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Pyar Ki sachai ......... - 7th August 2008, 03:00 PM

KehTe hai.. Dooriya pyar kam kar deTi hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Dooriyo ne pyar ko Tiguna kar diya..

KehTe hai.. Jhagde ho To pyar ke liye acha nahi..
Me kehTi hu.. Jhagdo ne hum dono ko aur kareeb la diya..

KehTe hai.. Pyar zahir karna zaroori hoTa hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Zuban se nahi, humne aankho se hi kaam liya..

KehTe hai.. Jalan hoTi hai To pyar nahi hoTa..
Me kehTi hu.. Jalan ne hi To gehre pyar, gehre rishTe ko janam diya..

KehTe hai.. Pyar ibaadaT hai, pooja hai bhagwan ki..
Me kehTi hu.. Khuda ka doosra naam pyar hai, To maine khuda ko maan liya..

KehTe hai.. Pyar me pagal phirTi hai
Me kehTi hu.. Is janam me pyar na kiya, To shayad kuch bhi na kiya..

KehTe hai.. Pyar ki sachayi dard hai, mayoosi hai...
Me kehTi hu.. Is dard me jiya, To sach me jiya, zindagi me kuch kiya..nm



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KehTe hai.. Dooriya pyar kam kar deTi hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Dooriyo ne pyar ko Tiguna kar diya..

bahut khoob ji......

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bas meter ka khyal rakhe
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KehTe hai.. Dooriya pyar kam kar deTi hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Dooriyo ne pyar ko Tiguna kar diya..

bahut khoob ji......

tiguna word is impressive ...........

bas meter ka khyal rakhe
sukriya janumanu ji aapke yeh id achha hai ...hume pasand aaye....meter ka matlab hume nehin maloom pls aap hume batadijiyega .....



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8th August 2008, 03:06 PM

Diya jee....bahut acche ahsaas hoti hai aapki shayri meiN ...aapko padna accha laga....yoon hi bazam ki ronak bane rahiye...!

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bahut gahre khayalo me khwabo me sawalo me
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KehTe hai.. Dooriya pyar kam kar deTi hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Dooriyo ne pyar ko Tiguna kar diya..

KehTe hai.. Jhagde ho To pyar ke liye acha nahi..
Me kehTi hu.. Jhagdo ne hum dono ko aur kareeb la diya..

KehTe hai.. Pyar zahir karna zaroori hoTa hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Zuban se nahi, humne aankho se hi kaam liya..

KehTe hai.. Jalan hoTi hai To pyar nahi hoTa..
Me kehTi hu.. Jalan ne hi To gehre pyar, gehre rishTe ko janam diya..

KehTe hai.. Pyar ibaadaT hai, pooja hai bhagwan ki..
Me kehTi hu.. Khuda ka doosra naam pyar hai, To maine khuda ko maan liya..

KehTe hai.. Pyar me pagal phirTi hai
Me kehTi hu.. Is janam me pyar na kiya, To shayad kuch bhi na kiya..

KehTe hai.. Pyar ki sachayi dard hai, mayoosi hai...
Me kehTi hu.. Is dard me jiya, To sach me jiya, zindagi me kuch kiya..nm


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bohat khoob janab kya baat hai app ki bohat post ki hai apne.khush raho hamesha hasti raho meri ye he dua hai apna khayal rakhna...

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Bhoole Hain Rafta Rafta Tumhe.. - 12th August 2008, 10:47 AM

Bhoole Hai Rafta Rafta Tumko Muddaton Me Hum...
Kishton Me Khudkhushi Ka Maza Humse Puchiye


ye sher kis ka hai,aap ne nahi likha magar jahan tak meri samajh hai,agar aap pahli line(misra)mein tum ko ki jagah TUMHE lagaati hain tabhi ye sher meter mein aata hai..koshish kar ke dekhiye..achcha khaasa sher hai..kisi ka bhi ho..is liye khud ko rok na paya.
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Bhoole Hai Rafta Rafta Tumko Muddaton Me Hum...
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ye sher kis ka hai,aap ne nahi likha magar jahan tak meri samajh hai,agar aap pahli line(misra)mein tum ko ki jagah TUMHE lagaati hain tabhi ye sher meter mein aata hai..koshish kar ke dekhiye..achcha khaasa sher hai..kisi ka bhi ho..is liye khud ko rok na paya.
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iltija aur ek aur ek aur tarmeem - 12th August 2008, 11:25 PM

