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vaise to hanstey dikhtey hai sab ke chehary, gaur se dekho to har dil par udhasi chaei hue hai... -sunita virender  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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vaise to hanstey dikhtey hai sab ke chehary, gaur se dekho to har dil par udhasi chaei hue hai... -sunita virender 7th share saath chalna magar milna nahi kahin bhe humne, kaya gilha humne kinaro ki taseer payee huie hai...... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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tumse milna chahtey hai hum bhi magar kaya karey, tumse na milney ki kasam bhi humney khai hue hai.... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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8th September 2006, 12:13 PM
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mehndi ne azaab dono taraf aag lagai huie hai, udhar haatho pe to idhar dil main lagai huie hai..... 'veer' 2nd share unke hatho main Laga hain mere lahoo ka rang , duniya ki nazar me unho ne mehandi rachai huie hai..... dilip 3rd share rishton ko kaya khub nibhaya hai humne taumar, dekho hamari mayat main zindagi bhe aiye huie hai.... 'veer' 4th share unke chahrey pe dekho aaj bhi mere pyar ki parchaei, meri mohabat mitne ke baad bhi rang laye huie hai... -sunita virender 5th sher her ek zuba.N per hai dastan-e- mohbbat meri jabki aaj zindgi meri mujhse hee prayee huie hai.... dilip 6th share dikhne me to hanstey dikhtey hai sab ke chehary, gaur se dekho to har dil par udaasi chayee huie hai... -sunita virender 7th share saath chalna magar milna nahi kahin bhe humne, kaya gilha humne kinaro ki taseer payee huie hai...... 'veer' 8th share tumse milna chahtey hai hum magar kaya karey, tumse na milney ki kasam humney khai hue hai.... -sunita virender wah sunita ji kaya anjaam tak pouchaya hai appne is gazal ko.....or dilip ji app bhee kush kam nahi ho.......yeh gazal to apni manzil pa gai.....ab koi nai rah dhundhte hai.......raj....... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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8th September 2006, 05:04 PM
dosto ek nai gazal ka aagaaz karne ja raha hoon.....appka saath chhahta hoon....
1st share mere bimaar-e-dil ki dawa kare koi, unki yaddon se mujhe juda kare koi...... 'veer' dosto is gazal main kafiya hai.....khuda....gilla.....waffa.....bewafa....dil ruba....duaa....fanna....silla......or isme radeef hai.......kare koi......bass ab app isko poora kare.......raj...... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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1st share mere bimaar-e-dil ki dawa kare koi, unki yaddon se mujhe juda kare koi...... 'veer' 2nd sher jindgi ho gayi fanaa abto,tere bina mujhe mout mile jaye,duaa kare koi... 'dilip'  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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11th September 2006, 11:21 AM
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mere bimaar-e-dil ki dawa kare koi, unki yaddon se mujhe juda kare koi...... 'veer' 2nd sher jindgi ho gayi fanaa abto,tere bina mujhe mout mile jaye,duaa kare koi... 'dilip' 3rd share meri deewangi chhahat ki inteha hai, ab to ibadaton ka haq adda kare koi..... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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mere dil ko kahi bhi karaar nahi hai mere dard-e-dil ki dawa kare koi...... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th September 2006, 12:17 PM
