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POORN WiraaM ( Full Stop ) -
5th September 2003, 01:37 PM
Hone lagi Thi NeeNdeiN haraam apni
Barhne lagi thi har roj thodi-thodi bekaraari, Dard ban'ne lagi thi kisi or ke khaatir uski chaahat Dil ke aaine me, lagne lage the hum bhikhaari, Phir socha or badi mushkiloN se socha Ke ik baat to ye hausla kiya jaae, Apni chaahat se kinaara karke, kyoN na Uski khushiyoN se dosti ki jaae, Is'se pehle ke wo, apni manzil ka pata de Hal-e-dil kaheeN ye aankheiN na bata deiN, KyoN na ye baat yaheeN pe daba li jaae..! Alvida kehke use, nai raah bana li jaae. Chaand Ik muddaat lagjaati hai in KhwaaboN ko sajaane me... Sach badi bedil hoti hai ye subheiN Jara bhi intzaar nahi karti... sach ki roshni dikhaane me. Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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Re: POORN WiraaM ( Full Stop ) -
5th September 2003, 07:50 PM
Is'se pehle ke wo, apni manzil ka pata de
Hal-e-dil kaheeN ye aankheiN na bata deiN, KyoN na ye baat yaheeN pe daba li jaae..! Alvida kehke use, nai raah bana li jaae. wah chand sheb ...bahot khoob...sacha aur saaf likha hai aapne...mein samajh sakta hoon aap ke zazbaat....daad qubool farmaiye.. -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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Shukriya Manoj ji -
6th September 2003, 10:50 AM
Shukriya Manoj ji, tahe dil se shukriya ada karta hooN na sirf is liye ke aapne ise parha, saraaha balki is kavita ke maadhyam se jo meine kaha use samajhne ki koshish bhi ki.
Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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6th September 2003, 11:04 AM
chaand dost,
aaj yah tasweer mere dil maie lagaate wakt jo mahesoos kiya hai... oose k liyae tumse kuchh n kah paaungi..... udaas aur udaas..... dard aur dard....... pata nahi ab aur kya rang dekhne hai hamae.... |
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Mai jaanta hooN.. |
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Mai jaanta hooN.. -
6th September 2003, 11:15 AM
Mai jaanta hooN.. Meena ji
Jaanta hooN ke kuchh chehre eise bhi haiN Jinhe mera dard udaas kar jaata hai, Bas isi khayaal ke chalte ye Chaand Chehre badal badal ke aata hai. Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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6th September 2003, 11:51 AM
chaand dost,
baat udasi ki ho ya khushi ki...... tumse hamesha sher kar paayi hu...... hum dono yah baat barabar jaante hai... par mere sammne tum kabhi bhi alag chara le kar nahi aana ... sachhai ka bhlae jo roop ho wahi chera lana ... aur tum yahi karte ho mere sathh yah bhi yakin hai fir bhi kaha... |
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6th September 2003, 02:32 PM
Aapki soch to bohat achhi hai Chaand saahab! Kisi ki khushi ki khaatir apni chaahat qurbaan karna.. ye aasaan nahi hota.. dil me kaii sawaal uThte hain.. jinka shayad jawaab hota hi nahi.. lekin sahi waqt par aisa faisla lena, bohat hi himmat ka kaam hota hai.
Kuchh khayaal zehen me aaye hain.. arz kar rahe hain.. Kar diya reha use bandish e mohabbat se, Ki aaj hum ghulam e ghum ho gaye. Humesha ki tarah.. behtareen likha hai aapne. |
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Shukriya Banno ji -
8th September 2003, 11:27 AM
Shukriya banno ji, aapne jo kuchh bhi kaha wakai bahut gehra kaha hai, sach kaheiN to ' Jab dard barhne lagta hai to kuchh is tarah ke faisle lene ki himmat to karni hi padti hai'.
..dil me kaii sawaal uThte hain.. jinka shayad jawaab hota hi nahi... Kar diya reha use bandish e mohabbat se, Ki aaj hum ghulam e ghum ho gaye. Khoob kaha aapne, par sach kaheiN to gulaam-e-gam to pehle se hi the, kya pata wo mohobbat thi bhi ya nahi... Ek gaane ke bol haiN.... Sach mere yaar hai, bas wahi pyar hai jiske badle me koi to pyar de, Baaki bekaar hai.. yaar mere. Film : Saagar Aapke khayaalat pesh karne ke liye tahe dil se shukriya. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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8th September 2003, 12:54 PM
Humare ek dost ne kabhi kaha tha.. ki mohabbat aur dard me koi fark nahi.. shayad aapka bhi kuchh aisa hi kissa ho.. dard aur mohabbat, dono hi kaii himmat waale kaam karne par majboor kar deta hai insaan ko..
khair.. aap apne khayaal yunhi bakhoobi pesh karte rahiye.. hum apni rai dene ke liye haazir hote rahenge..  |
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