A little love/friendship story

[Mukhra]

hi! i wrote a short story a couple of months ago. its about 14 pages long rite now, and still going on, i havent decied how to end it yet. Wht you'll read below is a brief, very brief, outline of wht its about. There's more to it than just wht you are going to read. Im not gonna post the original until its completely finished, only god knows when that is gonna be....
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There was once a girl who fell in love with a guy four years older than her. she liked him the first time she saw him, which was in a class. His best feature was his looks, and the way he sounded so innocent. The girl started liking the guy more and more, but the guy never payed attention to her. They only talked a couple of times, for the girl didnt have enough courage to go up and talk to him. All the other girls talked to him daily, except her. It wasnt that she didnt talk to guyz, she talked to guyz all the time, it was just that, she couldnt talk to that particular one. She was too shy. Everytime she dressed up especially for him, every guy but him noticed. Why? She started feeling bad for herself, until one day, they both had to work together in class. Slowly, they both became close friends, so close that the guy didnt have time for anyone else. they both started going out. everything was going like it should have been. The girl felt like the luckiest one in the world, until one night the guy hurt her. the girl got very angry and hurt, and told the guy to go away. She walked home instead of him driving her. She moped all day because she hated him for hurting her, but still loved him. she didnt know wht to do. When they met again, the guy said sorry and pleaded, but the girl wouldnt listen. she wanted to get back together too but she didnt want to be hurt again by the same person. It would only break her even more. A year slowly passed like this, with the guy saying sorry evryday and the girl still not consenting. All of her friends told her she was taking it too seriously, but she still wouldnt listen. after a while, her anger ceased. one day she went to see the guy. when she got to his house, she found out he was in the hospital. she rushed to the hospital to see if he was ok. He was in a critical condition, ad the doctors told her he ad been in a car accident. But how could that be? he drove so carefully. The girl stayed with the guy until he got better. When he got better, the guy said that he couldnt wait for her anymore. if she wasnt gonna come back to him, then it was gonna have to good-bye. He said that one mistake shouldnt matter, in love, you have to trust the person. Plus, he had figured out his mistake, and he had said sorry. He had waited for a long time for her to come back, but he still loved no matter what. The girl listened to everything he said. she then started crying and apologizing, but he told her to stop that, there is no sorry in love either. The both hugged, with the girl still crying. the broken couple was together again. Then, the guy graduated from college and went off to some other place. The girl was left alone, but she knew they would be together again. until then, she would have to enjoy life as much as possible without him.

[sushma78]

Hi Mukhra,

What u wrote is really appreciable, i really liked the story is.

In love there is only the trust between each other & if that start loosing, then it is very difficult to save.

"Love is like a fragrance,
To spread it all over,
But, if it start loosing it fragrance,
The life starts to fade"