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Woh aisi baatein kyun karti hain... -
19th August 2007, 12:41 PM
Bhool hai unki isliye hi to bhool jane ki baat karti hai,
Saza ke hakdaar hum hai,khata ki hai theek karti hai, Ek ada samjhe is alvida kehne ke lihaaz ko huzur mere, Ye chod jaane ke liye nahi,kareeb ane ke liye karti hai, Hoti hogi jalan khuda ko bhi tere chahne ke tarike se, Bata use teri mohabbat,doosro par kitna asar karti hai, Mohabbat ka naam kaise paya jab intezaar hi na tha, Wo tere khawb mein na aae,par tera intezaar karti hai, Jalaade Kitaab-e-zindagi ke fasl mein se naam mera, Naam hi jalati hai mera,itna to mera ehteram karti hai, Na bhi mile Ijazaat unse guft-a-goo karne ki hume par, Jab zarurat pade hamari,woh khud hi shuruat karti hai, Kehne par kya karega tu jeekar sau saal tak are 'Abrar' Jab is bat par hi tujhe,zaher pilane ki wo baat karti hai...  Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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19th August 2007, 12:45 PM
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padh kar mazaa aa gaya aise hi likhte rahiye kyaa aap hyderabaad ke hai? kaha rehte hai hyderabaad men? regards manu |
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~~Reshma ke Dil ki~~
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19th August 2007, 05:17 PM
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Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi, Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
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DIL KI BAAT DIL TAK
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19th August 2007, 05:30 PM
SALAAM ABRAR BHAI...............bhai bahut hi khoob apne likha hai ehsaas bahut hi pyare hai aap ko padna hamesha hi ek alag ehsaas deta hai unhi bazam mein roshni kartey rahiye................aap ka bhai
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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19th August 2007, 07:08 PM
Agar mai kuch galat kah rahi hu,to mujhe maaf kar dena, lekin kitna coindence lagta hai na, aapki gazal ke kuch lines "Mushkil" ji ke 17 august ke post kiye gazal se kitna milta hai na?
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=57303 Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi, Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
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Sahi kaha!!! -
19th August 2007, 08:42 PM
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Dosto Ek tehreer padi thi yahan amanush ji ki jisne kuch is tareh se dil ko chua ke dil ne uske ashar ke kuch jawaab diye hai... Koi bhool hui ho to maufi ka talabgaar hun... tehreer ka naam woh aise aise baatein karti hai... Amanush ji ki.... Yeh kuch ashaar dil se likhe hai unki tehreer ke jawaab mein... Aap ki raaye ka muntazir.... Abrar.... Aadab Dharkan Ji... Isse pehle yeh mudda mujhe kisi mushkil mein daalde... Yeh Us Tehreer ke jawab likhne ki koshish thi meri jo aap sabke beech mein pesh ki the... Haan Iske Lines Milte hai par ek bhi ashaar nahi milta... Is tareh se main jahan tak sochta hun koi galat baat nahi hai... kyun ke unke ashaaron ke jawaab ki koshish ki gayi thi yahan.... Agar fir bhi kisi ko yeh baat galat lage to Ap Is post ko delete karva sakta hain... Duaon Ke saath Ijazat... Abrar.... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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20th August 2007, 04:01 PM
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Dost mujhe maaf kardo |
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Dost mujhe maaf kardo -
20th August 2007, 06:04 PM
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Abrar ji , mai haath jor kar aap se maafi maang rahi hu. Mai ye dono gazal parh kar confused ho gay thi, isliye apna confusion post kar diya tha. bahtar hai na ke mai apni dil ki baat kah du? Agar mai man me confusion lekar baithi rahti to bura hota na? Lekin shaayad mai ne aap ka dil dukha diya,mujhe maaf kardijiye plz  Mujhe nahi lagta hai ke aap ka thread delete hona chaahiye,agar hona hota to ab tak ho hi jaata. Aap ne achha likha aur bahot achhi andaaz me Mushkil ji ke gazal ka jawaab diya. Bas jo thora sa confusion huwi thi ab dur ho gaya. Aap ne mujhe maaf kiya? Reshma, Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi, Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
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20th August 2007, 07:54 PM
