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Thumbs up Ghazal: Wo lamhe bahot hii suhaane the...! - 12th May 2018, 11:08 AM

Mere pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

Aik baar fir se haazir huuN aap sab ke beech apne dil ke ehsaasoN ko liye.. Ummid kartaa huuN aapko yeh ehsaas pasand aayenge.. Aap sab ka saath aur pyaar mujhe hameshaa se miltaa rahaa hai.. wo ees baar bhee zaruur milenga yehi ummid kartaa huun.. to dostoN mulA'iizaa farmaayeN.!!

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isii ummid meiN jee rahaa huuN maiN.. kabhi na kabhi kahiN na kahiN miloge to sahi tum....phir saath mere chaloge to sahi tum...!
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Wo lamhe bahot hii suhaane the
tere sang jitne guzaare the

mere haath ki in lakeeroN meiN
kismat ne kaii Ghum Chhipaaye the

muhabbat ki raaheN nahiiN aasaaN
par donoN ke pakke iraade the

O mere sanam!! kya Khataa merii
hum ziNdaa hi tere sahaare the

haaN terii kamii ziNdagee meN rahee
jo thee tuu KhuShii ke Thikaaane the

kuChh maaNgu mujhe de sakoge kyaa?
tere dard mujH ko churaane the

Qaabil JOSH tum na rahe usske
jissko raaz dil ke sunaaye the

Ik arsaa huaa ussko deKhe hue
Wo kabhi JOSH aanKhoN ke taare the


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*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...

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12th May 2018, 11:18 AM

Wahhh dhaval bhai..
Bahut khoob ..
bahut dinoN baad aaj login kiya ..

Bahut achha laga aapko padh ke

Likhte rahiye
Khush rahiye

Daad


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12th May 2018, 11:24 AM

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mere pyaare doston:

Namaskaar aur aadaab!

Aik baar fir se haazir huun aap sab ke beech apne dil ke ehsaason ko liye.. Ummid kartaa huun aapko yeh ehsaas pasand aayenge.. Aap sab ka saath aur pyaar mujhe hameshaa se miltaa rahaa hai.. Wo ees baar bhee zaruur milenga yehi ummid kartaa huun.. To doston mula'iizaa farmaayen.!!

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isii ummid mein jee rahaa huunmain.. Kabhi na kabhi kahin na kahin miloge to sahi tum....phir saath mere chaloge to sahi tum...!
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wo lamhe bahot hii suhaane the
tere sang jitne guzaare the

mere haath ki in lakeeron mein
kismat ne kaii ghum chhipaaye the

muhabbat ki raahen nahiin aasaan
par donon ke pakke iraade the

o mere sanam!! Kya khataa merii
hum zindaa hi tere sahaare the

haan terii kamii zindagee men rahee
jo thee tuu khushii ke thikaaane the

kuchh maangu mujhe de sakoge kyaa?
Tere dard ghum ko churaane the

qaabil josh tum na rahe usske
jissko raaz dil ke sunaaye the

ik arsaa huaa ussko dekhe hue
wo kabhi josh aankhon ke taare the


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मेरे मित्र धवल
आखिर एक लंबे अंतराल के बाद तेरी इस नज्म को पढ़ने का मौका मिला और पढ़ने के बाद पुरानी वह सब यादें सामने घूम गई जब हम सब लोग एक साथ इस परिवार में धूम मचाया करते थे अब तो बस समय की कमी के कारण यहां आना नहीं हो पाता। क्या कहूँ दोस्त, बहुत ही उम्दा अहसास हैं। पुनः शायरी की दुनिया मे कदम रखने के लिए बधाई


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Hi Dhaval, Bahaut achha likha hai aapne.

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5th June 2018, 04:16 PM

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Mere pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

Aik baar fir se haazir huuN aap sab ke beech apne dil ke ehsaasoN ko liye.. Ummid kartaa huuN aapko yeh ehsaas pasand aayenge.. Aap sab ka saath aur pyaar mujhe hameshaa se miltaa rahaa hai.. wo ees baar bhee zaruur milenga yehi ummid kartaa huun.. to dostoN mulA'iizaa farmaayeN.!!

*****************************************,*,
isii ummid meiN jee rahaa huuN maiN.. kabhi na kabhi kahiN na kahiN miloge to sahi tum....phir saath mere chaloge to sahi tum...!
********************************************

Wo lamhe bahot hii suhaane the
tere sang jitne guzaare the

mere haath ki in lakeeroN meiN
kismat ne kaii Ghum Chhipaaye the

muhabbat ki raaheN nahiiN aasaaN
par donoN ke pakke iraade the

O mere sanam!! kya Khataa merii
hum ziNdaa hi tere sahaare the

haaN terii kamii ziNdagee meN rahee
jo thee tuu KhuShii ke Thikaaane the

kuChh maaNgu mujhe de sakoge kyaa?
tere dard mujH ko churaane the

Qaabil JOSH tum na rahe usske
jissko raaz dil ke sunaaye the

Ik arsaa huaa ussko deKhe hue
Wo kabhi JOSH aanKhoN ke taare the


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kya baat hai dhaval bhai... kamaal ki adaaygi rahi aapki hamesha ki tarah

sach kahun to kaafi waqt ke baad aaj kuch padhaa aur aapka kalaam jaadu kar gayaa.. madhosh kar gyaaa..

bahot lajawaab peshkash rahi aapki... aage bhi likhte rahen, saajha karte hain shukriyaa

Shaad,.....


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