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Please..mere naam ki sahi spelling hai PRASHANT.aap ne H bhula diya..diya se aage ye ummeed nahi..aur jahan aap ne LABZ likha hai use LAFZ likhen..LAFZ yaani shabd ya words.Aap bahut achchi cheezen bhejti hain..mujhe aap ki pasand par khushi hai...
Achcha padhiye..likhtee rahiye..aur aap ek din kmaal likhengi.yaqeen nahi hoga aap ko magar apni shuru ki likhi cheezon mein main ne itni technical galtiyan ki hain ki aaj unhe padh kar khud bura lagta hai..sachchi.
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Please..mere naam ki sahi spelling hai PRASHANT.aap ne H bhula diya..diya se aage ye ummeed nahi..aur jahan aap ne LABZ likha hai use LAFZ likhen..LAFZ yaani shabd ya words.Aap bahut achchi cheezen bhejti hain..mujhe aap ki pasand par khushi hai...
Achcha padhiye..likhtee rahiye..aur aap ek din kmaal likhengi.yaqeen nahi hoga aap ko magar apni shuru ki likhi cheezon mein main ne itni technical galtiyan ki hain ki aaj unhe padh kar khud bura lagta hai..sachchi.
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Urdu meN jo shero-shaayri ham karte haiN yaa phir koii Ghazal likhte haiN to ek baat ko zehan meN rakhni paDti hai aur woh hai metre jisko Urdu meN 'bahar' yaa 'behar' kahte haiN. Ek rythm yaani ki lay jo hotaa hai misroN meN usiiko behar kahte haiN. Iske alaawaa aur bhi kayii baateN hotii haiN jin ko samajhne meN thoDi diqqat ho sakti hai. Lekin aap ko jaanate hue ham daawe ke saath kah sakte haiN ki aap bahut jald inn sabhi baatoN ko parakh leNgi.

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Urdu meN jo shero-shaayri ham karte haiN yaa phir koii Ghazal likhte haiN to ek baat ko zehan meN rakhni paDti hai aur woh hai metre jisko Urdu meN 'bahar' yaa 'behar' kahte haiN. Ek rythm yaani ki lay jo hotaa hai misroN meN usiiko behar kahte haiN. Iske alaawaa aur bhi kayii baateN hotii haiN jin ko samajhne meN thoDi diqqat ho sakti hai. Lekin aap ko jaanate hue ham daawe ke saath kah sakte haiN ki aap bahut jald inn sabhi baatoN ko parakh leNgi.

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hi diya sorry maine hi meter ki baat ki thi ..

waise i m impressed ki tumne sabki baat ko dhyaan se suna......

meter ke bare mai sab bata hi chuke hai.............

main b bahar ke bare mai nahi janta
main abs yahi kahunga ki

misre ka har lafz ek flow mai ho .. lafzo ke bazan ka khyaal rakho
unki tabiyat ka khyaal rakho

sound ... words ki sound ka khyaal........

koe word humko pause ki sound deta hai koe... full stop ki kisi mai flow hota hai doosri line ko jodne ka

kaise akhtar........... isme last mai r word pe toung rukti hai.. ye upar se neechye aane ki yani full stop ki sound deta hai...

iase hi misre yani sher ki line maien word ko kaise flow mai rakhna hai iska dhyaan

aur sher ki line word ke hissab se barabar ho .. thoda bahut chalta hai ..
( as we are not trained with grammar of meter and technical term)

har misra barabar aur ghazal ka har sher barabar ho bas

itna b kaafi hai

maine unko b padha hai jo meter aur baki cheezo mai abhut perfect hote hai lekin woh bas technical hi rah jate hai
emotion aur thought se bahut peechey chhooot jate hai

hope ki kahi galat na kaha ho
mai galat b ho sakta hun.........

aur kisi se seekhne se acha hai study ur self ..........
sabko padho
unke style pe study karo.. that it

keep it

hope u will correct me too

do take care

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hi diya sorry maine hi meter ki baat ki thi ..

waise i m impressed ki tumne sabki baat ko dhyaan se suna......

meter ke bare mai sab bata hi chuke hai.............

main b bahar ke bare mai nahi janta
main abs yahi kahunga ki

misre ka har lafz ek flow mai ho .. lafzo ke bazan ka khyaal rakho
unki tabiyat ka khyaal rakho

sound ... words ki sound ka khyaal........

koe word humko pause ki sound deta hai koe... full stop ki kisi mai flow hota hai doosri line ko jodne ka

kaise akhtar........... isme last mai r word pe toung rukti hai.. ye upar se neechye aane ki yani full stop ki sound deta hai...

iase hi misre yani sher ki line maien word ko kaise flow mai rakhna hai iska dhyaan

aur sher ki line word ke hissab se barabar ho .. thoda bahut chalta hai ..
( as we are not trained with grammar of meter and technical term)

har misra barabar aur ghazal ka har sher barabar ho bas

itna b kaafi hai

maine unko b padha hai jo meter aur baki cheezo mai abhut perfect hote hai lekin woh bas technical hi rah jate hai
emotion aur thought se bahut peechey chhooot jate hai

hope ki kahi galat na kaha ho
mai galat b ho sakta hun.........

aur kisi se seekhne se acha hai study ur self ..........
sabko padho
unke style pe study karo.. that it

keep it

hope u will correct me too

do take care

janumanu.............