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Reshma Ji... Main apki kisi bhi baat se naraaz nahi hun... Aur aapko haath jor kar maafi mangne ki koi zarurat bhi nahi hai... Apke dil mein ek confusion aya jise maine door kiya bas itna hi... Ap ka hak the poochna aur aapne poocha... Main yeh intro pehle dena bhool gaya tha is liye baad mein likha hai... edit nahi kar sakta tha isliye neecha agaya... Aur Abrar Ji ki jageh abrar hi behter hai main yahan jahan tak jaanta hun bohot chhota hun sab se.. Aage Ji laga ker Mujhe bada na kare.. jitna hun utna hi theek hun.... Aur Aap ne maafi mang kar accha nahi kiya... Is baar to khair ho gaya aage se kuch is tareh ki baat poochni ho to be jhijak poochle.... Aapka hak banta hai poochna aur mera farz hai ke main jawaab dun... Chale Bohot likhdiya..... Phir kabhi mulakat hogi... Duaon Ke saath Ijazat... Abrar... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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22nd August 2007, 01:31 AM
wah abrar ji, is baar b, ek behetrein nazm pesh ki hai apne. aapke yeh ehsaas humein bahut ache lage. yuhin likte rahein, aur khush rahein.
aapka dost manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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23rd August 2007, 06:52 PM
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Abrar... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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23rd August 2007, 06:53 PM
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Shukriyah Reshma Ji... yunhi saath dete rahe... Abrar... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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26th August 2007, 04:25 PM
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Yunhi likhte rahiyega aur apna khayaal bhi thik se rakhna, ok...? Duaaon ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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26th August 2007, 04:50 PM
Abraar bhaa'ii:
adaab-o-taSleemaat.. mujHe baRii KhuShii ho rahii hay aapko itanaa achchhaa liKhate huye deKh ke.. Bahot hi baDiyaa jawaab diYaa hay aapne Danny jee kii kosiSh ke aSh'aar ko paRh ke... bas Khuda sey duaa yahi raheNgi ki aap ko YuuNhi kaamyaabee milti raheN.. mehnat karte rahiYe YuuN hii... dil sey niklii huii daad-o-mubaarakbaad ko qabUl farmaayeN... KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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27th August 2007, 12:39 AM
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Bohot bohot shukriyah bhai aapka... Apko apni kisi post par dekh kar dil khush ho jata hai... yunhi saath dete rahe... Abrar.... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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27th August 2007, 12:43 AM
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Bhai aapne jo kaha woh aapse sunke Dil aaj soch raha hai han aaj maine kuch seekha hai aur kuch sahi likha... Ap jaise sab saath de aur aapko pad kar seekhe to Sab hi accha likh sakhenge... yahan kaafi accha likhne wale hai... Aur sahi kahun to har ek shaks accha likhta hai... bas sirf jahan alfaaz ko sahi piroya woh dil chuu jaati hai... Shukriya raj bhai.. main aapka mamnoon hun... Aankhon mein aansu liye yehi kahunga ke saath dete rahe... aur galti ho to sudhaar te rahe... Abrar... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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27th August 2007, 12:50 AM
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Shukriyah manish bhai... Yunhi saath dete rahe... Abrar... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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24th September 2007, 02:14 PM
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Apke Ashaar itne aasan nahi the ke puri tareeke se jawab de saku.. Bas ek chhoti si kochihc ki hai... Accha laga apko yeh baat jaankaar khushi hui... Yunhi saath dete rahe... Abrar... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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24th September 2007, 02:16 PM
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Apka bohot bohot shukriyah... Likhte likhte behtar hote hi hai... Bas Hum bhi sudharne ki koshish kar rahe hain... Yunhi saath dete rahe... Duaon mein shamil karne ke liye bohot bohot shukriyah... Bas yunhi yaad rakhe... Abrar... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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24th September 2007, 02:17 PM
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Abhi ke liye Ijazat... Abrar... Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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