Adhuraa Khat...

[Mayank]

Adhuraa Khat

Zindagii maiN jab kabhii koi aham faisla karne ka waqt aata hai tou yah zaroorii hota hai ki faisla aisa liya jaye jo apni zindagi ke saath dusre ki zindagii ko bhi mehka de. Khas kar tab… jab Mamlaa do desho ki sanskriti se judaa hoo tou yah zaroori hi nahi ki aap ke faisle se aap ko faidaa hi faidaa ho, lekin dusre ke sukh maiN apnaa sukh samjhnaa bhi kam khushii ki baat naahi hai. Zindagii ki inn aadarshooN ko bayaan kar rahi hai yah kahaanii.

Mujhe Yakin hai aap sab ko yah kahaani pasand aayegi aur aap sab apnaa anmol sujhav hame denge. Hame intezaar rahegaa aap ke kimti sujhavo kaa.

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(Bindu Meri muh boli bahen hai. bachpan main hi us ke ma baap ke gujar jane ke baad woh hamaare saath hi rahetii thi )

Bindu ko humeshaa mujh se yah shikayat rahi hai ki meiN usay khat nahi likhtaa aur khat ka jawaab dene meiN bhi deri kartaa hooN. Pichlii baar jab woh aayi thi tou uss ne dabdabaaii aankhooN aur bharraii huii awaz meiN kahaa thaa

Bhaiya…. MeiN India se baahaar gayi hooN iss duniyaa se nahi.

Maine puchaa Kyun Kyaa huaa?

Bindu ne kahaa Aap jaante haiN meiN kya kah rahi hooN mujhe samjhaane ki kousish naa kereiN, aap bade bhaii haiN issiliye meiN aap se humeshaa pyaar ki aashaa rakhtii hooN fir aap ke sivaa hai hi koun meri iss duniyaa main?

In shabdooN ke saath uss aankheiN jo nam hone ka sirf ehsaas de rahi thi aab khul kar barashne lagii thii. Usay rote huai dekhkar meiN sharmshar hone lagaa thaa. Mera ehsaas kasmasaane lagaa thaa. Maine uss ka maathaa chum kar usay yah biswash dilaane ki kousish ki thii meiN wakaii uss ka badaa bhaii hooN. Aur maa baap na hone ke surat mai woh mujh me apne maa baap ka chhabii dekhtii hai tou koii galatii nahi kartii. Mager iss se pahle meiN uss ke aakrosh aur narazagi ko door karne ke liye kuch kahtaa woh tunak kar bolii thii.

Mahine bhar aap ke khat ka intezaar mere aankhoon meiN kunkunataa hai. Aap ka khush haali, aap ka halchal janne ke liye bechain rahetii hooN aur aap ka khayaal aate hi chatpataane lagtii hooN par aap ne jane kaise patthar dil insaan haiN ki apne chhotii bahen ko ek letter tak post karne ka zahmat nahi karte. Kaii baar mere liye yah bardast Karnaa mushkil ho jaataa hai. MeiN rone lagti hooN.

Mein lagbhag sugbugaata huaa bola thaa ki MeiN apni bhool sweekaar kartaa hooN. Maine uss ke aanshooN poche the aur uss ka sar apni chhati se lagakar uss ka maathaa sah lane lagaa thaa.

Bindu ek mahine baad lout gayii. Mager ek kasak mere dil meiN chhoor gayi thii jo bijlii ki tarah rah rah kar koundhtii thii aur mujhe yaad dilaatii thi ki vaastav mai hi meiN usay khat likhne ke liye udaasin hooN. Mujhe khayaal aaya Bindu baalig hai par uss ne shaadi nahi ki. Woh akeli rahetii hai magar kahaan rahetii hai? Noukrii kartii hai magar kahaan kartii hai? Kin logooN ke saath kaam kartii hai meiN kuch bhi tou nahi jantaa thaa.Apne khanaa, kamaana, rahen sahan, aur rakh rakhaaw ka saara zimmedaari khud usi par hai. Uss ne kabhii mujhe iss bare meiN koi madadd nahi maangaa. Kuch din pahele to woh yahaan se gayi hai. Maine sochaa bhi thaa ki puch looN par puch naa payaa.Abb mere qalam ne letter pad par likh diye.

