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9th September 2014, 11:41 AM
DostoN bohat ho gayi pashemaani... ab ho jaye kuch ishQ ki mehrbaaani
na ho pashemaaN apne pyar pe sanam!
aise hi nahi milay hum tum iss janam….
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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9th September 2014, 11:45 AM
haa haa haaaa......
bahot khub......
vaise pashemaanii nahiN hone wale sher bhii toh keh saktii ho?
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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9th September 2014, 11:46 AM
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DostoN bohat ho gayi pashemaani... ab ho jaye kuch ishQ ki mehrbaaani
na ho pashemaaN apne pyar pe sanam!
aise hi nahi milay hum tum iss janam….
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waaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!
dekha... kitnii inspirational hai Nazneen saahibaa?
Hassanbhai bhii inspired ho gaye unkii baatoN se
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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9th September 2014, 11:48 AM
hai pashiimaanii tujhe kiis Gam pe aey insaan bataa
hai guloN kii bhii haqiiqat khaar meN palte haiN wo
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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9th September 2014, 11:50 AM
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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9th September 2014, 11:51 AM
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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9th September 2014, 11:53 AM
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hai pashiimaanii tujhe kiis Gam pe aey insaan bataa
hai guloN kii bhii haqiiqat khaar meN palte haiN wo
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waaahh! behad umdaaH khayaal hai Adil bhai..
aur waah... kia soch hai....... aap ki soch ko salaam pesh karta hooN....
bas daad hi daad..
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9th September 2014, 11:56 AM
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waaahh! behad umdaaH khayaal hai Adil bhai..
aur waah... kia soch hai....... aap ki soch ko salaam pesh karta hooN....
bas daad hi daad..
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Hassanbhai,
dilse aapka behad maskuur hooN....
Regards
Adil
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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9th September 2014, 11:59 AM
hahahahaha..
kia khoob alteration ki hai.. maan gaye saheb..
aap ne to mehfil-e-fusoon ko mehfil-e-shugal-mela bana diya
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9th September 2014, 12:35 PM
LOLzzzzzz....
bas yuN hi logoN ke khayaalii pulav, saat janm saath nibhaanaa, vagairah vagairah pe khayaal aa gayaa.. aapka sher paRH ke ...............
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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9th September 2014, 12:36 PM
dil-e-naadaaN na samjhaa ishq meN kitnaa ta-assuuf* hai
sahey Gum phir bhii tarz-e-naa-pashiimaanii** nahiN chhoRii
(*grief, regret, remorse; habit of not regretting)
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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9th September 2014, 12:48 PM
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LOLzzzzzz....
bas yuN hi logoN ke khayaalii pulav, chheh janm saath nibhaanaa, vagairah vagairah pe khayaal aa gayaa.. aapka sher paRH ke ...............
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saat janam saath nibhaane ka kehti hai!
jisay hum chahtay haiN woH laDki aisi hai
nahi hoti pashemaaN woH jaan-e-jaaN
khul ke jeeti hai, khul ke pyaar karti hai..
saat : seven
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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9th September 2014, 12:50 PM
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dil-e-naadaaN na samjhaa ishq meN kitnaa ta-assuuf* hai
sahey Gum phir bhii tarz-e-naa-pashiimaanii** nahiN chhoRii
(*grief, regret, remorse; habit of not regretting)
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waaahh! Adil bhai.... aap jiye to aise jiye...
bohat accha jiye...... qaabil-e-tareef hai aap ka jeena.....
sabhi ghumoN ko saath le kar jiye per kabhi pashemaaN na huay... wahh!
dherooN daad iss besh-qemati khayaal ke liye.....
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9th September 2014, 12:58 PM
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waaaahhh! Ananth sir.... bohat khoob...
lekin maiN aap ke sher ko iss taraH lonH ga ke bandaH iss taraH zindagi
guzaaray ke saray us ke husn-e-akhlaaq ke taabay hooN!.. aur woH hur
dil azeez ho........ insanooN meiN bhi aur farishtoN meiN bhi... aur
jahaN tak meri kam-aqli hai farishtay pashemaaN nahi hotay.....
socch aacchi hai lekin thodi si alteration honi chaiye.. farishta lafz
istemaal na kareN...... mere hisaab se! aur aagay aap behtar
samjhtay haiN.....
