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jaatii huii ladkii ko sadaa denaa chaahiye...!!! - 28th April 2010, 07:22 PM

jaatii huii ladkii ko sadaa denaa chaahiye
ghar ho to kyaa buraa hai, pataa denaa chaahiye

sadiyoN se kinaare pe khaDaa suukh raha hai
is shahar ko daryaa meN giraa denaa chaahiye

hoNtoN ke gulaaboN ko churaa lene se pahle
baaloN meN koii phuul khilaa denaa chaahiye

Dar hai kahiiN kamre meN naa ghus aaye ye manzar
khiDkii ko kahiiN aur haTaa denaa chaahiye

par taul ke baiThii hai ye uDtii hii nahiiN hai
tasviir se chiDyaa ko uDaa denaa chahiye

marne meN mazaa hai magar itnaa to nahiiN
Alvi tumheN qaatil ko duaa denaa chaahiye

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Kamaal hai ji kamaal ................

bas sada dena chahiye
aur dua dena chahiye ... ye thode ajeeb e lage aisa suna nahi kabhi

plz... koe ispe roshini daln ka kast kar

sadiyoN se kinaare pe khaDaa suukh raha hai
is shahar ko daryaa meN giraa denaa chaahiye

katl hai
mai to jaise seat par se uchal hi pada .....
jabardast

Dar hai kahiiN kamre meN naa ghus aaye ye manzar
khiDkii ko kahiiN aur haTaa denaa chaahiye

ye bhi kamaal ...... jabardst ...!!!

par taul ke baiThii hai ye uDtii hii nahiiN hai
tasviir se chiDyaa ko uDaa denaa chahiye

aur ye uspe bhi jabardast ..........!!
baten seedhi si hai.......... par byaan jaise ki bas... sach mai sare ka sara sahar uthaya aur gusse mai samandar mai patak diya ho ....!!
maza aa gaya padhke

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jaatii huii ladkii ko sadaa denaa chaahiye
ghar ho to kyaa buraa hai, pataa denaa chaahiye


vikasji apko ye atpata laga....khair maine bhi jab pahle pada aisa hi laga....ek kaam karte hai isko change kar dete hai
alvi sahab bhi kya yaad rakhenge ki koi zidd tha

jaati hui ladki ko bosaa dena chaahiye
shakl se kya buri hai.paTaa lenaa chaiye

   
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jaatii huii ladkii ko sadaa denaa chaahiye
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vikasji apko ye atpata laga....khair maine bhi jab pahle pada aisa hi laga....ek kaam karte hai isko change kar dete hai
alvi sahab bhi kya yaad rakhenge ki koi zidd tha

jaati hui ladki ko bosaa dena chaahiye
shakl se kya buri hai.paTaa lenaa chaiye

Ha ha sahi hai ..........

jaati hui ladki ko bata dena chahiye
zidd se ladki ko bacha lena chahiye
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Ha ha sahi hai ..........

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jaa/ti hui ladki ko bata dena chahiye
zidd chalu ladki ko bacha lena chahiye

ab bole

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yaha to 14/13 ho raha hai ...


jaa/ti hu/i lad/ki ko ba/ta de/na cha/hi/ye
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jaa/ti hu/i lad/ki ko ba/ta de/na cha/hi/ye
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ab ispe kuch torch mareN
torch to maar du...bus ye dekh lijiye ki kahi ladki ne nylon ka kuch to nahi pahna hai..........

waise 14=13 hi hai.maine padte hue dono lineno me mann me 'ye' laga diya na jaane kyu.....15=14 nahi.....par baat to wahi par ataki hai...wazn badakar aaoo saani ka
   
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torch to maar du...bus ye dekh lijiye ki kahi ladki ne nylon ka kuch to nahi pahna hai..........

waise 14=13 hi hai.maine padte hue dono lineno me mann me 'ye' laga diya na jaane kyu.....15=14 nahi.....par baat to wahi par ataki hai...wazn badakar aaoo saani ka
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Are jaani. humen badha liya saani
bhai ..aap to befezul hi ladki ko bachake amitabh bacchan ban rahe hai
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hmmmm

jaati hui ladki ko bacha lena chaiye
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haha ha ha

nahi aisa nahi hai..... jo huN woh to ban jau pahle

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haha ha ha

nahi aisa nahi hai..... jo huN woh to ban jau pahle

aur ye bhayee na banao
ab baat samajh me aayi apke....heheheheheh

bhaiyya sri aur putra sri bane rahoge to arjun ko jo urvasi kashraap laga tha yaad hai na??

saari zindgi bhrataa sri hi bane rahoge

chalo koi baat nahi...meri to shadi ho chuki...mai bhaiyya ban jaata hu...ap meri jagah le lijiye aur saiyya ban jaiye
   
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bhaiyya sri aur putra sri bane rahoge to arjun ko jo urvasi kashraap laga tha yaad hai na??

saari zindgi bhrataa sri hi bane rahoge

chalo koi baat nahi...meri to shadi ho chuki...mai bhaiyya ban jaata hu...ap meri jagah le lijiye aur saiyya ban jaiye

ha ha ...

sahi hai urbvashi ka shraap .......... dara rahe ho

lekin shadi to apni bhi ho chuki hai isliye

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