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mera tumse kaisa rishta hai........(nazam) -
25th July 2006, 03:56 PM
dosto yeh nazam meri mohabat ke naam.....jo meri kabhi nahi ho sakti.....lakin phir bhee meri hai........
mera tumse kaisa rishta hai, main aksar soachta rehta hoon, aakhir tu mera kaya lagta hai, main aksar soachta rehta hoon.. main teri nas nas main behta hoon, phir bhee tujhse begana hoon, main teri aankh ka aansu hoon, main tere ang ka gehna hoon, main tere dil ki dharkan hoon, main tere dil main rehta hoon..... mera tujhse kaisa rishta hai, main aksar soachta rehta hoon..... main khud main tumko pata hoon, tujhe aksar ang lagata hoon, khamoshi main gungunata hoon, pyase adhro ki pyaas bhujata hoon, tujhe dil ki baat batata hoon, tere bin tanha rehta hoon...... mera tujhse kaisa rishta hai, main aksar soachta rehta hoon...... meri dharkan ki pyaas ho tum, door ho phir bhee paas ho tum, ik pyara sa ehsaas ho tum, mere liye sabse khaas ho tum, is toote dil ki aas ho tum, main tumse sab kush kehta hoon.... mera tujhse kaisa rishta hai, main aksar soachta rehta hoon...... main tum bin jee na paounga, tere qadmon main bichh jaounga, tumko apna khuda banounga, dard-e-dil tumko sunaounga, mar jaounga par tera kehlaounga, kabhi tujhse door na jaounga, tere gham haske sehta hoon..... mera tujhse kaisa rishta hai, main aksar soachta rehta hoon.... ik khaab jo maine dekha hai, maine tujhko us main dekha hai, tum payal chhankati aati ho, mujhko pagal kar jati ho, tum saye jaise lagti ho, main tuko chhuna chahta hoon, tum sapne jaise lagti ho, tum chpke se chal deti ho, main aankhain malta rehta hoon.... mera tujhse kaisa rishta hai, main aksar soachta rehta hoon, aakhir tum meri kaya lagti ho, main aksar soachta rehta hoon....... appke jabaab ka muntzir appka raj....... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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Re: mera tumse kaisa rishta hai........(nazam) -
25th July 2006, 04:34 PM
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aree wah raj ji kaya khoob likha hai appney appney anjaan rishtey ke liye. appki yeh nazam pad kar ek share yaad aaya hai, likhney ki gustakhi kar rahi hu: "appni mohabat ka diya, gairo ke ghar mai jalaya hai, jin rishto ko kuad na samji, usey auro ko samjaya hai"  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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25th July 2006, 11:29 PM
bahut khoob raaj
rishta tujh se mera samjh na saki gham tera meri aankh se bahta har khushi par teri main hansati hun maine samjha tha hansana bhool gai AISA HI KOI KHWAB HAMARA BHI KOI THA |
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27th July 2006, 12:34 AM
mera tumse kaisa rishta hai,
main aksar soachta rehta hoon, aakhir tu mera kaya lagta hai, main aksar soachta rehta hoon.. main teri nas nas main behta hoon, phir bhee tujhse begana hoon, main teri aankh ka aansu hoon, main tere ang ka gehna hoon, main tere dil ki dharkan hoon, main tere dil main rehta hoon..... mera tujhse kaisa rishta hai, main aksar soachta rehta hoon..... main khud main tumko pata hoon, tujhe aksar ang lagata hoon, khamoshi main gungunata hoon, pyase adhro ki pyaas bhujata hoon, tujhe dil ki baat batata hoon, tere bin tanha rehta hoon...... mera tujhse kaisa rishta hai, main aksar soachta rehta hoon...... meri dharkan ki pyaas ho tum, door ho phir bhee paas ho tum, ik pyara sa ehsaas ho tum, mere liye sabse khaas ho tum, is toote dil ki aas ho tum, main tumse sab kush kehta hoon.... mera tujhse kaisa rishta hai, main aksar soachta rehta hoon...... main tum bin jee na paounga, tere qadmon main bichh jaounga, tumko apna khuda banounga, dard-e-dil tumko sunaounga, mar jaounga par tera kehlaounga, kabhi tujhse door na jaounga, tere gham haske sehta hoon..... mera tujhse kaisa rishta hai, main aksar soachta rehta hoon.... ik khaab jo maine dekha hai, maine tujhko us main dekha hai, tum payal chhankati aati ho, mujhko pagal kar jati ho, tum