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kiya kehnae,taeri khalam ka jadoo
kerdaetae ho tum bae khaboo

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bahut sahi fermaya tum naetumhari is rachna nae maeri museebatoan kii ghadiyaan mujhae yaad dila deen
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Razia jee:

Aadaab!

kaise hai.n aap? koShiSh ko paRhne ke liye aur samjhne ke liye bahot bahot ShuKriyaa'h... aapse baat kiye baRe din ho gayeN... ummid kartaa hhuuN bahot jald baat hoNghii!

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Superb Dhaval Bhai.....ek Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Rachna Ke Liye Daad Qubool Kijiye......its Beautiful Beyond Words Can Describe...reps To Humne Pehle Hi De Diye The..aaj Review De Rahe Hain.....likhte Rahiye..

Hamesha Khush Rahiye

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Love 20th January 2010, 09:42 PM
haqeeqat ko alfaazoN ka jaam pehnaya hai aapne...
bahut achha laga padh kar dhaval jii.....

sada khush raheN...
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Dhaval ji,

Namastey!!

Kiase hain aap? aapki yeh rachana bahuut hi aachii lagiii ..dukh to hota hai lekin saachiye ka saamna karna bhi kuch asaan nahi hain... aur aapney jeewan ka saatiye hum sab ki nazar kiya hai.... uske liye bhaut bahut shukriya ...

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yeh baat sach hai ki, is ehsas ko wahi samajh sakta hai jisne aise situation ko deka ho mehsoos kiya ho........... main unhi me se ek hoon...... bahot bahot sukhriya aapka, aapne mujhe mere beete din yaad dila diye.......... jihne main kahin bhool chuka tha.......

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ees rachanaa ko pasaNd karne ke liye maiN aapka be-had ShuKraGuzaar huuN... aise hi paRhte raheN aage bhee!

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Aapke jazbaat ki main kadr karta hu Dhaval saheb............kitni khoobi se aapne kya kuch keh diya.

Dad kabool kare apni is peshkash ke liye.......

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Bahot hi khoob likhaa hai Sir,

Simply Great and vastavik

Keep it up

Take care

With wishes

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aapkaa saath milaa bahot hi KhuShii hu'ii... yuuNhi saath dete rahiyengaa aage bhee!

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bahut khub likhe ho aap. es rachana ko maine pahale kyo nahi padha yahi soch raha hoon. pet ki aag hi aisi hai ki uske aage suraj ki garmi kam hi lagti hai. es baat jo aapne jo juban di hain..kabile tarif hai.. bahut khub

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Dhaval ji....namashkaar.......kaise hai aap......bahut arse baad aapki yeh rachna aaj mere saamne aai toh main padh ke awaak sa reh gaya......aapne jis khubi se insaani bhuk, laachaari aur zarurat ko apni rachna mai ukera hai....waakai kabile taarif hai.....jinehe aaj ki raftaar bhari zindgi waali aankhe zara kam hi dekh paati hai.....woh aapne apni rachna mai dikhane ki koshish ki hai......acha laga padhkar......khush rahiye......

itni achhi rachna likhne ke liye dil se daad deta hu....kabul kare.....

apna khayal rakhiyega...
duaao ke saath...
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namaste!

aapne ees koShiSh ko paDhaa aur samjhaa bahot KhuShii huii.. saath dete raheN aage bhee

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haqeeqat ko alfaazoN ka jaam pehnaya hai aapne...
bahut achha laga padh kar dhaval jii.....

sada khush raheN...
apna khayal rakheN...

aapka dost,
vikram...
Vikram bhaa'ii:

namaste!

bahot bahot ShuKriyaah saath dene ke liye..

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Dhaval ji,

Namastey!!

Kiase hain aap? aapki yeh rachana bahuut hi aachii lagiii ..dukh to hota hai lekin saachiye ka saamna karna bhi kuch asaan nahi hain... aur aapney jeewan ka saatiye hum sab ki nazar kiya hai.... uske liye bhaut bahut shukriya ...

umeed karti hu aap ese hi dilkash kalamhum sab ki nazar kartey rahengey

likhtey rahye

khush rahye

duaon ke saath

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mandeep jee:

namaste!

maiN ek dam Theek huuN... aage bhee yuuNhi paDhte raheN... KhuShii huii aapko yahaaN deKh kar

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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Aapke jazbaat ki main kadr karta hu Dhaval saheb............kitni khoobi se aapne kya kuch keh diya.

Dad kabool kare apni is peshkash ke liye.......
saajid bhaa'ii:

namaste!

koShiSh ko pasand karne ke liye bahot bahot ShuKriyaah...! yuuNhi saath dete raheN!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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Aapke ehsaas bahaut pasand aaye. Bas uhni samaaj ko kareeb se dekhtey rahiye aur hume awgat karatey rahiye.

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Dear Dhaval

bahut khub likhe ho aap. es rachana ko maine pahale kyo nahi padha yahi soch raha hoon. pet ki aag hi aisi hai ki uske aage suraj ki garmi kam hi lagti hai. es baat jo aapne jo juban di hain..kabile tarif hai.. bahut khub

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Akant...
Akant bhaiya:

Pranaam!

aapko yahaaN deKh kar bahot KhuShi huii.. mujhe yaad hai aaj bhee wo din jab maiN ees bazm meiN nayaa thaa aur aapse maine islaah lee thee aur aapne bahot kuChh seeKhaayaa bhee thaa ... ShuKriyaah aapka ! yuuNhi saath dete raheN aage bhee!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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