Bindu meri pyaari bahen,

Bhagwaan tumhe lambii umra de.

Mager iss pahele ki meiN kuch aur likhtaa mere dimaagh par unn dino ki yaadeiN fir se taaza hone lage jo Bindu ne Americaa se aakar mere saath bitaaye the. MeiN apne kamre meiN bethaa tha ki achaanak mere padosh ka ladkaa bhaagaa huaa aata hai aur kahetaa hai ki dekho uncle Bindu aaunti mere liye yah khiloona laayi hai. Bahut khubsurat hai na? Mujhe bhi woh khiloonaa bahut achhaa laga thaa. MeiN mann hi mann American karigarooN ki taareef kartaa hooN jinhone apni mehnat aur lagan se yah khilonaa banyii hai. Itne mai whaan Bindu bhii aa jaati haii. Kahatii hai ki Dekhiye bhaiyaa meiN aap ke liye yah cordless layii hooN aur yah cassette player cum recorder hai. Mujhe woh dono chiz bahut pasand aati hai.Mere mooh se yah nikaltaa hai Kuch bhi ho Americans ka to jawab hi nahi! Kitni khubsurat chizeiN banate haiN.

Bindu ne khilkhilaa kar haste huai kahaa thaa Yah made in Jaapan hai bhaiyaa.America meiN aisa kuch nahi bantaa. Mujhe bahut tazub huaa maine puchaa fir wahaan kyaa bantaa hai? Bindu ke chehre par ek fikii mushkurahat aa gayii woh ek pal ke liye sirf diwarooN ki aur ghuratii hai jaise ki mere sawaloon ka jawab woh diwarooN se salah le kar dena chahtii hai. Thore dair ke baad uss ne kahaa

Har woh chiz wahaan bantii hai jo duniyaa ki khubsuratii ko bad suratii meiN tabdill kar saktaa hai. Maslan Topp, Bomb, misaile, Paramnu indhan . Woh dusre deshooN par ladayiaan thoptaa hai bhiayaa, Kabhi viyatnaam par ko kabhii Korea par to kabhii Iraq par. Uss ke paas barud ka jungle hai. Woh yudh ke podhe bechtaa hai. Yah kahte huai us ski awaz dhire dhire kathor hone lagtii hai, uss ke gaal gusse se tamtamane lagti hai.

Parmanu shaktii banne ki lalak? MeiN tazub ke saath puchtaa hooN. Bindu kahtii hai Aur nahi tou kyaa? Kyaa aap ko pataa hai ki Bharat aur Pakistan ne jo abhi parmaanu ke parikhyan(Test) kiye haiN, Dhartii ke nabhii meiN jo suraag kiya haiN, bade bade parvetooN ko raakh meiN badal diyaa hai. uss ka parinaam kyaa hogaa? Mere mooh se koii jawab nahi nikaltaa. Mera dimaagh fir vartamaan ki aur aata hai meiN fir apne letter pad ki aur dekhtaa hooN.

Bindu meri pyaari bahen,

Bhagwaan tumhe lambii umra de.

Iss ibaarat ko rah rah kar padhtaa hooN.Aisaa hi khat Bindune mere liye likhaa thaa jab woh America pahunch gayii thii. Uss ne likhaa thaa

Pyaare bhaiyaa,

Bhagwaan aap ko lambii umra de.Mujhe yakiin hai ki jab aap mujh se milne hostel pahunche hoge tab aap ko mere America chale jaane kaa sandesh milaa hogaa. Aap yah soch rahe honge ki Maa-Baap ke uth jaane ke baad aap ne mujhe Atma Nirbhar banana ke liye kyaa kyaa nahi kiyaa. Par meiN yahaan chali aayi aap ki permission ke binaa. Aap ko bole bager..

