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31st October 2010, 08:51 AM
ashQ aankhoN se tapak paday sar-e-shaam dheere dheere
aatish-e-ishq meiN sulag utha dil-e-badnaam dheere dheere nihaayat Khamooshi se hote gaye woh dil per qaabiz nikamma yeh dil hua un ka ghulaam dheere dheere dil-e-daghdaar ko boht naaz tha kabhi apni wafaooN per mohabbat per bhi chaa gaya abhaam dheere dheere hum tou samjhe the unhieN apni zindagi ki zamaanat! woh karte rahe hamare kafan ka intizaam dheere dheere jaahan un ko dekha tha hum wohin hue panaah-guzeen khatam ho gaye jaawani ke din tamaam dheere dheere sar-e-shaam = about evening badnaam = disreputable ghulaam = slave abhaam = haze, uncertainness (dhundh) intizaam = arrangement panaah-guzeen = refugee tamaam = entire tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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31st October 2010, 09:05 AM
dil-e-daghdaar ko boht naaz tha kabhi apni wafaooN per
mohabbat per bhi chaa gaya abhaam dheere dheere hum tou samjhe the unhieN apni zindagi ki zamaanat! woh karte rahe hamare kafan ka intizaam dheere dheere Bahut Khoob ......... Hassan Ji ! Bahut umdaa likha hai aapne ... sabhi ashaar ki adaayegi aur khayal asardaar lage mujhe .... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath ....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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31st October 2010, 09:57 AM
hum tou samjhe the unhieN apni zindagi ki zamaanat!
woh karte rahe hamare kafan ka intizaam dheere dheere yahi toh hona tha so hua ishq ka anjaam dheere dheere good work Hassan sahab Regards  _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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31st October 2010, 10:13 AM
[B][COLOR=DarkGreen]ashQ aankhoN se tapak paday sar-e-shaam dheere dheere
aatish-e-ishq meiN sulag utha dil-e-badnaam dheere dheere nihaayat Khamooshi se hote gaye woh dil per qaabiz nikamma yeh dil hua un ka ghulaam dheere dheere bahot ache..daad dil-e-daghdaar ko boht naaz tha kabhi apni wafaooN per mohabbat per bhi chaa gaya abhaam dheere dheere acha hai.. hum tou samjhe the unhieN apni zindagi ki zamaanat! woh karte rahe hamare kafan ka intizaam dheere dheere yeh sher haasil-e-ghazal raha..aur aapka ab tak ka likha sab se behtareen. ise aap apne signature mein add kar dijiye jaahan un ko dekha tha hum wohin hue panaah-guzeen khatam ho gaye jaawani ke din tamaam dheere dheere yeh bhi bahot umda raha aaj kaafi arse baad aapko padhne ka mauka mila hai..yunhi aate rahiye janaab.. mujhe acha lagta hai aapko padhna khush aur aabaad rahiye god bless, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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31st October 2010, 10:15 AM
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Hasan kya baat hai bhut hi khoob..........achi ghazal rahi ye aapki tamaam aahaar bhut achay lage khaas kar ke ye sher hum tou samjhe the unhieN apni zindagi ki zamaanat! woh karte rahe hamare kafan ka intizaam dheere dheere aap mashaAllah hamesha hi acha likhte ho, daad hazir hai qubool keejiye aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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Acchi shaayri ke liye hamari taraf se bhi daad qabul kareiN...! Duaaon ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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31st October 2010, 02:59 PM
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radhe radhe ek achhi peshakash ke liye dil se daad kubul karen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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Aap ki daad sir aakhooN per sir.. Likhay ko itna pasand karne k liye boht boht shurkiya.... Younhi saath nibhatay rahiye ga, DuaooN k saath ijazat, Faqat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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Pari Jii, Meri adna si koshish aap ko pasand aayi, yeh to mere liye baais-e-fakhr hai.... Younhi saath qaayim rakhiye ga, DuaooN K saaht ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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bahut khoobsurat.......... nihaayat Khamooshi se hote gaye woh dil per qaabiz nikamma yeh dil hua un ka ghulaam dheere dheere .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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Nacheez k khaak lafzooN ko itna ziyaada pasand karne k liye boht boht shukriya.... Aise hi hausla bhadhaatay rahiye ga, DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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5th November 2010, 12:49 PM
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Likhay ko pasand karne k liye maiN aap ka boht ziyada manooN hooN... DuaooN k saath ijazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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6th November 2010, 01:45 AM