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mere dil ko kahi bhi karaar nahi hai mere dard-e-dil ki dawa kare koi...... -sunita virender sunita ji appka share bhut pyara hai...meri himmat nahi ho rahi ki main koi panga lu.....lakin ek halki c gustakhi kar raha hoon....maafi chhahta hoon......raj....... 4th share mere dil ko kahi bhi karaar nahi hai mere beqraar dil ki dawa kare koi...... -sunita virender ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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appki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th September 2006, 01:27 PM
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mere bimaar-e-dil ki dawa kare koi, unki yaddon se mujhe juda kare koi...... 'veer' 2nd sher jindgi ho gayi fanaa abto,tere bina mujhe mout mile jaye,duaa kare koi... 'dilip' 3rd share meri deewangi chhahat ki inteha hai, ab to ibadaton ka haq adda kare koi..... 'veer' 4th share mere dil ko kahi bhi karaar nahi hai mere beqraar dil ki dawa kare koi...... -sunita virender 5th sher mujse har kadam pe ki hai bewafai kaise us bewafa se wafa kare koi... dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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11th September 2006, 01:38 PM
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mujse har kadam pe ki hai bewafai kaise us bewafa se wafa kare koi... dilip dilip ji appke share main bhee kush chhekhani karne ja raha hoon....plzzzz bura mat manna...mujhe maaf kar dena.....raj..... 5th sher jisne har kadam pe ki hai bewafai, kaise us bewafa se wafa kare koi... dilip ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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11th September 2006, 05:03 PM
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jisne har kadam pe ki hai bewafai, kaise us bewafa se wafa kare koi... dilip 6th share tujhe milkar wo khushi mili mujhko, keh do ab na humse mila kare koi...... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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11th September 2006, 05:24 PM
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tumse milkar lut gaya sabar-o-qarar, aaye dil ko qarar duaa kare koi....... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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12th September 2006, 01:02 AM
tam'aam shareek-e-bazm ehbabb ko aadaab aur SSA
bhai mujh na'ehl ka ek choTa sa sujhaav hai voh yeh ki ho sake to aap agli Ghazal ka aaGhaaz ek tarhi misre se kijiye....yaani ke kisi naamvar shayar ki likhi hui koi line chuniye aur uski behar pe apne she'r kahiye.....maiN ye nahiiN keh raha ki aap wazan meiN hi likhiye...koshish kijiye Ghalati ho jaaye to koi muzayka nahiiN....iss se kam-az-kam mujh jaise naalaayaq bhi is silsile ko aage badhaane meiN madaddgaar saabit ho sakte haiN...!! shukriya rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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12th September 2006, 10:12 AM
Kya Baat hai janaab...Agar Maikash Sahib iss kuuchhe mein shirkat karein tau baat hi kyaa...tau lijiey aapka sujhaav humne maana hai...aur Daagh Sahib ki ghazal mein se Tarahi Misra chuna hai maine...kis behr mein hai wo aap samjha dijiey...
'Aafat tau yeh huyi ki wo mil kar juda hua' Radeef = 'a' hua kaafiya = adaa, khuda, mita, ataa vagairah vagairah kyun na daagh sahib ka poora sher hi yahan keh doon... begana thaa tau koyi shikayat na thee hamein Aafat tau yeh huyi ki wo mil kar juda hua chaliye aap sab doston se guzaarish hai ki iss taraahi misre ko zehan mein rakh kar ek poori ghazal kahein, aapko apni ghazal mein paanch sher kehne honge aur ek sher mein taraahi misre ka hona zaroori hai'Aafat tau yeh huyi ki wo mil kar juda hua'...it would be an interesting challenge...best of luck to all of you... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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13th September 2006, 11:55 AM
paras ji app tak raj ka dil ki gehriyon se salaam pounche.....appne bhut pyari c gazal shuru ki hai....chalie hum kush gustakhi karte hai......