Mujhe biswash hai ki aap mujhe ehsaan faramosh kah rehe hoge aur aap ko dil meiN bahut dukh huaa hogaa. Meri room mate Farhaana ko tou aap jaante hi haiN? Uss ke bhaii Firoz ne mere liye Dr.Piter Naam ki ek sponser ki vyabastaa ki thi. Firoz khud yahaaN rahataa hai. Woh bahut achhaa ladkaa hai mera bahut khayaal rakhtaa hai. ”

Aap ki bahen

Bindu


Khat padh kar mere tan baden meiN aag lag gayii. Maine gusse meiN khat phad kar uss ke tukde tukde kar diye. Uss ke baad Bindu kaii baar aayi aur lout gayii. Har baar jaate waqt khat likhene ka Isaaraa kartii .Par ek baar bhii meiN khat nahi likh sakaa. Par aab ki baar maine pakka iradaa kar liyaa thaa ki iss baar meiN khat zaroor likhoongaa. Meri Nazar iss ibaarat par baar baar doudtii hai. Achanak meri chhotii bahen ka awaz aata hai jo mujhe ek baar fir se khayaalooN ki duniyaa se baahar nikalti hai. Woh puchtii hai ki gumshum kyaa soch rahe ho?

Maine kahaa ki Bindu ko khat likh rahaa hooN. Chahataa hooN likhooN ki shaadi kar le apne marzi se chahe Firoz se ho yaa Piter se.Mujhe Bharoshaa hai ki iss ke baad behtaar duniyaa meiN jine kaa uss ka sapnaa fir se saakar ho jayegaa. Tumne batayaa naa ki woh Firoz ko jee jaan se chahtii hai aur yah bhi ki Piter uss ka bahut khayaal rakhtaa hai.Jaahir hai piter bhi usay chahtaa hogaa.

Rekhaa ne kahaa haan yah such hai par shaadii dono meiN se kisi se nahi ho saktii. Ek Brahman ladkii ko apni bahu banakar usay musalmaan banana Firoz ki maa ko achhaa nahi lagaa. Uss ne Firoz ki shaadi ek Isaaii Ladki se kar dii.

Manie Puchaa Aur piter?Tumne bataayaa thaa ki Piter bhi uss par jaan chidaktaa hai.

Rekhaa ne kahaa Haan uss ne shaadi ka prastab tou diyaa thaa Bindu ko par Bindu ne usay mana kar diyaa. Woh kahtii hai ki jab woh Piter se pyaar hi nahi kartii to shaadii ka sawaal hi kahaan uthtaa hai?

Piter ki chahhat ka kaaran alag hai. Woh Americaa ki sanskriti se ubb chukaa hai. Uski maa ne vidhwaa hote hue dusri shaadii kar li thi. Usski sauteli bahen ek charitrheen ladkii hai jo apne sharirik sukh ke liye kahin bhi ja sakti haii. Issiliye Piter kisi aisi bideshi ladkii se shaadii karnaa chahtaa hai jis ke wajood meiN wafaooN ki mahek basi ho.

Maine kahaa Tum kahoo tou Mein Bindu se kahooN ki woh apne faisle par ek baar fir se soch le.

Rekhaa ne kahaa Bindu woh ladkii nahi hai jo apne aadarshooN ki kimat par koi samjhotaa kar le.Piche mood kar dekhnaa uss ki aadat nahi hai. Mujhe yaad hai Bindu ne kahaa thaa

Meri pyaarii bahen, Americaa meiN rahenaa aur baat hai aur kisi Americans se shaadi karnaa ek dum alag. HaaN meine apne ujwal bhavishay ke liye pardes jaana jarur manzur kia tha per mein apna purn samarpan nahi hone doungi. Mein apne desh se juri rehna chahti hu. Mujhe jo sanskar mile hai . mere apne desh se. wahi sanskriti wahi vichar. mein apni santaan mein dekhna chahti hu. apne desh se duur nahi hona chahti. Chaand to dono desho mein hi nikalta hai. Kintu. chaand ki chaandni ka mahtav sirf bhartiye nari ko hi malum hai jo har karwachauth ke din chaand ka besabri se intezar karti hai. Mein in sanskaro se judi rehna chahti hu. Apne aane wali pidhi ko mein yehi neev dena chahti hu.

