wah wah bahut acha likha hai aapne. lagta hai ki aap kisi se bahut pyar karte hain. aisa main isliye kah raha hoon kyunki main jaanta hoon ki jise ham pyar akrte hain har kimat par uski khusi chahte hain .
wah manoj ji kya likha hai!waise tho poori ghazal hee kamaal kee hai par yeh do lines kuch zyaada hee bha gayee!mujhe kuch nahin chahiye aap ki ek hasin ke siva
aap ki muskaan hai mere har gam ki bas ek dawa
aise hee likhte rahiyega
akelee hoon main.....koi sathi hai tho mera saaya!:(
jab se chaha aap ko ibaadat bhool gaya "kureel"
aap ki aankhon mein ab nazar aata hai mujhe khuda.
wah kya baat kahi hai manoj ji...........mere pass lafj nahi hai ab aapki tareef ke liye...isliye sirf itna hi kahoongi ki aap sada aise hi likhte rahiyega........
Daad ke saath
pari
Chadha hai aaj bhi uska Rang, jisne kabhi Ranga hi nahi :-)
madrak saheb
behad acha laga aap ka reply padh kar.....aap ki hauslaafrzai ke liye dil ki gehraiyon se shukriya...likhte rahiye.
-MANOJ
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RITU JI
shukriya aap ko hamari koshish pasand aayi....aap ka bahot bahot shukriya hamari hausla afzai ke liye....
take care
-MANOJ
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HEENA JI
aap hamesha hi hamara hausala badhati hai....bahot shukrguzar hai ham aapke...ki aap ne hamare jazbaton ko samjha ..aap ki hausla afzai ke liye dil ki gehraion se shukriya..likhte rahiye
-MANOJ
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ICE PAPI JI
shukriya saheb aap ki hauslaafzai ke liye.....bahot khushi hui aap ko yahan dekh kar...
-MANOJ
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PARI JI
kaisi hai aap? bahot acha laga aap ne apna keemti waqt nikaal kar hamari rachna padhi aur hamara hausla badhaya.aap ka dil ki gehraiyon se aabhari hoon mein..
take care
-MANOJ
apne usoolon par ham apne andaaz se chalte hai
karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein.
sakhi ji
aap ko mere wards ache lage,,,,,jaan kar behad khushi hui.....kisi khaas shaksh ke liye mere dil se nikli fariyaad hai yeh shabd....bahot khushi hui yeh jaan kar ki aap ko meri koshish pasand aayi....dil se shukrguzaar hun mein aap ka.....umeed hai aap aage bhi aise hi hauslaafzai karti rahengi....apna khayal rakhiyega...
-MANOJ
apne usoolon par ham apne andaaz se chalte hai
karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein.
DARD E SHUSH BHAI
dil se shukrguzaar hoon mein aap ki hauslaafzai ka....aap aksar mera hausla badhate hai aur mere jazbaaton ko samjhte hai....behad khushi hoti hai aap jaise maahir shaks ka reply padh kar....aap ka bahoot bahoot shukriya
-MANOJ
apne usoolon par ham apne andaaz se chalte hai
karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein.
Location: Aapne Sanam Ko Yaad Kiya Sar Jhuka Liya**
Rep Power: 33
18th October 2003, 09:20 PM
Dear Manoj Jee, bohot hi khubsurat. Pyaar hoti hi aise hein.
Aise hi likhte rahiyega. Der ke liye mein sharminda hu.
God bless you.
Kuch yu hi kehegi?
Yeh duwa hein meri Rabse tujhe Aashiqo meh sabse
meri aashiqi pasand ayi!!
Aur kuch yu aap aise kahe,
Rabko ka mangga hor kee soniya,
Saddiya duwaya tanu jee soniya!
*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
*~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~**