saye jaise lagti ho, main tuko chhuna chahta hoon, tum sapne jaise lagti ho, tum chpke se chal deti ho, main aankhain malta rehta hoon.... mera tujhse kaisa rishta hai, main aksar soachta rehta hoon, aakhir tum meri kaya lagti ho, main aksar soachta rehta hoon....... waah raj ji bohat khoob likha hai aapne taareef ke parey likha hai. ye peyar bhi kaisa rishta hai , na samjh ata hai na samjhaya jata hai, kai rishte todta hai ye jab isko apnaya jata hai, toot jata hai khud ka wajood jab isko thukraya jata hai, lagata hai wo aag dilo mai jisko issi sai bhujhaya jata hai, isko roshan karne keliye apna hi ashiyana jalaya jata hai, phir bhi ye bewafaa hota hai logo ko samjhaya jata hai, ye peyar bhi kaisa rishta hai , na samajh ata hai na samjhaya jata hai, maaf kar dijiyega aapki nazam par kuch likhne ki haisiyat to nahi hai par dil mai aya iss liye likh diya iss gustakhi ke liye maafi chahti hoon. |
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27th July 2006, 06:42 AM
k khaab jo maine dekha hai,
maine tujhko us main dekha hai, tum payal chhankati aati ho, mujhko pagal kar jati ho, tum saye jaise lagti ho, main tuko chhuna chahta hoon, tum sapne jaise lagti ho, tum chpke se chal deti ho, main aankhain malta rehta hoon.... bahut khoob Rajveer ji acaha likha hai aapne .. yun hi likhte rahe.. |
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hi -
14th August 2006, 05:51 PM
ranjna ji appko meri nazam pasand i app meri post par i main tahe dil se appka shukar guzaar hoon.......umeed karta hoon yu hee apka saath milta rahega.......raj......
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hi -
26th August 2006, 11:25 AM
aree wah raj ji kaya khoob likha hai appney appney anjaan rishtey ke liye.
appki yeh nazam pad kar ek share yaad aaya hai, likhney ki gustakhi kar rahi hu: "appni mohabat ka diya, gairo ke ghar mai jalaya hai, jin rishto ko kuad na samji, usey auro ko samjaya hai" ------------ Sunita Virender Singh sunita ji yeh un rishton ka dard hai jo hamare dil ke sabse kareeb hokar bhee hamare pyar ko tarste rehte hai or sari umar yu hee siskte rehte hai or kabar tak hamare saath hee jate hai....appko meri nazam pasand i so main tahe dil se appka shukarguzaar hoon.....raj..... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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26th August 2006, 11:59 AM
hi veer kaise ho dost bahothi badhiya likha hai tumne aur dil me utar jaye aisa likha hai ......mujhe pasand aaya bahot........dhaval
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26th August 2006, 02:06 PM
meri dharkan ki pyaas ho tum,
door ho phir bhee paas ho tum, ik pyara sa ehsaas ho tum, mere liye sabse khaas ho tum, is toote dil ki aas ho tum, main tumse sab kush kehta hoon.... mera tujhse kaisa rishta hai, main aksar soachta rehta hoon...... main tum bin jee na paounga, tere qadmon main bichh jaounga, tumko apna khuda banounga, dard-e-dil tumko sunaounga, mar jaounga par tera kehlaounga, kabhi tujhse door na jaounga, tere gham haske sehta hoon waaaah raj ji,bahut khoob.bahut acha likha aapne.kis tarah aapne apne adhoorepan ko bayan kiya hai.bahut khoob likhte rahiye. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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30th August 2006, 10:22 AM
bahut khoob raaj
rishta tujh se mera samjh na saki gham tera meri aankh se bahta har khushi par teri main hansati hun maine samjha tha hansana bhool gai tabasum ji bhut din ho gaye app dikhai nahi de rahi......app ho kahan......khair app yaha bhee ho khariyat se ho.....app meri post par i meri nazam ko parha or pasand kiya main tahe dil se appka shukria aada karta hoon.....yu hee appko apni post par dekhne ki umeed rakhta hoon.....raj...... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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31st August 2006, 04:50 AM
wht u hv written is simply awesum....since i also luv sum1 jo kabhi mera ho nahi sakta i knw d true meaning of all dis....