Aur yeh sab kisi Americans se shadi kar ke nahi ho payegaa. Mein us desh maiN shaadi nahi karnaa chahti jo dusrooN ka jine ka adhikaar chhintaa ho. MeiN unn ke yudh ki tahzeeb ka hissaa bhi nahi ban naa chahtii. MeiN un mai se nahi Jo pardes ki chakachond mein andhe ho kar apni jado (roots ) ko bhhul jate hai. Mein us bagiche ko wahi sungadit phhul lautana chaahti hooN. jin phuulo ke sath kabhi beth kar meine apne jeevan ko sahi manzil di

Mujhe lagaa ki meiN aur aagay kuch nahi likh paaungaa aur isi ke saath Bindu ki mera khat padhne ki ichaa phir se adhuuri hi reh gai …!!!

[talkingeyes]

Mayank ji ..

.... Bahut hi umda koshish hai aap yeh ... Prem kataho se hat kar ..... aap ne jin adarsh aur ..ehsas .. pradarshit karna chaye is kahani ke madahym se ....hame bahut pasand aaye ... !! ..... Bhai behan na hote hue bhi .... ek dusre ke prati .. ek ehasas hona .. bahut badhi baat hai apne aap mein ... aaj kal ki duniya mein jaahan apna khuun badal jata hai ....wahan ek anjaan se aese rishte ki.. umeed karna bahut badhi baat hai apne aap mein . !!

aur sab se jaida ...aap ki kahani ... apne desh ki sanskriti ke prati .. jis tarah ka bhaav le kar haamare saamne aayi hai ...woh bahut hi kabil -e tareef hai .... aaj kal ki pidhhi .( generation).... jahan ..apne desh ko chor kar .. pardesh mein basna ..aur settle hona manzoor karti hai .... wahan Bindu( Main character) ... ka ...apne desh ke prati lagav aur zimedari dekh kar ....man mein ek izzat ka bhaav aa jata hai ... !!

Umeed karti hu ..aap ki kahani .... sab logo ke dilo mein apne desh ke prati .. zimedari aur sanskriti ko bachane ka ehasaas le kar aaye .

Bahut khuub koshish hai aaap ki ...hame pasand aai

Talkingeyes

[Mayank]

Shaalinii Jii,

Hello,

Aap ne iss kahaanii ko padhaa aur pasand kiyaa iss ke liye tah~e~dil se sukriyaa.

Shayed mai iss kahaanii ko itnaa achaa ant na de paataa par mere ek friend ne meri madad ki hai. Uss kaa naam Shalu hai. Aap ke naam se kafii milta jultaa naam hai. Hai na? Bas us ki hi wajah se kahaanii ko yah ant de paaye varnaa hum ne tou iss kahaanii ka kuch alag hi ant soch rakhaa thaa. Iss kahaanii ka aakhirii dialogue mere friend ka hi likhaa huaa hai.

Meri tamanaa thi ki kuch alag type ki story likhooN aur iss kahaanii ka base milaa mujhe IRAQ WAR ke waqt. Tab isse adhuraa chhoraa thaa jise maine abb puraa kiyaa.

Aap ki taareef ke liye ek baar fir se tah~e~dil se sukriyaa. Umeed hai aap se humeshaa aisaa hi sahyog miltaa rahegaa. Apnaa khayaal rakhiiyegaa.

Mayank

Ek Anjana Rahi

[UDAS]

Mayank ji...aapki ye kahani bhi pari...

hamari bhartiye sanskriti ka ek jeeta-jagta roop BINDU...bahut pasand aaye ye kahani...bahut kucchh likhna chahti hu..lekin vicharo ki kashmokash kuchh spasht hoti nazer nahi aati...aapki her kahani ek chhap chhorti hui jaati hai...

aur sab se bari baat ki aap ka shabdo ko pariyog bahut umda hota hai..ek sadhe hua writer ki tareh...jo kaabile tareef hai..aur acchhe sahityik gyan ki soochna bhi deta hai...

mera us bindu patr ko naman hai jo apne carrier k liye apne aapko bali nahi charati jabki hamare indiya me maine apne offices me kitni aisi kahaniya palti hui dekhi jo apne carrier k liye hi sirf apne zameer ko baich deti hai...such me ye ek bahut hi mushkil kaam tab aur bhi mushkil ho jaata hai jab ek larki akeli videsh me apne sateetv ki raksha karti hui apne carrier ko aage bara rahi hai..uske liye meri shubhkamnai hai..

and thanx to u to share this story with us..

urs udas

[Mayank]

Tnx. Sunita ji