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Chori-chori -
27th June 2010, 08:26 PM
 chori chori in nazron se hum unhe hi dekha karte hain unhe shayad ye pta nahi k hum unpe hi marte hain.... keh du apne hal-e-dil ka beyan bas ab to ye man karta hai kehne se wo ho jayen na khafa sochke bas ye man darta hai.... kho du apne hosh main jab samne wo aate hain bas ro du ik pal me jb door wo chale jate hain.... pyar unhe bhi hai magar wo kehne se ghabrate hain thoda thoda dekhke hume haan wo bhi sharmate hain.... Socha hai nazron se keh denge par nazren hum bhi churate hain nazr-e-nazar milane se hum dono hi katrate hain bas isi vajha se izhar naa kar hum dono chup reh jate hain..... Hum dono chup reh jate hain.....  |
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27th June 2010, 09:21 PM
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radhe radhe ahsaas achhe lage koshish achhi hai pasand aayee daad duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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28th June 2010, 07:40 PM
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apka bhot bhot shukriya...koshish zaari rhegi.....  If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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28th June 2010, 08:05 PM
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bahut hi accha likha hai apne....ishq mein duri aur mazboori ko bahut hi acche se samjhaya hai apne.....maaN parsaNn hua apki ye nazm padh kar......... meri taraf se daad kabool karein.... aapka. mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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1st July 2010, 03:55 AM
bahut pyari si kavita hai ghazal ji, iiske masoom se aur bina milawat ke khayal bahut pasand aaye, do cheezeN kahunga, is line me
keh du apne hal-e-dil ka beyan kar du likhiye, kyunki bayaaN ka matlab hi kehna na hota hai... aur nazr-e-nazar iska matlab mujhe samajh nahin aaya, shayad yahaaN aap nazar se nazar kehna chaahti haiN, par -e- jo istemaal hota hai, vo "ka,ki" ki tarah istemaal hota hota hai..!! umeed karta hun aage v aapko padhne ka mauka yuNhi milta rahega, aur agar meri koi v baat buri lage to uske liye shama prarthi hooN...!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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1st July 2010, 11:57 AM
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shukriya secrt g..........apko hmara likha pasand aaya hume khushi huyi If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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1st July 2010, 12:00 PM
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acha lga k apko meri kavita pasand aayi............... If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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12th October 2010, 07:16 PM
bohot ache...........................................
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missing u Gazal |
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missing u Gazal -
2nd June 2015, 04:14 PM
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missing u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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Main shayar to nahin.....
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2nd June 2015, 09:15 PM
Gazzal jee...bahut hee sundar ehsaas.....aur unki bayangi bhi utni hee khoobsoorat..... superb ..heartblowing.....ek rumani sa andaaz hai aapka ...keep it up....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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6th June 2015, 11:03 AM
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Gazzal ji, bohot achhi lagi aapki yeh kavita. Dil mein tarangein chalne lagiN.. Aise he likhte rahiyega. **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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6th June 2015, 11:31 AM
Gazzal jii bahut khoobsoorat ehsaas...aati rahein...aur padhne ka mauka deti rahiyega..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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8th June 2015, 07:31 AM
Bohot khoob likha hai aapne
Waaaaaaaaaaah Daad kubul farmaiyega DuaoN k sath Bhushan Bhushan Joshi |
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