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Ghazal Of The Month "sep 09" (result announced) -
1st October 2009, 07:47 AM
Aadaab dostoN
Ghazal of the month "september 09" ke liye hame kul 5 Ghazalein mili haiN, . maiN sab se pahle un dostoN ki shukr-guzaar huuN jinhone 'Ghazal of the month' meiN hissa liya aur apnii ghazalein hame bheji...
Aap sab kii yeh ghazalein behad achhi lagii mujhe, iske liye mere taraf se daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool keejiye..
Ummid hai aagey bhi aap sab isi tarah gtm me hissa lete rahenge...
All the best to all the participants...
Aayiye dostoN in ghazaloN ko ab aap maze se padhiye aur voting karke inki hausla afzaai kijiye
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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1st October 2009, 07:50 AM
Besabr hoke, yado.n ke , khaane dhundte hai
najaane hum diwaane, kya jaane ,dhundte hai
hum aise dhundte hai, is dunya me khushi ko
jaise parinde ,sahra,me daane dhundte hai
bachpan me, ghode haathi ,hass hass ke tod dale
Ro ro ke ab, khilone ,puraane dhundte hai
'Dil tak luta diya tha, jin dosto pe maine'
Vo jeb me meri, ik du-anne dhundte hai
taro.n ko chuune walo, kya tumko kuch khabar hai?
dairo haram ko tere, veeraane dhundte hai
ro ro ke muskurati, hai aediyan gumaa se
Jab baap beti bihane ,gharaane dhundte hai
Ik vo hai jo rihaii, ke dhundte hai pahlu
Ik hum hai, jo tire dil me , thaane dhundte hai
Bedar ho gayi hai, paiso se neend jinki
Besood ,khwab ab vo, sirhane dhundte hai
Sahra=desert,registan
Gumaa= pride,fakr,naaz
Besood=unnessary,bina faida
Bedar= alert,chaukanna hona
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1st October 2009, 07:51 AM
Sulagte dasht mei.n mousam suhaane dhoondhte hai.n
Adawato.n mei.n bhi hum dostaane dhoondhte hai.n
Woh surkh phool woh bulbul ke gaane dhoondhte hai.n
Hum ashiqui ke woh guzre zamane dhoondhte hai.n
Jinhe.n ladaai ki aadat padi ho bachpan se
Naye ladaai ke har din bahaane dhoondhte hai.n
Hum apne ghar se kahi.n door jab bhi jate hai.n
Waha.n bhi ghar ke mazedar khaane dhoondhte hai.n
Jo chahte hai.n ke purkho.n ki jaay-daad mile
Kachehri jake woh naqshe puraane dhoondhte hai.n
Ujaad deta hai ghar jinke waqt ka toofa.n
Woh badnaseeb naye ashiyaane dhoondhte hai.n
Jab unki beti ki shaadi ka waqt aata hai
Ghareeb log bhi achhe gharane dhoondhte hai.n
Talash husn ko rehti hai qadrdano.n ki
Nazar ke teer dilo.n ke nishaane dhoondhte hai.n
jo sirf paak zameeno.n pe phool khilte hai.n
Khud apne waaste taahir thikaane dhoondhte hai.n
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1st October 2009, 07:53 AM
Khataao.n ke apne bahaane dhoonte hai.n
Wo teer chala ke nishaane dhoondte hai.n
Daikhenge dil mai to mil jaayega khuda bhi
hum hain ki usko kahan jaane dhoodte hai.n
Anjaam e ishq hai, har dour mein yahi key
har ik anaarkarli ko qaidkhaane dhoondte hain
Kahan gaye agle dour ke, ey ghalib ke tumko
maikado ke khushq paimaane dhoondte hain
Apni zameen chor kar dayaar e ghair mai
hum jaise mohajreen aashiyaane dhoondte hain
Hum bhi ajab hain log khud mushkil bana kar
uljhi zindagi ke taanebaane dhoondte hain
Hai qad mai koi chota to usse apna nhi kehte
rishete nibhane ko unche gharaane dhoondte hain
Koi humse bada na ho jaaye is dar se hi to hum
saya paane ko shajr bhi darmiyane dhoondte hain
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1st October 2009, 07:54 AM
Dard ki basti mein thikaane dhundte hain
musafir gham bhulne ko maikhane dhundte hain