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hmmmmmmmmmmmm.....
ye lafz 'farishte' aur unkaa pashemaan hona mujhe bhii khatak rahaa tha ....
par uspe kuchh aur raaye dene se pehle maiN Ananthji kii baat samajhnaa chaahtaa tha jo wo yahaaN bayaan karnaa chaahte haiN.
chaliye hassanbhai, aapne ab jab mudda uTHaa hi liyaa hai to, Ananthji se pehle iiskii interpretation dekh lete haiN.. shaayad unkii zehn meN kuch aisii baat ho jo hameN na samajh aayee ho ?
Toh Ananthji, aap ko kathgare meN aanaa paRegaa
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lijiye aadeil sahab,Hassan bhai aur saali sahiba muzrim haazir hai aaplogon ka...my sincere appologies if i hav unknowingly hurt religious sentiments...mere aaise koi irada nahi tha...m more than ready to change the word if suggested any alternative...but i would like to state the context out of which I used that word.I have attempted to use Hindu mythology n beliefs in that...first of all I used "Farishte as a messenger of GOD."According to Hindu mythology...YAMA is the God of death...he has a assistant known as CHITRA GUPT....who (chitra gupt) maintains the book of life of all humans on the planet...in which he records the noble deeds and sins committed by each individual...he also maintains the time of death of each person...when a persons time arrives he advices the God of death...who inturn sends a messenger to bring the soul of that person...so according to my version a person should live a glorious life full of noble deeds so dat when the god of death sends his messenger to pick him up he shall be embarrased to pick up that soul as he lived a glorious life full of noble deeds yet he has to go coz that how the cycle of life goes on...I hope that I was able to explain my context..however any other suggestion is most welcome n Hassan bhai u can suggest me a word to change Farishte
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
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9th September 2014, 01:02 PM
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saat janam saath nibhaane ka kehti hai!
jisay hum chahtay haiN woH laDki aisi hai
nahi hoti pashemaaN woH jaan-e-jaaN
khul ke jeeti hai, khul ke pyaar karti hai..
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waaah... masha allah!!!!!
Hassanbhai, ab ye kaun laRkii kii baat chheR lii aapne?
magar mera khayaal hai ki agar laRke iis qadr jiite aaye haiN toh laRkiyaaN kyuN nahi jii saktii? toh uus khayaal pe aapko bahot bahot mubaarakbaad....
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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9th September 2014, 01:19 PM
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lijiye aadeil sahab,Hassan bhai aur saali sahiba muzrim haazir hai aaplogon ka...my sincere appologies if i hav unknowingly hurt religious sentiments...mere aaise koi irada nahi tha...m more than ready to change the word if suggested any alternative...but i would like to state the context out of which I used that word.I have attempted to use Hindu mythology n beliefs in that...first of all I used "Farishte as a messenger of GOD."According to Hindu mythology...YAMA is the God of death...he has a assistant known as CHITRA GUPT....who (chitra gupt) maintains the book of life of all humans on the planet...in which he records the noble deeds and sins committed by each individual...he also maintains the time of death of each person...when a persons time arrives he advices the God of death...who inturn sends a messenger to bring the soul of that person...so according to my version a person should live a glorious life full of noble deeds so dat when the god of death sends his messenger to pick him up he shall be embarrased to pick up that soul as he lived a glorious life full of noble deeds yet he has to go coz that how the cycle of life goes on...I hope that I was able to explain my context..however any other suggestion is most welcome n Hassan bhai u can suggest me a word to change Farishte
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Ananth sir.. itni izzat bakhshne ke liye aur
hamari sab ki baat rakhne ke liye teh-e-dil se shukriyaaH,
aap ki ijaazat se misraa saani meiN alteration kar raha hooN..
umeed hai aap mutafiQ hooN ge:-
karo zindagi apni sar-bulandh iis tarah se saraa-e-faani main
makhlooQ bhi rahe pashemaaN ke chala gaya aik acchaa insaaN…
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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9th September 2014, 01:21 PM
Adil bhai.. mohabbatoN se nawaazne ke liye behad shukriyaaH!
aur jee janab.. hum to issi haQ meiN haiN aur aap se poori taraH mutafiQ haiN...
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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9th September 2014, 01:22 PM
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Ananth sir.. itni izzat bakhshne ke liye aur
hamari sab ki baat rakhne ke liye teh-e-dil se shukriyaaH,
aap ki ijaazat se misraa saani meiN alteration kar raha hooN..
umeed hai aap mutafiQ hooN ge:-
karo zindagi apni sar-bulandh iis tarah se saraa-e-faani main
makhlooQ bhi rahe pashemaaN ke chala gaya aik acchaa insaaN…
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Thanx Hassan bhai .............
