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Ghazal: baat ChhoTii sii haii maaniYe saahib...! -
31st March 2012, 11:36 PM
Mere Pyaare dostoN: aap sabhee ko meraa Aadaab aur Namaskaar !! aik ChhoTii sii koShiSh aap sab ke saath baaNT rahaa huuN... ummid kartaa huuN aap sab kaa saath aur pyaar mujhe ees baar bhee milengaa...mulA'iizaa farmaayeN...! ****************************** baat ChhoTii sii haii maaniYe saahib ik naZar hum ko bhee deKhiYe saahib dil lagaa baiThe hoN Zindagee se kyuuN Zindagee Zaalim haii maaniYe saahib hum pareShaaN dil bhee pareShaaN haii chup nah baiThe kuChh to boliYe saahib ko'i kehtaa kuChh ko'ii kaheN kuChh aor auroN ki baateN sau sochiYe saahib firte rehte hoN har Sheh'r meiN har dam Ghar ko rauShan karne lauTiYe saahib raat tanhaa tanhaa din bhi tanhaa haii KhuShiyaaN dene ab aa'iYe saahib Khud ko kar duuN muHabbat meiN QurbaaN jaaN ki jaaN bhi hai haaZir leejiYe saahib ****************************** |
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31st March 2012, 11:52 PM
dil lagaa baiThe hoN Zindagee se kyuuN
Zindagee Zaalim haii maaniYe saahib Bahut Khoob ... Dhaval Ji ! AchChhe Sher Hue HaiN ... Qaafiya Aur Radeef Ko Khoobsurti Se Nibhaayaa Hai ! UmdaaH Peshkash ... Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!   YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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2nd April 2012, 02:33 PM
baat ChhoTii sii haii maaniYe saahib
ik naZar hum ko bhee deKhiYe saahib dil lagaa baiThe hoN Zindagee se kyuuN Zindagee Zaalim haii maaniYe saahib bahut sahi kaha.......! .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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2nd April 2012, 09:42 PM
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Waaaahhhhhh.................... Bahot khoob janaab........... |
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2nd April 2012, 10:37 PM
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3rd April 2012, 02:42 PM
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hi Dhaval howz u... it really awesome and touching do keep writing like this taecaer both jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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9th April 2012, 09:13 PM
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daad sar'aaNKhoN par.. KhuSh rahiye duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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2nd May 2012, 08:55 AM
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Pranaam yuunhi aage bhee saath dete rahiye... duaaon ke saath ijaazat aapka ChhoTu |
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2nd May 2012, 12:32 PM
Dhaval Bhaii behad khoob surat likha he aapne har ek sher khoob kahe he dili daad kabool kare aur yeh do sher dil ke khaas kareeb rahe
dil lagaa baiThe hoN Zindagee se kyuuN Zindagee Zaalim haii maaniYe saahib Khud ko kar duuN muHabbat meiN QurbaaN jaaN ki jaaN bhi hai haaZir leejiYe saahib yuhn hi likhte rahe aapka dost nihar Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai |
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13th July 2012, 10:56 AM
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salaam! aapne merii koShiSh ko apnaa qeemtee waqtr diyaa maiN ShuKraGuzaar huuN aapka ! saath nibhaate rahiye aage bhee Khush rahen... apnaa Khayaal raKhen duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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14th July 2012, 03:53 PM
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bhut khoob daad kabool kare saahiib.......................... kafiir mai dobne lagta hoon samnder uchal deta hai Us Mukaaaa pe mera junon aajaye tujhe pukaroon mere muh se khoon ajaaye ...nm |
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14th July 2012, 06:43 PM
gud job dhaval bhai
keep writing take care. |
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15th July 2012, 03:49 AM
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dhaval ji aapke dili daad aapki umdaa peshkash par khush raheaur aarzoo meri sirf usko paa lene ki. |
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28th July 2012, 09:20 AM
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salaam!! koShiSh ko pasand karne ke liye bahot bahot ShuKriyaah !! saath dete rahen KhuSh rahen... apnaa Khayaal raKhen duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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