Hai masroof itna woh alag hasti banane mein
apno ki mahfil mein bhi begaane dhundte hain
royi hai kayi muddat se aankhen woh unki
muskurane ko ab woh bahaane dhundte hain
sar basar raakh ho gayi jal kar jab shamma
kyun uss khaakh mein parwane dhundte hain
ruh, jism, jazbaat, imaan tak hai zhakhmi
chot naye dene ko log nishaane dhundte hain
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1st October 2009, 07:55 AM
Jigar par log zakhmon ke nishaane dhoondte hein
Mazaaq uDaane ko kaise bahaane dhoondte hein
Iss kashti ko aandhi o tuufaan ke paar le jaana hai
Saagar mein doob kar hi khazaane dhoondte hein
Laila Majnu ke khisse ab bahout puraane ho chale
Log hamare jeisse pyaar ke fasaane dhoondte hein
Ek khaas shaks ke saalgiraah manaana hai hamein
Kahin se bhi do chaar yaar puraane dhoondte hein
Khaali haanth bhalaa kaun jaayega uss jashn main
Unnke liye bazaar se kuch nazraane dhoondte hein
Hum iss umbr main yaaddasht par bahut zor de kar
Pyaar main wo guzre houe zamaane dhoondte hein
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1st October 2009, 09:36 PM
MaiN sach kahuN .. bada mazaa aaya mujhe yahan pe is baar
sab ne accha likha hai .. aur ek doosre ko jabardast takkar dee hai
KyuNki matla sabko ek hi diya gaya hai .. kayi jagahoN pe khayal bhi
ek se hi ban pade hai .. aur aisa lagta hai jaise imtehaan maiN naQl ki gayi ho
PEHLA aur AAKHIRI dil azeez raha .. phir bhi mera vote 1ST ko dounga maiN...
Aur waise to maiN koi hasti nahi rakhta .. par site ke khair-khuawoN ko ek iltezaa karna chahta huN.. ki Voting maiN multipal voting ko na shumaar kiya jaye .. kyuNki maine isse pehle bhi dekha hai ki kayi baar jo haqdaar hote hai wo peeche reh jaate hai,... ek shakhs ko ek hi Shayar ko vote dene ka haq ho... Baaki meri ye jaati raa'ii hai sunne aur kehne maiN kuch nahi jata .. phir bhi maiN muafi ka talabgaar rahunga agar kisi ko galatt laga ho mera yuN kehna
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KunaaL (Sifar).........
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11th October 2009, 09:03 PM
Aray yaar lag raha hai isbaar SDC members thande pad gaye hai...... 10 tarique aa gayi aur kul votes itne kam aab kya kahuN.............
Khair sabhi Gazalen bahut khoob hai........ Ek ek gazal ke ahsaas aur kahayal juda lage kafiye eksaaN hone ke bawjood khayal itne alag alag dekh khushi hui............
Keep it up ...........
Come on friends give your vote to your fav gazal...........
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12th October 2009, 04:40 AM
itna bada bada kyuN likha hai ....@
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Aray yaar lag raha hai isbaar SDC members thande pad gaye hai...... 10 tarique aa gayi aur kul votes itne kam aab kya kahuN.............
Khair sabhi Gazalen bahut khoob hai........ Ek ek gazal ke ahsaas aur kahayal juda lage kafiye eksaaN hone ke bawjood khayal itne alag alag dekh khushi hui............
Keep it up ...........
Come on friends give your vote to your fav gazal...........
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KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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Kunal Bhai mujhe kaam dikhai deta hai isliye itna bada bada likh diya........ yeh soch ker ke yahann ke members ko shayad mujhse kam dikhayi deta hai jo votings karne hi nahi aaye aab tak yahan.....
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13th October 2009, 10:58 AM
Friends...... ...pls apna vote dekar apne dostoN ki hausla afzai kijiye..........