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
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9th September 2014, 01:55 PM
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beti ke janam pe na ho pashemaaN!
kal yeHi roshan kare gi tera jahaN....
janam : birth
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superb HSN bhai...bahuttttttttt umda sher kaha hai aapne aur yeh baat sahi bhi hai...betiyaaN hai to khushiyaa hai, jis ghar meiN beti nahi wo ghar ghar nahi
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9th September 2014, 01:55 PM
ek qi'taa... dil-fareb maashukaa pe.....
kHo diya dil to pashemaan huve
aaj kyuN itnaa wo hairaan huve?
dil khilaunaa hai samajhte the wo
aaj phir kyuN wo pareshaan huve?
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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ek qi'taa... dil-fareb maashukaa pe.....
kHo diya dil to pashemaan huve
aaj kyuN itnaa wo hairaan huve?
dil khilaunaa hai samajhte the wo
aaj phir kyuN wo pareshaan huve?
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wahhh ... Adil bhai.. bohat bohat khoob..
kia kamaal ka qit'a pesh kiya hai... DherooN daad ka nazraana khaas iss qit'a ke liye..
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superb HSN bhai...bahuttttttttt umda sher kaha hai aapne aur yeh baat sahi bhi hai...betiyaaN hai to khushiyaa hai, jis ghar meiN beti nahi wo ghar ghar nahi
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Baaji..... aik haqeeqat ko le kar kuch alfaazoN se apne dil
ki baat kehne ki koshish ki hai... mujhe accha laga ke aap ko pasand aayi
meri koshish........ bohat bohat shukriyaaH!
Apna khayaal rakhiye ga,
DuaooN ke saath,,
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lafz karm ko tabdiil karke 'kaaj' kiyaa hai......
raaye kii ummeed rahegiii
arey insaan! tu kitnaa hai pashemaan?
kare bad* kaaj** jab bhii, zudd-pashemaan***?
(*buraa; **kaam; ***repenting too soon)
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Ghalibsaab ke ek sher kii buniyaad per niche mera sher....
rahe kyuN mera qaatil bhii pashemaan apnii harkat par
ye khuuN hai behte rehta hai kabhii dil se kabhii sar se
--Adil
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Ghalibsaab ke ek sher kii buniyaad per niche mera sher....
rahe kyuN mera qaatil bhii pashemaan apnii harkat par
ye khuuN hai behte rehta hai kabhii dil se kabhii sar se
--Adil
Darey kyuN mera qaatil kya rakhaa hai uskii gardan par
ye khuuN jo chashm-e-tar se umr-bhar yuN dum-ba-dum nikle
-- Mirza 'Ghalib' saab
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Ek adna sa sher meri taraf se
Tere darde dil ka sabab ban chuki huuN
Mohabbat pe apni pashemaan huN meiN
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hai pashiimaanii tujhe kiis Gam pe aey insaan bataa
hai guloN kii bhii haqiiqat khaar meN palte haiN wo
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dil-e-naadaaN na samjhaa ishq meN kitnaa ta-assuuf* hai
sahey Gum phir bhii tarz-e-naa-pashiimaanii** nahiN chhoRii
(*grief, regret, remorse; habit of not regretting)
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saat janam saath nibhaane ka kehti hai!
jisay hum chahtay haiN woH laDki aisi hai
nahi hoti pashemaaN woH jaan-e-jaaN
khul ke jeeti hai, khul ke pyaar karti hai..
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ek qi'taa... dil-fareb maashukaa pe.....
kHo diya dil to pashemaan huve
aaj kyuN itnaa wo hairaan huve?
dil khilaunaa hai samajhte the wo
aaj phir kyuN wo pareshaan huve?
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WAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! ek se badhkar ek....sabhi ko dheron daad ....bohat khoob
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jalai jaati hain ladkiyaan aaj bhi azaab-e-aliim* k baad
jahez ** lene-dene waale kahan pashemaan hue hain
*extreme torture
**dowry
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
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अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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10th September 2014, 10:29 AM
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jalai jaati hain ladkiyaan aaj bhi azaab-e-aliim* k baad
jahez ** lene-dene waale kahan pashemaan hue hain
*extreme torture
**dowry
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!
Ananthji,
aapne ek behad hi sensitive aur aham mudde pe aavaaz uTHaaii hai......
dahej ke liye, maarpit, pareshaan karnaa, mental & physical torture, abuse.... pataa nahi ye sab havaskhori kab band hogii.............
bahot hi khub bayaanaat huii hai, janaab........
dheroN daad.....
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अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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10th September 2014, 10:32 AM
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WAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! ek se badhkar ek....sabhi ko dheron daad ....bohat khoob
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Ananthji,
aapka bahot bahot shukriya............
