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Thumbs up To Everyone who writes something - 19th January 2002, 02:08 AM

aap sabh ko jo kabhi na kabhi kuch na kuch dil se nikal kar kagaaz par likthe hai, unko mein kudh tareef deena chaahtee hu. Hum parthe sabh ke shayri hai, par kabhi kabhi reply post nahin karthe. Yeh saach hai ke sabh ka hunsla barhana chayee, par mein sirf ithna kaho ge ke ke koi kuch reply karee ya na karee aap likhthee rahee. Hunsla ithnee jaldee nahin har the, aur yeh koi contest bhi nahin hai ke kyon acha likhtha hai ya nahin. Yeh tho kisse ne site banayee hai jo hum sabh ko maukha deethe hai dil ke kuch baath sunanee ko. Please contine to write no matter what it may be. Writting something drains the heart of some pain and lets one know that atleast someone knows how they feel.

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"Work like you dont need money,
Love like you have never been hurt,
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Dance like no one is watching."

"Janee kya likha hai us Rub ne apne kismat par, roz hathon ko dekh kar unee parne ke koshish karthe hai"
   
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20th January 2002, 10:13 PM

Hello ji

Bilkul sahi likha hai apne.

keep writing and share it with us
Ap sab ki shayari parhna bahut acha lagta hai


keep smiling


Never love a love that hurts, never hurt a love that loves

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hi - 21st January 2002, 03:19 PM

hello,

Aapne mere labz cheen liye..Isse behtar shaayad main apne khayaal nahin kah pata. I will make this post sticky.
Zyaada Log ise padhenge... and shaayad unhe shayri.com ki dhadkan ka ehsaas hoga.

Agar kuch hi labzon main shayri.com ki buniyaad ke baare main kaha jaaye... woh hoga.. Mohabbat, Dard, Jazbaat aur khayalaat ka baantana....doston ke saath....


Tahe dil se shukriya for this lovely post
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hi - 26th February 2002, 10:44 AM

aabaab doston,

bahot hi sahi baat hai....hume to kuch waqt hi hua hai shayri.com se jude hue...lekin hum bahot khush hai.....

shukriya.


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Ye toh mai hoo Budmaas poora Pakka
Jo man aaye kaho mai ho dil ka sachchaa


:)_LipaTaa jo bosaa leke to bole ki dekhiye
ye dusarii Khataa hai O pahlaa qusoor thaa....!!

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Han Kiya hee acha Kha ha aap na - 10th June 2002, 12:54 PM

Hello chota Sa Dil
Bohat Khub Kiya Hee Achee Bat Khaee Ha App Na.Yah Tu Woh Wali Bat Khaee Ha Aap na ka.
Mil Jatee Han Har Morre Pa Hamdam Hazaroon
Shaid Ka Maree Bastee Main Adakar Bohat han

Aap Kee Shayri Lajab ha ha hope ka aap mustaqbal main bee acha likheen gee inshallah
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shukria - 11th June 2002, 02:12 AM

Hello msmtanoli

je shukria apke jo ap jaise yahan is site par apne kuch bathein likhthey hai. Agar ape jaise log na hothe tho shayeed humaree jaiso ko maukha na miltha na kuch likhne na aur na parne ka. Anyhow keep on writting everyone its all looking great.

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18th June 2002, 05:42 AM

Mai aankhe khol ne se darta hun kyo ki TUM mari palko mai rahti ho..
Mai sanse lene se darta hun kyo ki TUM to meri her sans mai basi hui ho...


Real love is like a soul. It is eternal. ( sachaa pyaar aatma ki tarah hota hai, wo kabhi marta nahi).
   
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hi - 21st September 2002, 11:43 PM

hello

how r u all ? bhai sab kuch likh rhey they socha hum bhi kuch likh dey shayri tori bhat ati hey per pherney mey bhat maza ata hey kuch na kuch likhtey rhey hum phertey rheyn gey .