1st share begana thaa tau koyi shikayat na thee hamein Aafat tau yeh huyi ki wo mil kar juda hua.... 'daagh' 2nd share mujhe sadiyon mere haal pe rulata raha kambakth, ek lamha teri judai ka meri dehleez pe thaira hua...... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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13th September 2006, 02:22 PM
lijiye paras saahiba maikash khaana-kharaab haazir hai
mere khayaal se aap chahti thiiN ke tam'aam dost is beh'r par ek muqammal Ghazal kaheiN lekin ab rajveer saahab ne puraana silsila aage badhaa diya hai to meri jaanib se do misre haazi haiN....puuri Ghazal kisi roz post karuNga...... 1st share begana thaa tau koyi shikayat na thee hamein Aafat tau yeh huyi ki wo mil kar juda hua.... 'daagh' 2nd share mujhe sadiyon mere haal pe rulata raha kambakth, ek lamha teri judai ka meri dehleez pe thaira hua...... "rajveer" 3rd she'r :- phirte haiN is qadar liye seene meiN dil ko hum aNgaar ko'ii jaise haath par dharaa huaa maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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[QUOTE]Originally posted by maikasH
[B]lijiye paras saahiba maikash khaana-kharaab haazir hai mere khayaal se aap chahti thiiN ke tam'aam dost is beh'r par ek muqammal Ghazal kaheiN lekin ab raajveer saahab ne puraana silsila aage badhaa diya hai to meri jaanib se do misre haazi haiN....puuri Ghazal kisi roz post karuNga...... 1st share begana thaa tau koyi shikayat na thee hamein Aafat tau yeh huyi ki wo mil kar juda hua.... 'daagh' 2nd share mujhe sadiyon mere haal pe rulata raha kambakth, ek lamha teri judai ka meri dehleez pe thaira hua...... "rajveer" 3rd she'r :- phirte haiN is qadar liye seene meiN dil ko hum aNgaar ko'ii jaise haath par dharaa huaa maikash 4th share uski kushi ke liye humney luta the apni har kushi, phir bhi kush hu ki waffa ka farz to adda hua....... -sunita virender paras ji aapne mujhe invite kiya es ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya, main to vaise bhi es post par regular aati hu, par aapka msg par kar aane ka majja hi kuch aur hai. thanks alot. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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13th September 2006, 03:11 PM
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begana thaa tau koyi shikayat na thee hamein Aafat tau yeh huyi ki wo mil kar juda hua.... 'daagh' 2nd share mujhe sadiyon mere haal pe rulata raha kambakth, ek lamha teri judai ka meri dehleez pe thaira hua...... "rajveer" 3rd she'r :- phirte haiN is qadar liye seene meiN dil ko hum aNgaar ko'ii jaise haath par dharaa huaa 'maikash' sandhu saab kamaal kar dita yaar..... 4th share ajj bhe urra phirta hoon waqt ki aandhiyon main, jaise kisi shaakh se patta koi toota hua....... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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13th September 2006, 03:50 PM
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SSA janaab maiN koshish keeti si tuhade pm da jawaab den di par tuhaada mailbox full hai...tusi kuj megs delete kar deo maiN kamm to aa ke tuhaade pm da jawaab zaruur deyaNgaa rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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13th September 2006, 05:33 PM
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begana thaa tau koyi shikayat na thee hamein Aafat tau yeh huyi ki wo mil kar juda hua.... 'daagh' 2nd share mujhe sadiyon mere haal pe rulata raha kambakth, ek lamha teri judai ka meri dehleez pe thaira hua...... "rajveer" 3rd she'r :- phirte haiN is qadar liye seene meiN dil ko hum aNgaar ko'ii jaise haath par dharaa huaa maikash 4th share uski kushi ke liye humney luta the apni har kushi, phir bhi kush hu ki waffa ka farz to adda hua....... -sunita virender 5th share ajj bhe urra phirta hoon waqt ki aandhiyon main, jaise patta koi kisi shaakh se toota hua....... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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14th September 2006, 11:10 AM
pasar ji namaskar