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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10th September 2014, 10:58 AM
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jalai jaati hain ladkiyaan aaj bhi azaab-e-aliim* k baad
jahez ** lene-dene waale kahan pashemaan hue hain
*extreme torture
**dowry
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh!!!
Ananth sir.. aap ne kia dil soz.. jigar-andooz muDay per haath rakha hai..
dard hi dard hai..... khalish hi khalish hai.........
aik haqeeqat hai .. is se nam hum door bhaag saktay haiN na aap...
bas Allah se dua hai ke sab ko hiDayat day (ameen)....
aap ki socch ko salaam pesh karta hooN.. sir.....
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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10th September 2014, 11:00 AM
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WAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! ek se badhkar ek....sabhi ko dheron daad ....bohat khoob
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bunch of thanks sir.... though aap mera aik sher phad'hna miss kar gaye..
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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10th September 2014, 11:20 AM
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DostoN bohat ho gayi pashemaani... ab ho jaye kuch ishQ ki mehrbaaani
na ho pashemaaN apne pyar pe sanam!
aise hi nahi milay hum tum iss janam….
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WAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!! Bohat khoob Hassan bhai...dheron daad
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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10th September 2014, 11:20 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.. I'm flattered Naaz...
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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10th September 2014, 11:22 AM
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WAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!! Bohat khoob Hassan bhai...dheron daad
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be-had shukriyaaH Ananth sir.. yaad dihaani ke liye..
ke yeH sher bhi maiN ne likha tha...
I'm obliged, sir! take care..
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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10th September 2014, 11:40 AM
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Originally Posted by ananthpak
jalai jaati hain ladkiyaan aaj bhi azaab-e-aliim* k baad
jahez ** lene-dene waale kahan pashemaan hue hain
*extreme torture
**dowry
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bahuttttttttttttt sahi kaha hai aapne Anant ji...dil ku chu gya aapka sher.
reps added +++
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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10th September 2014, 12:04 PM
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NaazaaN the ishQ meiN charche sar-e-aam the
PashemaaN hotey gar ruswaaii se dartey
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
Naaz,
iis sher ko paRHke maaloom hota hai, kyuN itna shaant baithii thii .......
bahot hi khubsurat khayaal pesh kiya.... pride in love...... beautiful thought, reflecting positive approach to love........................
dheroN dheroN dheroN daad...........................
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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10th September 2014, 12:16 PM
Thanx for the appreciation saali sahiba Most daughters dont even tell their parents that they are subjected to extreme torture by the in-laws.
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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10th September 2014, 12:18 PM
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!
Ananthji,
aapne ek behad hi sensitive aur aham mudde pe aavaaz uTHaaii hai......
dahej ke liye, maarpit, pareshaan karnaa, mental & physical torture, abuse.... pataa nahi ye sab havaskhori kab band hogii.............
bahot hi khub bayaanaat huii hai, janaab........
dheroN daad.....
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Bohat shukriya Aadeil sahab...ji sahi kaha aap ne ye humari society ka ek kaala sach hai.
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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10th September 2014, 12:21 PM
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Originally Posted by Hassan
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh!!!
Ananth sir.. aap ne kia dil soz.. jigar-andooz muDay per haath rakha hai..
dard hi dard hai..... khalish hi khalish hai.........
aik haqeeqat hai .. is se nam hum door bhaag saktay haiN na aap...
bas Allah se dua hai ke sab ko hiDayat day (ameen)....
aap ki socch ko salaam pesh karta hooN.. sir.....
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Bohat shukriya Hassan bhai Ameen
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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10th September 2014, 12:27 PM
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Originally Posted by sunita virender
bahuttttttttttttt sahi kaha hai aapne Anant ji...dil ku chu gya aapka sher.
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Bohat bohat shukriya Dii hausla affzaayi k liye...thanx for the reps
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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10th September 2014, 12:29 PM
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NaazaaN the ishQ meiN charche sar-e-aam the
PashemaaN hotey gar ruswaaii se dartey
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Bohat khoob...bohat umdaa sher hai saali sahiba...dheron daad
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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10th September 2014, 12:39 PM
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NaazaaN the ishQ meiN charche sar-e-aam the
PashemaaN hotey gar ruswaaii se dartey
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waaaahh! Naaz...
isssi ka naam zindagi hai.. issi ka naam jeena hai..
issi ka naam khul ke zindagi meiN sar-e-aam pyaar karna hai...
bohat khoob... adaigi bhi khoob rahii.. aur waahh! kia takhyyul hai..
maan gaye saaheb... ..
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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