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MashaAllah kya baat hai Hassan bhut hi khoob, tamaam aashaar bhut hi khoob rahe ek achi takhleeq ke liyN daad hazir hai qubool keejye likhte rahiye aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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Danny Boss, Aap ka yahan aana aur hausla afzaai karna, boht baDi baat hai mere liye.... Younhi saath dete rahiye ga, DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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6th November 2010, 04:19 PM
Hassan bhaa'ii:
namaste! aik behterin koShiSh..! dil se daad ! liKhate rahe.n aage bhee.. KhuSh rahe,n .. apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n duaao.n ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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6th November 2010, 04:55 PM
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hum tou samjhe the unhieN apni zindagi ki zamaanat! woh karte rahe hamare kafan ka intizaam dheere dheere isey agar ek sher maane toh......yahi sher Ghazal ki rounaq ka haqdaar hai Hasil-e-Ghazal ye sher raha Merii jaanib se dhairoN daad aapki iss peshkash per.....wasool paaiyega.. Harash |
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7th November 2010, 04:21 PM
hum tou samjhe the unhieN apni zindagi ki zamaanat!
woh karte rahe hamare kafan ka intizaam dheere dheere Bohat khoob mere bhai.......bohat khoob rahi yeh peshkash.......i really liked the word play. Bas ek cheeze janni thi yeh bhari urdu ke lafz jo aapne istemaal kiye hai woh yuhi aap likhtey chale gaye aur zehan me aate chale gaye ya aapne pehle se in words ko choose kar ke rakha hua tha. Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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8th November 2010, 01:46 PM
hassan bhai adaab.. ummeed karat hoon khush honge.. arse ke baad aaj aapki koi nazm nazar ke saamne aai aur padha to bas padhta gaya... dil fareb lafzo-ehsaas rahe.../ likhte rahen bhai..
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IshQ Jii,, Daad is pazeeraayi k liye maiN, aap ka be-had manooN hooN.... Younhi saath dete rahiye, DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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Sunita Baaji, Likhay ko pasand karne k liye boht boht shukriya.... Saath dete rahiye ga, DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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Aslam Bhai, Ghazal ki pasandeed'gi aur hausla afzaai k liye boht boht shukiyaa... Aise hi saath dete rahiye ga, DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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janab hassan saahab, ek aur dilkash kalaam se rubaroo karane ka behad shukriya... behas haseen khyaalon aur zaaykedaar alfaazon ka intekhaab kiya hai... yoon hi lutf me izaafa karte rahen.. aage bhi likhte rahen, inhi duaaon ke saath ijaazat. shaad... |
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15th November 2010, 03:13 PM
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15th November 2010, 05:22 PM
Bohat khoob Hasaan sahab,..
Aaj aapki ghazal padhkar .mujhe apni ek purani ghazal yaad aa gayi, isi radeef per likhi thi maine, kabhi fursat me zarur padhiyega.. http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...565#post415565 Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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Dhaval Jii, Daad is pazeeraayi k liye be-had manooN-o-maShkoor hooN.... Aise hi saath dete rahiye ga, DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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Dusri baar daad qabul kareiN...! Take very good care, ok...? With blessings Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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Harash Jii, Na cheez ki ghazal per itni ziyada hausla afzaai per teh-e-dil se, maiN, aap ka manooN hooN..... Younhi saath dete rahiye ga, DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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Sajid Bhai, Pazeeraayi ka shukriya... Aur jahan tak word selection ki baat hai to qaafiya aur radeef main phele se hi select kar k rakhta hooN.. Aur aagay misra jo zehn meiN aaye.. woh.. Saath dete rahiye ga, DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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Sameer Bhai, Khaak lafzooN ko pasand karne k liye boht mashkoor -o- manooN hooN... DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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Masood Bhai, Khaak alfaaz ko itni pazeeraayi dene k liye, main aap ka be-had mashkoor-o-mamnooN hooN... DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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