yadpi ye nalayak yaha kuch likhne ki himakat kar raha hai........ per kya karoo.n sunita didi ne jo aadat daal di hai ab wo ese hi to nahi chootne wali..... mujhe nahi maloom maine jo gazal likhi hai wo thik hai ya nahi ......... maine daagh sahab ke tarahi misre ko use karke maine gazal likhi hai.....kis behar main hai mujhe nahi maloom.. agr koi galti hui ho to aap sabhi saheban se main muaafi ka talabgar hoo.n Dastane mohabbat hai dil se ek gubar sa uthata hua Seene mai.N Bhi lagta hai ek shool sa chubhta hua Rahe Safar mai.N Yu.n to milte the hazaaro rahgeer Koi hamsafar mila yaha.N ye pahle martaba hua…….. Jana tha to chala jata, kareeb aaya kyoun wo mere Aafat tau yeh huyi ki wo mil kar juda hua……. uski khushoo se dooba khat jo seene se lagata hoo.n Lagta hai jaise rakha ho dil , dil per dhadkata hua… Duniya ki mujhe parwah nahi per aaj wo jo rutha hai Aisa Lagta hai jaise Mujhse begana mera khuda hua ek begana sa dost dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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14th September 2006, 04:19 PM
Dastane mohabbat hai dil se ek gubar sa uthata hua
Seene mai.N Bhi lagta hai ek shool sa chubhta hua Rahe Safar mai.N Yu.n to milte the hazaaro rahgeer Koi hamsafar mila yaha.N ye pahle martaba hua…….. Jana tha to chala jata, kareeb aaya kyoun wo mere Aafat tau yeh huyi ki wo mil kar juda hua……. uski khushoo se dooba khat jo seene se lagata hoo.n Lagta hai jaise rakha ho dil , dil per dhadkata hua… Duniya ki mujhe parwah nahi per aaj wo jo rutha hai Aisa Lagta hai jaise Mujhse begana mera khuda hua dilip yaar sorry main late ho gaya lakin tum late bilkul nahi ho kaya sahi time par kaya dil kash qalaam pesh kiya hai.....yaar itna acha likha hai ki puccho mat har ek share mukamal or bhut gehre ehsaas liye huye hai meri daad kabool karna.....raj..... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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14th September 2006, 04:23 PM
dilip bhai maine to aapko pm pe hi kaha tha k sab ko passand
aayegi mere dost bahot hi achha likha hai mujhe to bahot pasand aayi ... ye dost sath hai aapke aapka dost dhaval |
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14th September 2006, 08:10 PM
Paras jee:
well, Chaliye aap kee taraahi misre ko co-operative shayri meiN he tabdiil kar diya gaya hai.. ess liye socha ke ek Sher ham bhee baaNtle aap sab se.. ab agli baar koii aasaan se se beh'r ho tau mazza aa jaaye.. [taa'ke GhaltiyaaN bhee na ho ] aur Shaayad zeyaadah ehbaab hissa leN.. ShukriYa..-Mayank ******************************** 1st sher begana thaa tau koyi shikayat na thee hamein Aafat tau yeh huyi ki wo mil kar juda hua.... -daagh 2nd sher mujhe sadiyon mere haal pe rulata raha kambakth, ek lamha teri judai ka meri dehleez pe thaira hua...... -Rajveer" 3rd she'r :- phirte haiN is qadar liye seene meiN dil ko hum aNgaar ko'ii jaise haath par dharaa huaa -maikash 4th sher uski kushi ke liye humney luta the apni har kushi, phir bhi kush hu ki waffa ka farz to adda hua....... -sunita virender 5th sher ajj bhe urra phirta hoon waqt ki aandhiyon main, jaise patta koi kisi shaakh se toota hua....... -Rajveer 6th Sher jis ne kiya hai jaisa bharega voh waisa hee, dekha hai dost hamne voh sar ek jhukaa huaa.. -Mayank |
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15th September 2006, 02:19 PM
1st sher
begana thaa tau koyi shikayat na thee hamein Aafat tau yeh huyi ki wo mil kar juda hua.... -daagh 2nd sher mujhe sadiyon mere haal pe rulata raha kambakth, ek lamha teri judai ka meri dehleez pe thaira hua...... -Rajveer" 3rd she'r :- phirte haiN is qadar liye seene meiN dil ko hum aNgaar ko'ii jaise haath par dharaa huaa -maikash 4th sher uski kushi ke liye humney luta the apni har kushi, phir bhi kush hu ki waffa ka farz to adda hua....... -sunita virender 5th sher ajj bhe urra phirta hoon waqt ki aandhiyon main, jaise patta koi kisi shaakh se toota hua....... -Rajveer 6th Sher jis ne kiya hai jaisa bharega voh waisa hee, dekha hai dost hamne voh sar ek jhukaa huaa.. -Mayank 7th share jiski mahfil main jana na tha kabhi gavara humko, wahi shakas ab janey kaise dosto, mera kudha hua -sunita virender barso baad ek shakas dekha apne mahboob sa, ab phir satane lagga uska har nakash mita hua .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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15th September 2006, 02:20 PM
1st sher
