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kyo'N ye nafrat... - 25th March 2013, 11:34 PM

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Kyo'N ye nafrat ye badzani kaisi ?
ek dooje se berukhi kaisi ??
ek aadam ke hai'N sabhi bete ,
phir ye aapas meiN dushmani kaisi ??
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30th March 2013, 12:55 PM

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QIT'A
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Kyo'N ye nafrat ye badzani kaisi ?
ek dooje se berukhi kaisi ??
ek aadam ke hai'N sabhi bete ,
phir ye aapas meiN dushmani kaisi ??
----Hatim Jawed.


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کیوں یہ نفرت یہ بد ظنی کیسی
ایک دوجے سے بے رخی کیسی
ایک آدم کے ہیں سبھی بیٹے
پھر یہ آپس میں دشمنی کیسی
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WaaH ! Good One ............. !!!




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
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Kyo'N ye nafrat ye badzani kaisi ?
ek dooje se berukhi kaisi ??
ek aadam ke hai'N sabhi bete ,
phir ye aapas meiN dushmani kaisi ??
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کیوں یہ نفرت یہ بد ظنی کیسی
ایک دوجے سے بے رخی کیسی
ایک آدم کے ہیں سبھی بیٹے
پھر یہ آپس میں دشمنی کیسی
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bahot khoob.. hatim javed saahab...


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12th April 2013, 04:42 PM

Javed Sahaab Aadaab...!


WaaH janab waaH Masha AllaaH kia kahne bada hi khoob sher farmaya
aapne... Kia haqeeqi khayaal kaha hai bahut umdaa...

" Ek aadaam ke hai sab bete" kia kahne janab waaH ..

Is khoobsurat khayaal par meri hazaaroN daad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...


Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...


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Javed Sahaab Aadaab...!


WaaH janab waaH Masha AllaaH kia kahne bada hi khoob sher farmaya
aapne... Kia haqeeqi khayaal kaha hai bahut umdaa...

" Ek aadaam ke hai sab bete" kia kahne janab waaH ..

Is khoobsurat khayaal par meri hazaaroN daad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...


Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...
meri adna si takhleeq ke liye itne khoobsoorat alfaaz se nawaazne ke liye tahe-dil se shukriya ! sada khush rahiye..!!
   
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24th April 2013, 10:39 AM

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Kyo'N ye nafrat ye badzani kaisi ?
ek dooje se berukhi kaisi ??
ek aadam ke hai'N sabhi bete ,
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