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मोगरे के फूल पर थी चांदनी सोई हुई - 18th February 2015, 04:35 PM

देर कल दफ्तर से निकला, थी गली सोई हुई
याद फिर से आ गयी आवारगी सोई हुई

इक पुराना बक्स खोला, वक़्त मुस्काने लगा
चल पड़ी यादों की चाबी से घड़ी सोई हुई

रात भर ठंडी हवा से खिड़कियां हिलती रहीं,
कुछ वरक़ पलटे तो रो दी डायरी सोई हुई

हाथ हाथों में लिए अलफ़ाज़ ने एहसास के,
मुस्कुराने फिर लगी ये शायरी सोई हुई

ओढ़ कर शबनम की चादर, जनवरी की रात में
"मोगरे के फूल पर थी चांदनी सोई हुई"

गर छपी होती न वो झूठी ख़बर अख़बार में
यूँ नहीं इंसानियत दिखती कभी सोई हुई

कम्बलों की इक दुकां है आज जिस फुटपाथ पर
ठण्ड में कल इक भिखारन मर गयी सोई हुई

रूह को जाते हुए देखा नहीं जन्नत कभी
हाँ! मगर हो चैन से मिट्टी मेरी सोई हुई
   
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20th February 2015, 11:15 AM

Waaah..bahut khoob...dher sari daad behtareen rachna k liye...



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bahut khoob likha hai Nakul Ji...aur bahut shukriya isse humare share karne ka...


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20th February 2015, 09:28 PM

Ek nayaab ehsaas ...bahut ache Nakul bhai.

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5th March 2015, 10:23 AM

रात भर ठंडी हवा से खिड़कियां हिलती रहीं,
कुछ वरक़ पलटे तो रो दी डायरी सोई हुई


waaahhhhhhhhh.... sach Nakul ji aapki kkavitaa ne waqt ko peeche kar diyaa... aur na jaane kitnii daayriiyaan jo mere dil ki gahraai me chupii huii thii soee hueee thiin sab ro paDeen........

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Sabhi pasand karne wale mitron ka tahe dil se shukriya
   
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