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Hi everyone - 27th September 2002, 11:05 PM

main yahan par kisi ko jaanti to nahi hoo actually kuch din hi hue hain isse join kiye hue. lekin main yahan sabko jaan na chahti hoo
mujhe bahaut khushi hai ki yeh site par apne dilki bata kah sakte hain woh baatein kah sakte hain jo hum shaayad kisi aur se naa kah sake. Main bhagvaan ji se pray karoongi ki yeh site log sabse jyada paren. waise agar meri hindi galat ho to maaf karna. bye.

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Aapne Bilkul sahi farmaya. - 7th March 2003, 12:15 AM

Aadab...
Aapne bilkul sahi farmaya.... Main shayri agar likhta hoon, to dil ka gham halka karne ke liye..... is hisaab se, har kisi ne reply ki phikar kiye bina shayri likhni chahiye..... is tarah se gham bhi halka ho jaata hain, aur logo ko bhi apna dil kholna ke liye hausla afzayee milti hain.... Likhte Rahon.....


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keep it up - 7th March 2003, 06:22 AM

It is good to know there are many out there that are trying their best to express their feelings. It may not be perfect; the words that come from the heart, but they are pure, they are real and they come shooting straight from the heart. Please continue to write as I can see that each and every one of you has not given up.

Kaalam se woh baath likho jo dil mein basse ho.

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hi - 20th March 2003, 11:04 PM

chota sa dil g. app bilkul thek keh raha ha. agar hamara dil ma koi baat ho to in ko lafzo ma bayan ker na boht muskil ho ta ha.
mujh ko bhi shayri likhna boht acha lagta ha or perna. magar mera pass itna time hi nahi ho ta ha ka ma sub ki shayri per sako. magar ma time nikal ker ka zaror perti ho.
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3rd April 2003, 09:14 PM

u r very true .. i visted shayri.com 1st time . my 1st poem is in frount of u ..
thanks ..bada dil wala dost
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HI - 18th April 2003, 02:01 AM

THANKS A LOT!


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Love Dear Friends - 23rd April 2003, 02:29 PM

i will appreciate if all of you can give us your persoanl detail about where u are and how old r you your gender etc etc .

we have a long way to go its not only a shayri page but it also reflects our wishes and freindhisp with each other .

its a family where we cry togather laugh togather and appreciate each other with little criticism too .

take care
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hi - 24th April 2003, 12:15 AM

Hi Neha

Well let me be the first to give you my information about who I am and where I am from. I am 27 yrs old punjabi sikh girl. I live in Vancouver, Canada.

Chota Sa Dil


"Work like you dont need money,
Love like you have never been hurt,
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(Gries pleae dont read it) - 24th April 2003, 02:19 PM

Hi Friends Hope U will fine ,,,hum sub ko chyea ka aapni aapni aak buhat aachi si picture post kara ,is taraha hum aak dosara ka kuch oor qareeb ho gayan ja,,
keep writing and keep smiling
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26th April 2003, 12:54 AM

Asalam O alykum Neha

I wants to introduce my self

Real Name: Zahra Ahmed
Nick Name: Mona Ahmed
Gender: Female
Date of Birth: February 9, 1988

I born in Saudia Arabia....but i really didn't live longer in Saudia,then i live 10 years in Pakistan Karachi and now i am in U.S.A. Chicago,I just move to U.S.A. just 2 years before.

I don't know why did i start to writting shayri....i love to search on computer about alot of things.....once i were searching for a very good website for shayri....then i found this website. and i really like this website. every one is so nice and kind here...every one is respects others......this is great.......i like every one here........thanks for all of you being a good friends...........ok

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31st August 2003, 01:49 AM

I joined this site 1 week ago n i found it so Interesting,catchy,emotional, funny etc etc aur kyun na ho aakhir is site ke pyaare se doston ne mere do teen sher jhel kar apne bade dil ka saboot bhi to diya hai.
Thanx to all of u.


