdardi hai....lekin wo zaahir nahi kar paati....shabdoN ke zariye bhi nahi......ab samajhne wale bhi samajh hi jaate haiN.....aap samjhe na?? hehhehe...... thanx, KasaK....... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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