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yaad - 31st August 2017, 01:17 AM

Ek arse ke baad lautna hua hai sdc mai
Kuch pesh kar raha hu , glti ho to maaf kare...

Maanta nahi ye dil meri baat , kya karu
Bas me nahi ab jazbaat , kya karu

Na rahte kabu me alfaaz mere
Aati hai jab teri yaad , kya karu

Har pal tuje dekhne ko jee chahta hai
Par mushkil hai ab mulakat , kya karu

Na nind hai raaton me , na din me chain hai
Ajeeb se hai ye halaat , kya karu

Ki ab to aao sama jaao mujme tum
Jal raha hai "CHIRAG" or lambi hai ye raat , kya karu .......


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31st August 2017, 12:34 PM

joshi ji aapka istaqbaal karti hun bazm me....bahot achche lage ishq me doobe huye apke ye ehsaas...yun hee hamare sath apne jazbaat share karte rahiyega...

Aate rahiye....



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Ek arse ke baad lautna hua hai sdc mai
Kuch pesh kar raha hu , glti ho to maaf kare...

Maanta nahi ye dil meri baat , kya karu
Bas me nahi ab jazbaat , kya karu

Na rahte kabu me alfaaz mere
Aati hai jab teri yaad , kya karu

Har pal tuje dekhne ko jee chahta hai
Par mushkil hai ab mulakat , kya karu

Na nind hai raaton me , na din me chain hai
Ajeeb se hai ye halaat , kya karu

Ki ab to aao sama jaao mujme tum
Jal raha hai "CHIRAG" or lambi hai ye raat , kya karu .......


bahot khoob bahot sunder peshkash joshi ji......

aapke sher lajawab hain.. aate rahiye likhte rahiye

Maanta nahi ye dil meri baat , kya karu
Bas me nahi ab jazbaat , kya karu

Shaad........


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Ek arse ke baad lautna hua hai sdc mai
Kuch pesh kar raha hu , glti ho to maaf kare...

Maanta nahi ye dil meri baat , kya karu
Bas me nahi ab jazbaat , kya karu

Na rahte kabu me alfaaz mere
Aati hai jab teri yaad , kya karu

Har pal tuje dekhne ko jee chahta hai
Par mushkil hai ab mulakat , kya karu

Na nind hai raaton me , na din me chain hai
Ajeeb se hai ye halaat , kya karu

Ki ab to aao sama jaao mujme tum
Jal raha hai "CHIRAG" or lambi hai ye raat , kya karu .......
Bahut Umdaa qalam ke saath reentry maari hai chiraag bhai, aate rahiye aur mehfil mein yunhi haseen qalaam pesh karte rahiye



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Ek arse ke baad lautna hua hai sdc mai
Kuch pesh kar raha hu , glti ho to maaf kare...

Maanta nahi ye dil meri baat , kya karu
Bas me nahi ab jazbaat , kya karu

Na rahte kabu me alfaaz mere
Aati hai jab teri yaad , kya karu

Har pal tuje dekhne ko jee chahta hai
Par mushkil hai ab mulakat , kya karu

Na nind hai raaton me , na din me chain hai
Ajeeb se hai ye halaat , kya karu

Ki ab to aao sama jaao mujme tum
Jal raha hai "CHIRAG" or lambi hai ye raat , kya karu .......



Itne umda peshkash ke liye sukriya....


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bahot khoob bahot sunder peshkash joshi ji......

aapke sher lajawab hain.. aate rahiye likhte rahiye

Maanta nahi ye dil meri baat , kya karu
Bas me nahi ab jazbaat , kya karu

Shaad........
Shukriya shaad shahab meri iss koshish ko aapne apni tarif se nawaza ..
Aage bhi aapka pyar milta rahe ...


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Bahut Umdaa qalam ke saath reentry maari hai chiraag bhai, aate rahiye aur mehfil mein yunhi haseen qalaam pesh karte rahiye
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joshi ji aapka istaqbaal karti hun bazm me....bahot achche lage ishq me doobe huye apke ye ehsaas...yun hee hamare sath apne jazbaat share karte rahiyega...

Aate rahiye....
Madhu ji , mai humesha se aapka or shaad shahab ka fan raha hu or bas aapko or shaad shahab ko padh padh kr mere khyaal bhi likhne ki koshish krta hu
Shukrya ..


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Madhu ji , mai humesha se aapka or shaad shahab ka fan raha hu or bas aapko or shaad shahab ko padh padh kr mere khyaal bhi likhne ki koshish krta hu
Shukrya ..
ye hamaari khush naseebi hai jo aap aisa samajhte hain Chirag saahab.........

zarra nawaazi ke liye tahe dil se shukriyaa.... ise uupar waale ka karam kahiye jo nacheez ek zariya ban sakaa aur aap ne likhnaa kaayam rakhaa... apni khoobsurat peshkash se mahfil ko sajaate rahiye.... aate rahiye

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Ek arse ke baad lautna hua hai sdc mai
Kuch pesh kar raha hu , glti ho to maaf kare...

Maanta nahi ye dil meri baat , kya karu
Bas me nahi ab jazbaat , kya karu

Na rahte kabu me alfaaz mere
Aati hai jab teri yaad , kya karu

Har pal tuje dekhne ko jee chahta hai
Par mushkil hai ab mulakat , kya karu

Na nind hai raaton me , na din me chain hai
Ajeeb se hai ye halaat , kya karu

Ki ab to aao sama jaao mujme tum
Jal raha hai "CHIRAG" or lambi hai ye raat , kya karu .......


Behetreen kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne.....
aur sachchaai jhalak rahi hai poori ghazal me...

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