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ye sher kis ka hai,aap ne nahi likha magar jahan tak meri samajh hai,agar aap pahli line(misra)mein tum ko ki jagah TUMHE lagaati hain tabhi ye sher meter mein aata hai..koshish kar ke dekhiye..achcha khaasa sher hai..kisi ka bhi ho..is liye khud ko rok na paya.
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Prashant jee:

Namaste:

sahii farmaaya hai aap ne, 'tum ko' ki 'tumhe' istemaa karne par yeh meter me.n aa raha hai, par agar ham 'tumhe' ki jagah 'unhe' istemaal karte hai.n to sher aur bhi pyaara lagegaa..

Bhoole Hai Rafta Rafta unhe Muddaton Me Hum...
Kishton Me Khudkhushi Ka Maza Humse Puchiye


kya khayaal hai aap ka


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yahan mera kya khayal koi nehin puchhta ........

sukriya mayank ji ..yeh bhi achha hai ....hume pasand hai .......


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Prashant jee:

Namaste:

sahii farmaaya hai aap ne, 'tum ko' ki 'tumhe' istemaa karne par yeh meter me.n aa raha hai, par agar ham 'tumhe' ki jagah 'unhe' istemaal karte hai.n to sher aur bhi pyaara lagegaa..

Bhoole Hai Rafta Rafta unhe Muddaton Me Hum...
Kishton Me Khudkhushi Ka Maza Humse Puchiye


kya khayaal hai aap ka


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KehTe hai.. Dooriya pyar kam kar deTi hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Dooriyo ne pyar ko Tiguna kar diya..

KehTe hai.. Jhagde ho To pyar ke liye acha nahi..
Me kehTi hu.. Jhagdo ne hum dono ko aur kareeb la diya..

KehTe hai.. Pyar zahir karna zaroori hoTa hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Zuban se nahi, humne aankho se hi kaam liya..

KehTe hai.. Jalan hoTi hai To pyar nahi hoTa..
Me kehTi hu.. Jalan ne hi To gehre pyar, gehre rishTe ko janam diya..

KehTe hai.. Pyar ibaadaT hai, pooja hai bhagwan ki..
Me kehTi hu.. Khuda ka doosra naam pyar hai, To maine khuda ko maan liya..

KehTe hai.. Pyar me pagal phirTi hai
Me kehTi hu.. Is janam me pyar na kiya, To shayad kuch bhi na kiya..

KehTe hai.. Pyar ki sachayi dard hai, mayoosi hai...
Me kehTi hu.. Is dard me jiya, To sach me jiya, zindagi me kuch kiya..nm


Nice one diya.....
KehTe hai.. Pyar ki sachayi dard hai, mayoosi hai...
Me kehTi hu.. Is dard me jiya, To sach me jiya, zindagi me kuch kiya
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Nice one diya.....
KehTe hai.. Pyar ki sachayi dard hai, mayoosi hai...
Me kehTi hu.. Is dard me jiya, To sach me jiya, zindagi me kuch kiya
ye lines bahut hi sweet lagi...sweety
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KehTe hai.. Dooriya pyar kam kar deTi hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Dooriyo ne pyar ko Tiguna kar diya..

KehTe hai.. Jhagde ho To pyar ke liye acha nahi..
Me kehTi hu.. Jhagdo ne hum dono ko aur kareeb la diya..

KehTe hai.. Pyar zahir karna zaroori hoTa hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Zuban se nahi, humne aankho se hi kaam liya..

KehTe hai.. Jalan hoTi hai To pyar nahi hoTa..
Me kehTi hu.. Jalan ne hi To gehre pyar, gehre rishTe ko janam diya..

KehTe hai.. Pyar ibaadaT hai, pooja hai bhagwan ki..
Me kehTi hu.. Khuda ka doosra naam pyar hai, To maine khuda ko maan liya..

KehTe hai.. Pyar me pagal phirTi hai
Me kehTi hu.. Is janam me pyar na kiya, To shayad kuch bhi na kiya..

KehTe hai.. Pyar ki sachayi dard hai, mayoosi hai...
Me kehTi hu.. Is dard me jiya, To sach me jiya, zindagi me kuch kiya..nm

diya ji.....
aap jo bhi likhte ho...... bohut meetha likhte ho....... ab tak to main aapki dil se fan ho chuki hu....... wow kya asardaar shabdon ka prayog karto ho....... aapke lavz mere dil ko cheerte hue nikal jaati hai........
really u rock man........


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Saans leti hu to zakhmon ko hawa lagti hain........
Kabhi raazi to kabhi khafaa lagti hain..........
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diya ji.....
aap jo bhi likhte ho...... bohut meetha likhte ho....... ab tak to main aapki dil se fan ho chuki hu....... wow kya asardaar shabdon ka prayog karto ho....... aapke lavz mere dil ko cheerte hue nikal jaati hai........
really u rock man........
Sukriya ji ..hume bahat khusi hui aapko humare nagme pasand hai....hum koi sayar nehin bas thori eheshash ko lafz main batane ki koshish kar rahe hain.....



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