usski na hoker bhi muje aisa lagta hai mai usski hun its impossible to forget true luv.... apki shayri buht achee hai... MAY ALLAH GIVE U YOUR LUV...AMEEN prayers n blessingz frm me for all |
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hi -
4th September 2006, 05:13 PM
hi veer kaise ho dost bahothi badhiya likha hai tumne aur dil me utar jaye aisa likha hai ......mujhe pasand aaya bahot........dhaval
------------ rock hi dhaval appko meri nazak pasand imain tahe dil se appka shukar guzaar hoon jo appne apni raye se mujhe nawaza...yu hee sath dete rehna.....raj........ ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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Re: mera tumse kaisa rishta hai........(nazam) -
5th September 2006, 01:09 AM
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salaam kya khoob likha hai ki tujhe aksar sochta rehta hu... har sensation aapne bakhubi bayan kar di......... bahut khoob... feelings, aur usko batana....kamaal hai... aise hi likhte rahiye..... hum intezaar karte hai apka dost Akshay ~~~~~~Aur meri talaash abhi jari hai........................... |
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3rd October 2006, 04:11 PM
waaaah raj ji,bahut khoob.bahut acha likha aapne.kis tarah aapne apne adhoorepan ko bayan kiya hai.bahut khoob
likhte rahiye. ------------ yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai, gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- jaan ji appko raj ka salaam......app jab bhee meri post par tashreef lati ho to mere qalaam ka intzaar kush kam ho jata hai......app mere post par i usko pyar se parha or pasand kiya main appka bhut bhut shukarguzaar hoon.....umeed hai yu hee appka saath milta rahega......take care.......raj.... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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pranaam veer ji,
ye apne apni mahobbat ke naam likha hai. gr88. achha laga. har ek lafz bahot hi behatarin hai. aaj nazar pari ispe to aa gai aapko daad dene. dil ko chhoo gai ye nazam. main tum bin jee na paounga, tere qadmon main bichh jaounga, tumko apna khuda banounga, dard-e-dil tumko sunaounga, mar jaounga par tera kehlaounga, kabhi tujhse door na jaounga, tere gham haske sehta hoon..... ye to jaise dil me ghar bana gaya ji. unhi likhte rahiye. ok ji grazie aapki dost pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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2nd December 2006, 02:07 PM
wht u hv written is simply awesum....since i also luv sum1 jo kabhi mera ho nahi sakta i knw d true meaning of all dis....
usski na hoker bhi muje aisa lagta hai mai usski hun its impossible to forget true luv.... apki shayri buht achee hai... MAY ALLAH GIVE U YOUR LUV...AMEEN prayers n blessingz frm me for all muskhurahat ji ko raj ka salaam....app meri post par i meri gazal ko pasand kiya main tahe dil se appka shukar guzaar hoon.....umeed karta hoon yu hee appka saath milta rahega.....raj..... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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namskar aapki nazam padi, achi lagi, magar ek baat puchna chahugi ki, ki ham kyu un rishton ko pechanen me der karte hai, jinke bina hum adhure hai…. Aur akhir me bas sochte rehte hai… kash ki har koi samay rehte soch le ki, koi hamara kya lagta hai , to zindgi kitini assan ho jaye, warna ta-umar hum bas isi sawal me ulge rehte hai, aur jawab kisi ke paa nahi…… mera tujhse kaisa rishta hai, main aksar soachta rehta hoon, aakhir tum meri kaya lagti ho, main aksar soachta rehta hoon....... bahut acha likha… take care rajni…….. |
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2nd December 2006, 11:28 PM
grt work rajveer
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