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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13th October 2009, 10:44 PM
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Besabr hoke, yado.n ke , khaane dhundte hai
najaane hum diwaane, kya jaane ,dhundte hai
Bhayee jo bhi ho .. kyamat ho ... naadaan bhi ho aur aakal bhi
sajda hai ....!!
hum aise dhundte hai, is dunya me khushi ko
jaise parinde ,sahra,me daane dhundte hai
behad umdaa . behad umdaa................!!
bachpan me, ghode haathi ,hass hass ke tod dale
Ro ro ke ab, khilone ,puraane dhundte hai
Umdaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
'Dil tak luta diya tha, jin dosto pe maine'
Vo jeb me meri, ik du-anne dhundte hai
a ha ha ......ik do aane ............. kamaal hai
taro.n ko chuune walo, kya tumko kuch khabar hai?
dairo haram ko tere, veeraane dhundte hai
zabardast ... bas yahi kahunga bacha liya ho shayeri ko jaise hum jaise utpataang shayro se
bhayee jao aur ballimaraan mai raho
ghalib chacha chhod gaye hawli tumko
ro ro ke muskurati, hai aediyan gumaa se
Jab baap beti bihane ,gharaane dhundte hai
ye samjh nahi aaya pahla misra ...
doosra katl hai...
Ik vo hai jo rihaii, ke dhundte hai pahlu
Ik hum hai, jo tire dil me , thaane dhundte hai
ha ha .....
Bedar ho gayi hai, paiso se neend jinki
Besood ,khwab ab vo, sirhane dhundte hai
acha hai sahi ... apna bank balance .. mujeh de dena
tab hi kahunga acha sher hai
Sahra=desert,registan
Gumaa= pride,fakr,naaz
Besood=unnessary,bina faida
Bedar= alert,chaukanna hona
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Bhayee jo bhi ho kamaal ka likhte ho..... sach kahunga sahi mayne mai likhte ho
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13th October 2009, 10:48 PM
bahut achi gahzal likhi hia bhayee .... likhte raho
apna khyaal rakho
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bhayee Aapki gahzal pasand aaye aap aise hi likhe aur humko padhne ka mouka de
rabb rakkha
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[quote=zainy;367918] Jigar par log zakhmon ke nishaane dhoondte hein
Mazaaq uDaane ko kaise bahaane dhoondte hein
Iss kashti ko aandhi o tuufaan ke paar le jaana hai
Saagar mein doob kar hi khazaane dhoondte hein
kyaa baat hai janaab
kyaa baat hai .........
best of gahzal aur sabhi gahzalo mai ek umda sher mai gina ja sakta hai
Laila Majnu ke khisse ab bahout puraane ho chale
Log hamare jeisse pyaar ke fasaane dhoondte hein
sahi hai ....
Ek khaas shaks ke saalgiraah manaana hai hamein
Kahin se bhi do chaar yaar puraane dhoondte hein
are bahut achy bhayee bahut achy
Khaali haanth bhalaa kaun jaayega uss jashn main
Unnke liye bazaar se kuch nazraane dhoondte hein
saada si baat hai ... par baat kaam ki hai
Hum iss umbr main yaaddasht par bahut zor de kar
Pyaar main wo guzre houe zamaane dhoondte hein
kaun si umr hai bhayee
waise umr yado ko aur taza karti hai ....yaden jitni purani utni taza
zahan door ki sochen lagta hia nazdeek ki nazar dhundhli padti hai soch ki
waise ye mera khyaal hai
Aaapki koshish bhi pasand aaye
kash hum review bhi utne achyd e pate jitna ki acha aap gahzal likhte hain
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Besabr hoke, yado.n ke , khaane dhundte hai
aap jo bhi ho bhayee
umr khyaal aur sukhaan badhta hi rahe
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14th October 2009, 01:30 AM
yun toh yaha sabhi ghazal taarif ke kabil rahi hai.....sab ne bahut acha likha hai.....mujhe IInd Ghazal "Sulagte dasht mei.n mousam suhaane dhoondhte hai.n " khaas pasand aai.....
dil se daad...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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14th October 2009, 10:52 PM
sabhee dostoN ne bahot hi Khoob liKhaa haii.. merii aur se sabhee dostoN ko dil se mubaaraQbaad!
KhuSh rahe.N!
~ Dhaval
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16th October 2009, 03:02 PM
Many Many Congratulations Zidd ji
Fezan
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Koi Aisa Kamaal Ho Jaye Zindigi Be-Misaal Ho Jaye
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16th October 2009, 03:18 PM
Bohat bohat mubarak ho..manish jee....mujhe behad accha lagaa aaj aapko is muqaam per dekh ker......dil se mubarak baad qubool kijiye...
fezan saheb, aslam saheb, praneeta aur danny jii.....aap sab ki ghazalein bhi behad acchi lagi mujhe.....