begana thaa tau koyi shikayat na thee hamein Aafat tau yeh huyi ki wo mil kar juda hua.... -daagh 2nd sher mujhe sadiyon mere haal pe rulata raha kambakth, ek lamha teri judai ka meri dehleez pe thaira hua...... -Rajveer" 3rd she'r :- phirte haiN is qadar liye seene meiN dil ko hum aNgaar ko'ii jaise haath par dharaa huaa -maikash 4th sher uski kushi ke liye humney luta the apni har kushi, phir bhi kush hu ki waffa ka farz to adda hua....... -sunita virender 5th sher ajj bhe urra phirta hoon waqt ki aandhiyon main, jaise patta koi kisi shaakh se toota hua....... -Rajveer 6th Sher jis ne kiya hai jaisa bharega voh waisa hee, dekha hai dost hamne voh sar ek jhukaa huaa.. -Mayank 7th share jiski mahfil main jana na tha kabhi gavara humko, wahi shakas ab janey kaise dosto, mera kudha hua -sunita virender dosto galti se do share post ho gaye thy, maaf kijiyega. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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fida hua -
15th September 2006, 06:09 PM
Na jaanae kis wajah sae wo mujh sae khafa hua
Ab door mujh sae daekho koi bae wajah hua Ulfat ka hai nasha,jo kae aankhoan pae cha giya Palkoan ker ab hisaar main her mae-kada hua Ho ker juda jo mil jaatae kuch aur baat thi aafat to ae hoi hai kae wo mil ker juda hua Wo ghum jisae samajhtae thae dushman hai jaan ki Ab wo hi sub ko choar kae mujh per fida hua Choada tha hum nae saara jahan jis kae waastae Dil maera us nae toada,wahi bae-wafa hua Seenae main jis nae RAZ kae her RAZ ko rakha Maeri nazar main aaj wahi maera khuda hua |
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15th September 2006, 07:06 PM
Lijiye meri jaanib se ek hakeer see koshish...
Zaa.iqaa talkh nahii.n, tau dil ka matam kya hua Kaash hota iss Mai me.n bhi zahar ghula hua Yeh ranj-o-gham tere, ye jaur-o-sitam JaanaaN Ehsaan tera maanoon jo bhi tujhse ataa hua Chala jaata, na paas aata, na manaata mujhko Aafat tau yeh huyi ki wo milkar juda hua Pehle se marasim nahii.n tau koyi baat nahii.n Baat yeh hai ki tu aaj bhi iss dil me.n basa hua Lab-e-Paras pe aa gaya thaa yuuNhi naam tera Taashna labi ko kya khabar, tuu naa-aashna hua Baaki dosto ki peshkash ka intezaar hai... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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19th September 2006, 10:37 AM
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es taraf se gujrey hai kafiley baharo ke, ajj tak sulgtey hai jakham rah-gujaro ke.. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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hi -
19th September 2006, 01:13 PM
1st share
es taraf se gujrey hai kafiley baharo ke, ajj tak sulgtey hai jakham rah-gujaro ke.. 2nd share yu bayaa kiya usne dar-e-dil mere samne, nayan ashakbaar ho gaye mere aasharo ke......... 'veeer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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Re: hi -
19th September 2006, 01:24 PM
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isharo hi isharo me baat unse hoti thi magar ab koi jawab dete nahi wo mere un isharo ke... dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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19th September 2006, 02:10 PM
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har sahara mujse mera chuda gaya hai woh, dosto hum marey huey hai apne hi saharo ke... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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21st September 2006, 12:44 PM
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.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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21st September 2006, 01:28 PM
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dunia ke diye jakhamo ki parwah kya kare.n hum to ghayal hain apno ke chalaye teero ke........ dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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21st September 2006, 02:36 PM
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hum to diwangi ka dum kabhi bhartey na thy, ab jane kyu hum diwane ho gaye uske isharo ke.... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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21st September 2006, 03:16 PM
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har ek nazar jara si thirchi karke jo usne dali, ek pal main deewane ho gaye unki nazaro.n ke dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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