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खुद का करम - 13th December 2014, 11:48 AM

खुद का करम

कुछ न बोल, कुछ ना कर,
बस, खुद की आँखों से शर्म कर |

झूठ बोल लेगा, तू तेरी माँ से भी,
ना झूठ बोल सकेगा तू, खुद से कभी,

सच भरा है तुझ में ही, कहीं ना कहीं,
स्वीकार ले ए बन्दे, ये वक्त है सही,

हर इंसान में छिपा प्यार है |
प्यार ही तो इंसानियत की पहचान है

इंसान नहीं बना मज़हब से,
मज़हब है सजा इंसानियत से,

न इंतजार कर किसी के पहल की,
ज़िन्दगी है तेरी,

हिफाज़त कर खुद के करम की ,
खुद के करम की

By: कर्णिका पाठक
Source : http://www.deepawali.co.in/khud-ka-k...di-kavita.html

खुद का करम हिंदी कविता जिसमे एक ऐसा सच हैं जिससे कोई इनकार नहीं कर सकता | कोई भी इंसान बहुत ही बुरा ही क्यूँ ना हो पर खुद से झूठ नहीं बोल सकता वो अपनी माँ को भी पराया कर जाए पर खुद के सायें से दूर नहीं जा सकता | समाज का हर व्यक्ति सच जानता हैं सभी को सही गलत की पहचान हैं पर वो अपने दिल की सुनना नहीं चाहता वो समाज की भेड़ चाल में चलता हैं | बरसो की चली रीत को सच मानता हैं जिसके लिए वो इंसान होकर भी इंसानियत को कुचलता हैं | प्यार की परिभाषा वो जानत तो हैं पर उस राह पर चलने से पहले वो समाज की तरफ देखता हैं |

आज हर व्यक्ति को जरुरत हैं खुद को समझने और खुद के कर्मो को सुधारने की ताकि जब भी वह अपने आप से रूबरू हो तो उसे खुद से कोई शिकायत ना हो |

इस हिंदी कविता के माध्यम से यही कहना हैं कि ऐ बन्दे ! ना हिन्दू बन, ना मुस्लिम, न भ्रष्टाचार का गुलाम,बस एक इंसान बन | कुछ ऐसे कर्म कर, के खुद से कोई शर्म ना हो | हर व्यक्ति अगर अपने करम की हिफाज़त करेगा तो हमारा देश वापस सोने की चिड़िया कहलायेगा |
   
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13th December 2014, 12:11 PM

Bohot sundar rachna hai Karnika ji

Aaise hi achi achi kavitaye likhti rahen.

Shubkamnaye

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Karnika ji aapk ka SDC parivar mein tahe dil se swagat hai aur umeed karte haiN ki aap ki aur bhi rachnayeiN bakhoobi isi tarah aage bhi parne ko milti rahengi ....

Aap ki kavita khud ka karam bahut acha laga humein ..

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Karnika saahiba... aadaaab

shayri ki is bazm me main shaad aapka tahe dil se swaagat karta hoon.....


jis tarah se aapne is bazme hindi kavitaa me dastak dii hai... usse aapke hunar aapki fankaarii saaf nazar aa rahii hai.... yaqeen maaniye main bahot mutassir huaa hoon aapkii is khoobsurat aur aankhen kholne waali kavitaa se..... samaaj ke liye ye kavitaa ek aainaa saabit ho saktii hai aur hamaari ye website usii ka ek maadhyam hai ke ham apni aawaaz jantaa ke saamne kaise pahochaaen.......

mujhe poorii ummeed hai ke aap hamare saath yoonhi apne ehsaas baanTtee rahengee.... likhtii rahengee..... aur aamad banae rahengii.......

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Welcome to sdc karnika.....
bahut achchi lagi aapki kavita...aur aage bhi aapko padne ka mauka dete rahiyega...
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