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be rokhi -
28th May 2003, 05:52 PM
teri be rokhi baja hai magar haam kuch kar nahi sakte
yaad din rat karte hain magar baat kar nahi sakte. |
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28th May 2003, 06:03 PM
Hi
Accha likha hai aapne,magar mujhe pehle line mein baja ka matlab samajh nahi aaya. Ek Benaam shayar |
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28th May 2003, 06:13 PM
bohat achcha likha hai aap ne.
go ke yeh eik shaiyre hai magar aap ne is mein kaafi kuch keh diya hai. i really appreciate your gesture. keep it up. musharrafhusain Note : Rami saheb ke liey arz karoon gaa keh baja ke maana hote hain sahi, (yaani aap kisi ko kahen ketum baja keh rahe ho,is ka matlab hai keh tum sahi keh rahe ho.) mera khayal hai ke tamseela mujh se ittefaaq karen gi. |
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28th May 2003, 09:17 PM
boht acha likha ha app na. keep up the good work!!!!!
Anjane Mein Mujko Woh Shayar Bana Gaya |
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