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smile n make others also smile

those sparkling eyes
A 100 watt smile
the majestic walk
the cheerful talk
truly charming personality
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Exclamation Re: To Everyone who writes something - 14th January 2004, 01:44 PM

hi
i'm new 2 this site.it was good 2 read all ur shayri.bye the happy new year.mail me back.bye
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aap sabh ko jo kabhi na kabhi kuch na kuch dil se nikal kar kagaaz par likthe hai, unko mein kudh tareef deena chaahtee hu. Hum parthe sabh ke shayri hai, par kabhi kabhi reply post nahin karthe. Yeh saach hai ke sabh ka hunsla barhana chayee, par mein sirf ithna kaho ge ke ke koi kuch reply karee ya na karee aap likhthee rahee. Hunsla ithnee jaldee nahin har the, aur yeh koi contest bhi nahin hai ke kyon acha likhtha hai ya nahin. Yeh tho kisse ne site banayee hai jo hum sabh ko maukha deethe hai dil ke kuch baath sunanee ko. Please contine to write no matter what it may be. Writting something drains the heart of some pain and lets one know that atleast someone knows how they feel.

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wants introduce - 27th January 2004, 08:13 PM

HIIIIII U ALLLLLL

HOW R U >>>>>> HOPE U ALL FINE>

I WANTS TO INTRODUCE MY SELF.

My name - Hitesh Soni

my b'date is - april 29,1985

my hobbies r .... writing gazlein, shayries, making new friend (and for that i like to chat) . and when i feel bored i like to share my time with my friends or go to.temple

hope so u add me in ur friendslist.......

Log kehte hai hitesh ki dua kam nahin deti.....
to lo aap ko ek baddua hi de ranha huin..........puri zindgi ek gam to tarsoge.......(for my all friends).

hope so u like to b my friends ........

mail me on find_hitesh@yahoo.com

waiting for u......friends.
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Love ~*~V.GOOD~*~ - 6th February 2004, 03:29 PM

apki baat bilkul hek hia..........hum poetry parhte hain humko zaroor zaroor batana bhi chahiyee ke hameen woh parh kar kesa laga.........aur mere bhi yehi wish hai ke sab aik dosare ki poetry read kareen aur phir reply kareen............ye bhi aik silsila hai....

jis main hum munzil tak aik dosare ka sath denge..........

aur apke liyee aik sher!

JO HOSALA HO TU ITNE SUKOON SEE BARHO
KE ASS PASS KI LEHROON KO BHI PATA NA LAGEE
JO HOSALA HO TU ITNE SUKOON SEE JILOO
KISI KO KIYA, KHOOD TUMHEEN BHI KUCH PATA NA LAGEE......


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Thumbs up good job - 23rd February 2004, 12:47 AM

ya i mean its really nice when u have one network and

different people having same motives to express their

feelings in shayris and love.....!!!


be!maan mohabbat.....!!!

Sal!m.....!!!
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16th September 2004, 06:18 PM

Chhota Sa Dil Madam Ji

Bilkul theek likha hai aapne. hum sub ko agar sher accha lage to reply karna hi chahiye.

Aapke ke liye ek sher hai Daad chahunga

Takdir banane wale ne to koi kami na chhodi thi,
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mufti - 27th January 2005, 03:00 PM

hi everybody
i m new to this site but i always wish to share my feelings with someone who him/herself understands the meaning of feelings.
so here some lines which are very much of like that.

it is not difficult to die for a friend as to find a friend worth dying for.


pyar hai ek nishan kadmon ka jo musafir ke baad rahta hai,
bhool jaate hai log sab lekin kuch na kuch fir bhi yaad rahta hai.

please tell me that how are these lines.

