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Ek Ladki -
3rd September 2004, 09:12 AM
Adil ka aadaab qubool karei.n,
Ek arse baad aapki khidmat main hazir hoon…darasal hua yun ke mirza ghalib ke ek sher par hum ne apni shayri daao par laga di,aur shart haar bhi gaye aur likhne ka silsila ruk gaya. Ab mere azeez ne apni shart wapas le li hai to hazir hoon……… Baharhaal ek safar ke dauran likhe chand misre apki khidmat main pesh hain……… Abhi nikli hai choo kar ke dil ki mere daali, Woh ladki hai ya hai koi hawaa matwaali. Khile poora badan zara jo muskara de woh Dikhe masoom , chanchal, shokh adaa waali. Woh gesu hain, ya badal athkheliyaan karte, Surahidaar gardan bhi hai kya khoob niraali. Gulaabon main bhi na dekha wo gulaabipan, Jo lab se hai numaaya, gulaabi pankhudi waali. Ghaneri palkon ka bhi johar kuch niraala hai, Woh pal main din aur pal main raat hai kaali. Chupa rakhe hain na jane kitne raaz aankhon main, Woh jheel si gehri aankhein, jiski hain paataali. Jo chaahe pad le chehre pe, bilkul saaf hai likha, Na jaane kitni nazrein guzri hongi hasraton waali. Mehektaa lamba tan jiski woh khudzaat hai maalik, Chaal bhi kya khoob paai hai pagdandiyon waali. Na tha ‘Adil’ iraada aaj nayaa kuch likhne ka, Utha qalam jo dekhi shakhsiyat mukammal ghazal waali. Rai se zuroor nawaziyega Adil Bardasht na kar sake log shayar bana diya" MOHD.ADIL QURESHI Snowy Mountains Engg. Corporation(SMEC) A-1, Ist Floor,Chiragh Enclave New Delhi-48 Tring Tring-09350815681 |
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4th September 2004, 05:44 PM
Nice
Baat Be Baat Tum Ko Yaad Kya |
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4th September 2004, 08:18 PM
good one !!
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9th September 2004, 04:23 PM
thanx shakeel and ricky sb
Bardasht na kar sake log shayar bana diya" MOHD.ADIL QURESHI Snowy Mountains Engg. Corporation(SMEC) A-1, Ist Floor,Chiragh Enclave New Delhi-48 Tring Tring-09350815681 |
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Log kehtai hain:'Kavita'
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10th September 2004, 01:20 AM
Adil Ji,
Very nice.Khaaskar the last lines.Bohot khoob.Keep writing. Quote:
Kavita Toota hua dil aur hoton pai hassi. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Pyaar wo nahi tha jo kisi nai kiya Pyaar woh hai jo koi nibha raha hai. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Maana ki woh log badnaseeb hotai hai Jinhai pyaar milta to hai par woh usai paichaan nahi paatai par woh log aur bhi badnaseeb hotai hai jinhai pyaar milta hai,woh usai paichaaan bhi jaatai hai par paa nahi saktai. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Its better to have loved and lost then to have ever loved before so what if the heart breaks at least you will know LOVE. |
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25th September 2004, 09:12 AM
shukriya kavita ji...........
Bardasht na kar sake log shayar bana diya" MOHD.ADIL QURESHI Snowy Mountains Engg. Corporation(SMEC) A-1, Ist Floor,Chiragh Enclave New Delhi-48 Tring Tring-09350815681 |
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28th September 2004, 05:29 PM
Adil sahab...adaab baza laate hai...
ham pehli baar aapke kalaam par aaye to resp. diye bina raha na gaya...apne itna bariya likha ki ham apki gazel wali larki main hi kho gaye...bari mushkil se kalpna lok se nikal paaye hai...aur us per aapne jis tareh se apne jazbaato se us lari ko nikhaara hai...to ek baar dil kiya ki kash vo larki ham hote...magar is burape main to bas us larki wala khwaab hi dekh sakte hai...hamari tareef ka tokra sambhaliye..janaab. izazet dai... udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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14th October 2004, 03:12 PM
yaqeenan durust farmaya...shayri ahsaasaat aur jazbaaton ko alfaz mein pirone ka naam hai....lekin main nahi samajhta is mein umr ki koi bandish hai.....ye to mehsoos karne wale par munhasir hai.......aapne achi tarah mehsoos kiya iske liye shukrguzaar hoon........
shukriya Adil Bardasht na kar sake log shayar bana diya" MOHD.ADIL QURESHI Snowy Mountains Engg. Corporation(SMEC) A-1, Ist Floor,Chiragh Enclave New Delhi-48 Tring Tring-09350815681 |
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likhte t achcha ho magar.......... |
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likhte t achcha ho magar.......... -
20th October 2004, 05:49 PM
miyan adil .........likhte achcha ho....alfajon ke mani bhi saaf hai tum par ...jazbaaton ko dhal bhi lete ho ...magar ye kya kiya miaya........"kafia radeef " aawali chal rahe the magar aakhir mein tumne ghazal bidhane ke liye.........ghazal wali likha ...bhai tumse aisi ummeed nahui thi.........bura mat mamana bewajah tareef nahin kar sakta ...........aur jab tum bhi jante ho.....aur main bhi wakif hoon ke tum achcha likhte ho to........phir kuch gum-e-duinya par halat-e-insaan par likho ..........jaise fazli sahab ne likha hai........."jab kisi se koi gila rakhna
samne apne aaeena rakhna " kuch aisa likho na miyan..... muddaton baad meri aankhon mein aansoon aaye dr.bashir badr |
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