Per contest hai to jeet haar to chalti rehti hai....ummid hai aap sab isi josh ke saath aagey bhi hissa lete rahenge....
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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16th October 2009, 03:18 PM
Congratulations
and
Celebrations
Keep up Zidd ji
Regards
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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16th October 2009, 03:58 PM
Badhai Ho Zidd sahab.........
Ek achchi gazal per aapne yeh contest jita hai dil se daad kabool kijiye........
Aise hi jiitte rahiye aur jite rahiye....
Congrats...........
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16th October 2009, 05:47 PM
GHAZAL OF THE MONTH ke winner hone par zidd ji......aapko bahut bahut badhaai.....meri shubhkamna hai....aage bhi aap vijeta bane....
yeh jeet....umda Ghazal ki jeet hai.....aur sab se pehli jeet.....is ghazal ko janam dene wale zidd ji ki hai......main bahut khush hu.....
aapki umda ghazal rachna ko....dil se daad....kabul kare....
ek baar phir se....badhaai....!!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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17th October 2009, 02:22 AM
zidd ji bhut bhut mubarak ho aapko Ghazal of the month ke liyn mashallah se bhut hi umda ghazal se nawaaza hai aapne dil se mubarak hazir hai qubool keejiye,
Aslam
you.n na samjhoge kinare pe khade rehkar tum
behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho
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17th October 2009, 06:48 PM
Hamari taraf se bhi badhaayi ho, Zidd sahab...! Aap ke kalaam vaakai umda raha...!
I would like to thank those who voted for mine ( and also those who haven't )
Shukriyaa
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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18th October 2009, 09:37 PM
bohat bohat mubarak
Kunaal.................
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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20th October 2009, 03:40 PM
sabhi members,jinhone meri ghazal dekhi unko mera teh e dil se shukriya........
and
mayank sahab, fezan sahab.zainy aur pari sahiba,khwaish,naresh noor,mushkil and kunal saheban ko bahut dhanywad........thats for congratulating me
thanks a lot to all............
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20th October 2009, 04:12 PM
Zidd jee:
bahot bahot mubaaraQbaad!
KhuSh raheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
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21st October 2009, 09:58 PM
Ziddi jee
bahot bahot mubarak .................
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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Zidd jee:
bahot bahot mubaaraQbaad!
KhuSh raheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
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dhavalji,
apka bahut bahut shukriya.........
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Ziddi jee
bahot bahot mubarak .................
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22nd October 2009, 01:30 PM
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Zidd Ji aadab,
Ab dikhaya aapne raNg banarasi babu kaa. Mubarak ho aapko. Aise hi likte rahiye aur mehfil ki raunaq ba.Dhate reahiye. Agle muqaable meiN ru-ba-ruu hoNge!
Aadab,
Shyam
"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.
वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
-आनंद नारायण मुल्ला
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22nd October 2009, 04:03 PM
dua o mubarak ke liye tah e dil se shukriya..........
bhai......apka saath jaha bhi mil jaye accha hi hoga..........chahe jo jeete haare safar me to bahut mazaa aayega.........
aa jaiye ap bhi akhade me......ganga maa ka naam leke
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23rd October 2009, 09:18 PM
Boht boht mubarik ho Zidd Jii,,,
Aap nay waqai aik achi ghazal compose ki,
aur aap is martabe k laayiq the
Keep writing
Take care
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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24th October 2009, 05:29 PM
hassanji...apka bahut bahut dhanyawad............
hausla afzai ke liye shukriyaa..
regards
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27th October 2009, 12:35 PM
mere kuch doston ne is ghazal ka beher ke liye mujhe PM kiya........unko to maine jawaab de diya phir socha sabko bata deta hu...........kisi ke kuch kaam aaye
'besabr hoke yadon ke khaane dhundte hai'
besabr /hoke yadon// ke khaane /dhundte hai'
iska beher mazaari hai........
musamsam 4 feet me.......
aur akhrab variation hai
digital me
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famous song is ghazal me hai
'saare jahaa.n se accha hindusataa hamaara
hum bulbule hai iski ye gulsitaa hamaara"( iqbal sahab)
is gaane ki dhun par ap meri ghazal gaa sakte hai
regards
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