thanks

"jio to aaise jio ke har dil ko tumhara khyal rahe aur maro to aaise maro ki har dil mein tumhari yaad rahe"


good bye



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aap sabh ko jo kabhi na kabhi kuch na kuch dil se nikal kar kagaaz par likthe hai, unko mein kudh tareef deena chaahtee hu. Hum parthe sabh ke shayri hai, par kabhi kabhi reply post nahin karthe. Yeh saach hai ke sabh ka hunsla barhana chayee, par mein sirf ithna kaho ge ke ke koi kuch reply karee ya na karee aap likhthee rahee. Hunsla ithnee jaldee nahin har the, aur yeh koi contest bhi nahin hai ke kyon acha likhtha hai ya nahin. Yeh tho kisse ne site banayee hai jo hum sabh ko maukha deethe hai dil ke kuch baath sunanee ko. Please contine to write no matter what it may be. Writting something drains the heart of some pain and lets one know that atleast someone knows how they feel.

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Yeh saach hai ke sabh ka hunsla barhana chayee, par mein sirf ithna kaho ge ke ke koi kuch reply karee ya na karee aap likhthee rahee



Hunsla ithnee jaldee nahin har the, aur yeh koi contest bhi nahin hai ke kyon acha likhtha hai ya nahin


Writting something drains the heart of some pain and lets one know that atleast someone knows how they feel.




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24th December 2005, 12:29 AM



Guys I love everyone's Shayaris here...
You all absolutely ROCK

Though I can't write them
I love to read them..

Keep Writing everyone... 'bcoz we all love to read :d

~MAC


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aap sabh ko jo kabhi na kabhi kuch na kuch dil se nikal kar kagaaz par likthe hai, unko mein kudh tareef deena chaahtee hu. Hum parthe sabh ke shayri hai, par kabhi kabhi reply post nahin karthe. Yeh saach hai ke sabh ka hunsla barhana chayee, par mein sirf ithna kaho ge ke ke koi kuch reply karee ya na karee aap likhthee rahee. Hunsla ithnee jaldee nahin har the, aur yeh koi contest bhi nahin hai ke kyon acha likhtha hai ya nahin. Yeh tho kisse ne site banayee hai jo hum sabh ko maukha deethe hai dil ke kuch baath sunanee ko. Please contine to write no matter what it may be. Writting something drains the heart of some pain and lets one know that atleast someone knows how they feel.

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aap sabh ko jo kabhi na kabhi kuch na kuch dil se nikal kar kagaaz par likthe hai, unko mein kudh tareef deena chaahtee hu. Hum parthe sabh ke shayri hai, par kabhi kabhi reply post nahin karthe. Yeh saach hai ke sabh ka hunsla barhana chayee, par mein sirf ithna kaho ge ke ke koi kuch reply karee ya na karee aap likhthee rahee. Hunsla ithnee jaldee nahin har the, aur yeh koi contest bhi nahin hai ke kyon acha likhtha hai ya nahin. Yeh tho kisse ne site banayee hai jo hum sabh ko maukha deethe hai dil ke kuch baath sunanee ko. Please contine to write no matter what it may be. Writting something drains the heart of some pain and lets one know that atleast someone knows how they feel.

Chota sa dil
Jee Haa...you are absolutely right...keep writing...doesn't matter what anyone says! Most genuises did whatever they're famous for by fluke or by mistake!

   
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21st October 2007, 12:43 PM

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6th April 2008, 09:55 AM

adab dosto
men ne bade chao se sab ke jawabat padhe. mera to kahna he k ap log likhie or padhie aur dad bhi dijie. dad dene se hausla afzai hoti hai jo k shairi ka ek aham juzv he isi lie mushaire hote hen or vahan har sher par dad di jati he kisi par kam to kisi par ziyada.
mera yeh bhi manna he k padhna or rasmi wah wah ke sath sath agar apko kalam men koi kami ya beshi nazar aye to use ba adab ba mulahiza batane se na jhijhak karen ku k batane se hi ilm kii shama jalti he aur ham ek dusre se sikhenge to hi hamara kalyan hoga shero shairi ke medan men.
ho sakta he ap meri bat se sehmat an hon par aesa kahna mera farz banta ha so kah diya. chhama chaahunga agar koi gutaakhi ho gai ho to.
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U'R thought is very true.
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